Blac-Out vs C-Hood
 

Battle Rules:

10-20 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

1hour check, 2hour drop


Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-15-05 at 12:33 PM

Must drop verse in 120 minutes after check in.

Blac-Out has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-15-05 11:34 AM.

C-Hood has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-15-05 11:41 AM.

*he lost to some guy named Thewackestmc and Mizz Fyre*
* he won agianst so guy named A-Game*


you second in line to me but you not that far/
if you divide you wins by your loses you'll find out who you are(2/4=2...he is number 2 next to me...get it)

you say your back...but no one ever new you was gone/
wit my lyrics they do matrix stunts like choke you wit a cordless phone/

why post when everyone knows that you can't beat me/
its for sure that you garbage...you was herbed by the wackestmc/

thats a shame...wit my keyboard and fingers I be bashin lames/
you should know bout fiya cuz Mizz Fyre showed you her flames/

yo talk smack and that'll make me bring the 'blac-'out'/
it'll make you 'blac' out and show you what blacks bout/

the way i do mc's they say its a shame/
playin hoops and gettin a good grade on paper you still couldn't bring yo A-Game/*

ya body i'll be dismantled when i squeeze the pump/
forget chewin....they gone use a straw when they feed ya lunch!!!/

* I said playin hoops=game...and getting a good grade on a paper which is an A...put it together you got A-game

see hood........, you just aint nuttin buh a bitch whore
runnin ya lip, is the type of shit, that i got clips for
so dont even step foward, i get enuff of this shit
act slick, then ill leave a slug, stuck in ya lip
that snub'll just spit, if you act like you da shit in the streets
you aint a hustler, nigga ur profession is gettin police
im equipped wit the heat, i stay wit a gat in my palm
and if you dont wanna get shot wit it, then fall back and b calm
if you dont kno about me, then its best that u research
cus ill leave pot holes in ya chest and ya t-shirt
wen i let the heat burst
i use to think other niggas on Rv was wack, buh now i see that C's worst
so u need to get a tutor, as soon as possible
cus otherwise, urll be in hospital, as soon as i pop at you
dont try to fuck wit me, just keep ya shit in order
cus the only way urll beat me is if i write ur rhymes for ya
try to step then ima destroy ya, so dont try to be hood
so my best advice for ya bitch ass is to be good

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This was feedback posted for Blac-Out
 

blac out .. has betta format and wording so my vote is for him

Voted For: Blac-Out

ight this was kinda a close battle.

hood had some played out lines and like the 1st one was wack, if u have to exlpain it then it aint good naw mean.
stucture was poor and i counldnt picture this flowing nice.
Blacout nice multies. not too much wordplay but the multies made it flow really nice, good structure.

blaccout had better lyrics and flow.

good lookin, uppin............................................. ..

Voted For: C-Hood

My Vote is C-Hood, he came harder wit the punchlines... but Blac-out had better wordplay and structure in my opinion. But my vote is C-hood.... No Hate

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Voted For: C-Hood

You had good structure and openings....
but you came in a bit weak on the closure

ya body i'll be dismantled when i squeeze the pump/
forget chewin....they gone use a straw when they feed ya lunch!!!/
i guess this was aiight

you second in line to me but you not that far/
if you divide you wins by your loses you'll find out who you are(2/4=2...he is number 2 next to me...get it)
a bit weak....need to elevate

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Voted For: Blac-Out

Blac-Out took this shit..

Voted For: Blac-Out

yo that was hot ...cuz a nigga like me from the hood ...dont know if you are but thats real nice ...dont get it twicted its not all that but its good...i like a that gun talk wit the slugs ...next time come up with some better ish tho

thanks...................uppin ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Voted For: C-Hood

see hood........, you just aint nuttin buh a bitch whore
runnin ya lip, is the type of shit, that i got clips for
^^Not much of a punch here...4/10
so dont even step foward, i get enuff of this shit
act slick, then ill leave a slug, stuck in ya lip
^^not much of a punch here neither..this is gangsta talk...not punches..4/10
that snub'll just spit, if you act like you da shit in the streets
you aint a hustler, nigga ur profession is gettin police
^^basic here....5/10
im equipped wit the heat, i stay wit a gat in my palm
and if you dont wanna get shot wit it, then fall back and b calm
^^still...this is gangsta talk...4/10
if you dont kno about me, then its best that u research
cus ill leave pot holes in ya chest and ya t-shirt
^^c'mon..this gangsta talk still...3/10
wen i let the heat burst
i use to think other niggas on Rv was wack, buh now i see that C's worst
^^OK punch for once...6/10
so u need to get a tutor, as soon as possible
cus otherwise, urll be in hospital, as soon as i pop at you
^^poor rhyming here..still wit gangsta talk...3/10
dont try to fuck wit me, just keep ya shit in order
cus the only way urll beat me is if i write ur rhymes for ya
^^not much of a punch....3/10
try to step then ima destroy ya, so dont try to be hood
so my best advice for ya bitch ass is to be good
^^again...punch ...not gangsta talk..4/10

OK...more than half of your verse consisted of gangsta talk.That talking about killin him n shit is good for a set-up or filler...but not as a punch.That punch is sopposed to diss.Had some ite multis at start like in the opener.But then you had poor rhyming like in that 2nd to last bar.order/for ya?possible/pop at you?Only punch I really saw was that C's worst one.So work on punches..a lot.

you second in line to me but you not that far/
if you divide you wins by your loses you'll find out who you are(2/4=2...he is number 2 next to me...get it)
^^hmm....creative here...7/10
you say your back...but no one ever new you was gone/
wit my lyrics they do matrix stunts like choke you wit a cordless phone/
^^poor rhyming...gone/phone?...n not much of a punch..in set-up..all no one know you shit is played..3/10
why post when everyone knows that you can't beat me/
its for sure that you garbage...you was herbed by the wackestmc/
^^BAsic....4/10
thats a shame...wit my keyboard and fingers I be bashin lames/
you should know bout fiya cuz Mizz Fyre showed you her flames/
^^NO....3/10
yo talk smack and that'll make me bring the 'blac-'out'/
it'll make you 'blac' out and show you what blacks bout/
^^said blac too much...but still a personal..5/10
the way i do mc's they say its a shame/
playin hoops and gettin a good grade on paper you still couldn't bring yo A-Game/*
^^I see where you going with this...but it ain't connecting..5/10
ya body i'll be dismantled when i squeeze the pump/
forget chewin....they gone use a straw when they feed ya lunch!!!/
^^MEh...4/10

Ok..you also need to work on your rhyming n punches.That 2nd bar...phone n gone doesn't rhyme together very well.Ur opener was your best line.Never seen shit line that used as a punch.It's good you got an idea of what a punch is n your'e not self glorifing or gangsta talking.SO you got my vote..but if Montana actaully dissed..he woulda had this.U still need work.

Vote-C-Hood
RTF

Voted For: Blac-Out

C-hood:
Not a good verse, wasnt feeling the seperation of bars...Few hard hitters tho, Closer was good, an you opened ya verse better than Blac-out too....Structure was awful, an wordplay was nothin too, kind of basic, Need to be more creative an use ya punches more efictely, good attempt tho

Blac-out:

better verse from you, Puns were straight, opener was weak tho, Could of used the clip line more effectively, Turned it into a punch instead of just gunplay, but other then that, not much i can fault, you get my vote homie....

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Vote=Blac-out, more consistancy in his drop.

Voted For: C-Hood

yo c-hood the flow was off but ur were more creative and had the overall better verse...v/c-hood...rtf and vote on ma battles against ddot shadow unrestricted and scarface...HOLLA BACK AT SHYA BOY!!!