PUSS-C vs KOOL COL-B
 

Battle Rules:

10 - 12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

werd

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-17-05 at 04:20 PM

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nah son/.........make it 6 lines..................

PUSS-C has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-14-05 04:26 PM.

yeah mayn, u can just go 6 if u want, werd
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Kool's records like asses made a rocks,he can't spank it
&It notmy fault,he stay on top guys,like he was a blank-it
Ur songs lie like sayin ya had tits on you,we all know it's not true
Closest you eva get to complements is when someone diss-like you
He's a dead lion,there's no more gore,we don't hear his roar
Like veteran carpentars,Kool's rhymes leave us board/bored
He's gay,I'ma man,yet I got this bitch in front me on his knees
Kool could fuck Gandi,yet his shit would neva be a master-peace
Talkin shit in LL,like ya gonna throw me over your head
Only thing Kools holds above ya shoulders is his legs

Fuck it....I went 10 already...just post ya shit.............

damn.........post ur shit faggot........................

KOOL COL-B has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-14-05 07:38 PM.

n werd, i alredy know i used alot of gunplay, werd

this kid iz wack az fuck, c, i got better raps
n yeah i hate puss-c... but i aint wearin leather chaps
ima put red dots on puss-c....
........ no, not a sexually transmitted disease
werd....... i aim my scope on ya fitted n sqeeze
he'll b muthaphukkin fallin 2 tha ground, im serious
puss-c gushin blood, n i aint talkin bout a period
he just prooves i dont need sex 2 have pussy on my dick, chea
u say i d/r eazy? spucca please, click here
u betta do wut he sez, shut tha fuck up or else...
http://www.afghania.com/modules/My_...0gun%20down.jpg
u screw pussy? yes? aight, then go fuck yourself

werd

damn.........post ur shit faggot........................

werd

Voted For: KOOL COL-B

col-b got this one because of his closer. his punches werent all that good but they were decent. i liked the personals. although he used kinda played lines, they were better becuase they were actual personals... pussy just had a whole list of played lines like that board/bored line... col-b's decent drop was a lot better vs. pussy's played drop. tha pic and the closer from Col-b were mostly what gave him the win...
RTF-
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=184736

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PUSS-C disgusted me in this case....and it wasnt even a fat chick

Voted For: KOOL COL-B

im feel hella sorry for you Pussy,dog at first i thought you had a chance,but damn Kool fucked ya ass up

Stucture=puss
creativity=kool
word play=kool
metas=kool
punchlines=kool
good shit kid

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stupid puss-c ass bitch dissin Kool, and now he gets his ass kicked in a battle against him lmao, fuck you puss-c

uppin fo vizotes, werd
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Voted For: KOOL COL-B

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fuck dnt tell me u actually killed the kat..u fuck asss

but the vote goes to KoolC... had more personals and better metas...... better flow and harder vocab.... P.. you need to werk on ur punches .. need to make it more personal... good battle here....

fuck dnt kill the kat.. ?? did u /??

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Voted For: KOOL COL-B

Kool Col B
this kid iz wack az fuck, c, i got better raps
n yeah i hate puss-c... but i aint wearin leather chaps
Lol, filler in the first line.
ima put red dots on puss-c....
........ no, not a sexually transmitted disease
Lol, nice wordplay on his name.
werd....... i aim my scope on ya fitted n sqeeze
he'll b muthaphukkin fallin 2 tha ground, im serious
No.
puss-c gushin blood, n i aint talkin bout a period
he just prooves i dont need sex 2 have pussy on my dick, chea
LMAO. Good punch.
u say i d/r eazy? spucca please, click here
u betta do wut he sez, shut tha fuck up or else...
u screw pussy? yes? aight, then go fuck yourself
How did you find that link? Ok closer here.

Overall, too much gunplay. I know you said that, but I figured I would remind you. Work on more creative personals, cuz yours were starting to get old. Poor pussy. :(

I-Cunt-Troll
Kool's records like asses made a rocks,he can't spank it
&It notmy fault,he stay on top guys,like he was a blank-it
Ok punch. Wording could have been better.
Ur songs lie like sayin ya had tits on you,we all know it's not true
Closest you eva get to complements is when someone diss-like you
No. Bad punch and fake personal.
He's a dead lion,there's no more gore,we don't hear his roar
Like veteran carpentars,Kool's rhymes leave us board/bored
Bad similies.
He's gay,I'ma man,yet I got this bitch in front me on his knees
Kool could fuck Gandi,yet his shit would neva be a master-peace
Gay punch filler. Fake personal, wordplay was ok.
Talkin shit in LL,like ya gonna throw me over your head
Only thing Kools holds above ya shoulders is his legs
Gay punch again.

Overall, the potential is there, but your wording and similies ruin what could be a good verse. Try better personals and more wordplay. Though your master peace wordplay was decent.

My vote goes to kool col B for punches and personals. Both need to work on wordplay.

v- Kool Col B

Voted For: KOOL COL-B

Yep well structure on the personals of punchlines was better in the areas of disses and pictures.....n shit

v/that guy
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Voted For: KOOL COL-B

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