Lyrical Mage vs C-Hood
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 6-12 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting


verse due 1 hour after check-in aight lets get to it

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-18-05 at 10:55 AM

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C-Hood has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-15-05 10:57 AM.

*won one battle against tommy gunz
*lost to one mic, over dose, and effect


lacin up ya jordans only way you touch "one mic"(mike)/
you gettin a 'over dose' from my lyrics so you feelin the 'effect's cuz i'm that tyght/

forget football....you aren't able to pass my line of scr'image'/
and ya skills are unable to be seen cuz they are a lyrical i'mage'/

i be 'high' on them 'tree's like a christamas star/*
you found in my hood n imma treat you like my avatar/
punches landin and they come bright like lights on a police car/
they'll make you 'sit' 'calm'(com) and that i'll be the only way you'll become a t.v. star/

when you see me spar...you betta duck ya dumb fuck/
ya rhymes are forced..imma catch you in new jersey to see how your rhymes are 'stuck'/**

* yall know on chritmas how yall put the star on the top of the tree?!?!
**new jersey NETS- don't get it don't vote

lyrical mage has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-15-05 07:22 PM.

told hood to jack some people but dont get your shoes muddy
but kid rather stay home and get cream from jackin his buddy

ready to die? let a nigga like me set the date
bring my mac-10 and let him rise as a real flyweight

c wished he lived in atlanta so he put down b-town
yet again another n-sync wannabe just like o-town

c thinks its fun to fuck Crack sniffin bitches that look good
but gets stds like that nigga on Boyz In The HOOD

nigga you aint shit 16 and still trying to hustle
last time this nigga tried he pulled a calve muscle

kid using pre written and thinks i cant stop it
but ive heard better lines from andy milinokis

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yo sorry for being late i got off when you didnt answer

Voted For: lyrical mage

lm. eh an alright battle but i really think you could have done alot more with it. the only thing i was really feeling was your closer. but otherwise you need to up your vocab and work on your structure alot more. the wordplay was alright.. there were not that many metas. i think one the o-town line. but besides that an alright verse. just work on your stuff a little more and elevate..
c-hood- this was all over the place. and you have alot of work to do . umm first off if you need to explain it.. don't use it, the rhyme scheme was very forced so the flow wasnt as on target as LM's overall though you have alot of work ahead of you also next time run a spell check. it dosent help the cause when you mispell a few words. ok verse but needs alot of work

for having the better verse-LM

uppin on this right hear ya heard kid its the rock......SIKE!

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Voted For: lyrical mage

ur flow was better but its still pretty basic work on it
work on ur metaphores
personals too
try out for cs
c hood work on ur structure u have alot of filler in some of ur lines ur metaphoresw are probably some of the worst ive seen u have no good personals and u p ur vocab

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uppin on this yo

Voted For: lyrical mage

told hood to jack some people but dont get your shoes muddy
but kid rather stay home and get cream from jackin his buddy

vs.

nothin

this was a weak battle....but lyrical mage had like one decent punch therefore he wins...but seriously both need to get more creative and elevate...think more witty

uppin on this

Voted For: C-Hood

C-Hood
Ok first of all.... don't seperate your bars, it ruins the flow. Second watch out for the self-glory. 3rd some of your bars were streatched.... those are the things to watch out for in the future. Ok your opener was pretty good, nice personal. Your closer was kinda stretched. Your other bars were pretty good, hard hitting and creative. Good personals in your verse too

lyrical mage
ok... same thing with you, don't seperate your bars, it ruins the flow to your verse. Now your opener was lackin a little bit and your closer was kinda self-glory, but funny as hell with that Andy Milinokis (i thought i was the only one who watched that show). Your other bars where alright but some were to short to make it a nice hard punch... work on tweakin your lines to make them harder hitting

This was feedback posted for C-Hood
 

shit homie u could elevate.........puches were weak........structure iffy but keep elevatiin homie!ayo battle me

uppin on this

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Voted For: C-Hood

kinda of a weak battle here no offense but not alot of punches nad personals jsut self glory need to stop the self glory.......and kinda some wordplay by C but LM u coulda dont better seen better from u u got potential so keep elevatin but this battle ill give to C-hood cuz has betta flow to it and gots sum punches connectin but aint hittin hard so my v/ c-hood......keep elevatin yall.....1......

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Voted For: C-Hood

Lyrical Mage:
You came out with loads of good rhyming skiils and verbal skills but didnt come out on top as C-Hood did..

C-Hood:
Although you lost to One Mic, Overdose and Effect...
i could truly see that you've elevated your game up a noch......
good opening and closure but bit weak with punches and multis...

Punches: None
Multis: None
Rhyming skills: Lyrical Mage
Verbal skills: C-Hood

overall vote goes to: C-Hood

uppin on this right here yo heard me nig

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Voted For: lyrical mage

Aye you had better punch lines and better messeges that boyzinthehood shit was hot you won hommie keep it up fam

Voted For: lyrical mage

C-Hood: Nothing hit hard, had some good similes in there though. Your structure ain't too good, try keeping the lines about the same length, as a couple of lines were really stretched. Work on coming up with better concepts as well.

Lyrical Mage: Nothing really hit except that Andy Milinokis line in my opinion, which basically won you this battle as both of you were even in everything else. It was the best line of the battle, the concept was real nice, but it could have been worded so much better to hit harder, still the best line though.

v/ Lyrical Mage