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Mc Mystique vs (X)eed
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 07-14-05 at 09:13 AM Must drop verse in 40 minutes after check in. |
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i fucked up the last 1.. soo accpetin this 1 aiight |
(X)eed has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-14-05 08:45 AM.
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Mc Mystique has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-14-05 08:45 AM.
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Yo
When this wack flows its coincidental// 10 year olds flowed betta with outa beat of instrumentals// wit more losses then wins, Claimin he got hip-hop fundamentalz// your 13th loss is what im bout to *sent*ence*you// He calls me out thinkin he got this E.Z.// but your mom told me different,when she was Plea*sin me// Why you think you can rap cause oyu talk that fake Gangsta shit// You the b the only one leaving a battle with a split lip// Face it g, its over for you....thts it // So grab ya pen an paper, Cause this aint da last time your bein schooled kid// So if ya plan was ta beat me an smoke some weed // Well ill have to disagree cuz i came to show you up now my goal was xeed'ed |
Got his name mixed up, should have been called MC Mistake
His mum lost him before he was even born and Misplaced "mystique" me to wat, lookin threw the crystal ball for future A.F.V's ...............ooops his lyrics won it for the "blooper" The boy loves rap now how can we get this child to win? use your "magic" on this battle and use it for your next loss in The Ranks are increasing soo is the boys style for "gamin" STRIKE 3, your OUT...... and close the door you came in hes actin like Houdini was his uncle and they were related i'll pull this "Rabbit" out my ass,& he still be "truthfully naked' the dullest in the lot, been known as the ugly duckling His Wings have Clipped, & his ver-ses, are quite "revolting" You be crazy and still wont get no Insane Label time to murder this baby and put him to his Cradle The bitch be pullin..............wackness straight outta his cap his rhymes wouldnt be "pimped" even if Xzibit helped this Kat |
Xplanations A.f.Vs = americas funniest home videos... and they have this przie pool 4 the best bloopers
The way i say Rabbit i reffer to Eminem from 8 mile... anda rabbit from a hat like a magiican.... The ugly ducklling line is ...cuz if u people have read the book ..the duck is apparently revolting.. the rest you figure....... dnt Fuckin vote if u dnt understand |
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upppin for some votes.... Much appreciated... |
Voted For: (X)eed
xceed got this with better punches....and metas and personals, basically he came harder.... Mc- you need to get a lil better rhyme scheme and work on hard hitting punches come up with witty metaphors....play of his name or his sig, get creative but overall you will elevate soon v/ xceed for a better battle verse |
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aiiiight... uppppin 4 votes |
Voted For: (X)eed
Punches~X Flow~X Metaphors~X Structure~X Vocab~X The reason Xeec took this was because his verse came harder. Without any dickriding shit, i'll lay it out flat. The punches were direct and personals. His Closer was nice with the whole xzibit thing. The opener was descent and MC Mystique was ok, but his flow was more talking about the other emcee than tryin to sswing at him. nice battle both of ya'll, keep up. |
Voted For: (X)eed
(x)eed wins..... pretty funny opener....... that afv's line was funny and that "go out the door that you came in was a bit bullshit but it was quite funny and effective from about line 8-14 was a bit crap but then your last line picked it up a little mc mystic...... You have NEWB written all over your face... Just having mc in your name makes you look and sound like a newb...... and having the fucking // shit at the end of your lines just fucks you up even more!!!!!!!! get you shit sorted.... you have no wordplay.... your lines are crap....... peace |
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uppin this |
Voted For: Mc Mystique
nice flow i like it Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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fuckin newbish herb uppppin this battle... uppiin |
Voted For: (X)eed
flow-MC personals-X multis-X punches-X creativity-X enjoyment-X structure-X fav line The Ranks are increasing soo is the boys style for "gamin" STRIKE 3, your OUT...... and close the door you came in hes actin like Houdini was his uncle and they were related i'll pull this "Rabbit" out my ass,& he still be "truthfully naked' this was a good battle but X outshined you in this battle vote-X R/F or this vote will be removed http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=196824 ^^^^im up 4-1 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
and explain your vote the same way i did in this battle ok
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uppppppppppppppin all votes will b returned... |
Voted For: (X)eed
Yo When this wack flows its coincidental// 10 year olds flowed betta with outa beat of instrumentals// ^^^whack as fuq....get complex wit more losses then wins, Claimin he got hip-hop fundamentalz// your 13th loss is what im bout to *sent*ence*you// ^^wtf?....you think that bullshit's wordplay? He calls me out thinkin he got this E.Z.// but your mom told me different,when she was Plea*sin me// ^^^why separate plea*sin?Not changin anything Why you think you can rap cause oyu talk that fake Gangsta shit// You the b the only one leaving a battle with a split lip// ^^Not a punch Face it g, its over for you....thts it // So grab ya pen an paper, Cause this aint da last time your bein schooled kid// ^^^stop!!!!!Just diss him.... So if ya plan was ta beat me an smoke some weed // Well ill have to disagree cuz i came to show you up now my goal was xeed'ed ^^^shut up.... Newb structure.Weak punches.Embarrasing attempt at wordplay.No flow.Change everything.Go grab a pen&a pad and practice.Find a whole new style because this one is not gonna win you shit.Some of your lines didn;t make sence.And don't glorify urself or talk about killin him.Just trow punches. Got his name mixed up, should have been called MC Mistake His mum lost him before he was even born and Misplaced ^^1st line was good....2nd was too basic "mystique" me to wat, lookin threw the crystal ball for future A.F.V's ...............ooops his lyrics won it for the "blooper" ^^^NO....wordplay or metas.... The boy loves rap now how can we get this child to win? use your "magic" on this battle and use it for your next loss in ^^^NO...... The Ranks are increasing soo is the boys style for "gamin" STRIKE 3, your OUT...... and close the door you came in ^^Not a punch..... hes actin like Houdini was his uncle and they were related i'll pull this "Rabbit" out my ass,& he still be "truthfully naked' ^^umm.....Ok...I guess the dullest in the lot, been known as the ugly duckling His Wings have Clipped, & his ver-ses, are quite "revolting" ^^decent...... You be crazy and still wont get no Insane Label time to murder this baby and put him to his Cradle ^^^Not a punch The bitch be pullin..............wackness straight outta his cap his rhymes wouldnt be "pimped" even if Xzibit helped this Kat ^^^Ur best line....though not all that Well....you won easily....cause you battlin a newb who's culeless and doesn't know at a punch is.Next time...try to add some wordplay or metas.Make your rhymes more complex.U gotta be indirect when sayin shit.Like..instead a sayin... "eat box a fruit loops"...say..... "eat cereal with parrot on cover' Get wat im sayin?It hard to understand but if ya work at it...it'll come.Read tutorials.Get some word fission and shit.Try to jot in some multis to upp ya flow..... Vote-Xeed |
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Uppin This.... Let Me Kill This Herb.... Pplz |
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Voted For: (X)eed
alrite ur personals werent that good but he didnt have any and he needs to work on that ur vocab could be improved as well as ur metas but good verse overall mc ur structure needs help so do ur punches and metas elevate good battle |
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