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Open Your Eyes Feat. Sabotage
Black=-Cezar-
Navy=Sabotage Started off struggling,Father left at a wrong age
Im still stumbling,The world makes me feel caged Bombs keep dropping,And I cant figure out why? Hearts still stopping,Seeing Innocent People die Children at the tender age of 8 among these corpses Forced to live a life of crime cause parents werent supportive Its either run the streets and emulate their favorite rappers They stay by the heat,cuz to them life isnt a factor Nobody took the time to teach em or take em under their wings Eventually growin old and influenced by the lies they see on TV Take time to make decissions,To see if it is worth Living The world needs fixin,Firetrucks driving by burning buildings If you hear this,Dont be like them and throw away your life Step out the dark into the light,so the world can see you shine Crips and Bloods,Preps and Thugs,Black and White Theres know love,Except for putting out the light of a life Lettin our guards down in hopes that our hands break our fall The racial walls,that MLK broke years ago still seperate us all Imagine what he would say,if he seen the state we're in today Bet he would say,Damn I guess god made a mistake taking me away http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2292932 |
yeah this was good, great flow, vocab was good, both flowed together very well, good collab, keep it up
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thnx for the feed...werdizzle
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thanks a lot for the feed..........
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bump............
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That was one of the best OM's I read on RV since I was here I swear that was hot I was really feelin that topic cause the shit yall was sayin was true deep stuff foe this is a 9/10
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bump like mofo.............
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bump like I walk in the club all eyes on me...werdizzle
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hot shit man, fo' real. it switched between the both of you nicely, managing to flow well throughout ur piece. it woz structured well, and you had a good use of vocab. gud piece
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yeh this woz hot shit good topic stayed on topic erm i liked this a lot kept me reading gud stay up 9/10
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damn these nerds freak harder than a bird's beak I can't coorect these so homey do you peck trees? so -Cezar-you on a long route with the wrong clout and the fun narrows like gun barrels KABOOM? got a bundle of funk while you fumble chump but why would you grumble punk?
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^^^ok....translation?.....bump
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Nobody took the time to teach em or take em under their wings
Eventually growin old and influenced by the lies they see on TV ^yes they do.... ive seen concepts lyke this done plenties....but i do say...yu guys did the topic justice....props....i lyke the way it was organized....flow was onpoint....content was good.... keep doin yus IMMA GURL, btw...damn it!!! |
yeah yeah.......thanks for the feed from everyone
..even MaddRapper..even though we dont kno what u talkin about |
^werdizzle............keep em comin
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bump.....wheres there Hall Of Fame nominatons.....
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^^^bump........
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bump....feed please!!!
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yo this was some hot shit homie real it was ill nice alteration between the both of ya'll and the lyrics was original shit homie 9/10 homie real peace
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^werdizzle thnx...
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smoking with vibes open my eyes now joking with guys and no fucking replies// guess i have to plead for a favor need good behavior proceed with my pager dang got her phone number she want this long cucumber// but as her lover got use a rubber because in a court of law non child support is a flaw and thats raw dawg
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can u for once at least some feed...................
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dang don't be greedy go tmore feedback on this one than I got on the last five dawg
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This was a pretty good drop..liked the mixture of both people spitten in one verse...but i felt it could have been alot longer.... Wordplay and vocab was very good..and was on point... Imagery was good.. Overall nice job.. and good feeling' in this peice...keep it up
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thanks for the feed....keep it comin....
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b.a.c.k.....bump
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