.Barz Of Steel. vs Opt1k
 

Battle Rules:

4 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Explain Your Votes...

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-15-05 at 01:30 PM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

opt1k has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-15-05 01:02 PM.

check it homie i accept it so i'll drop homie peace!!!!!

.Barz Of Steel. has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-15-05 01:03 PM.

Good luck...........

barz of steel. vs opt1k
 

check it homie i accept it so i'll drop homie peace!!!!!

or shit you go first homie i'll peep it!!!!!!!!!!!

nevermind ill drop it originality homie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Aight, Short and Sweet...

This fag thinks he's dope? Well I'm stopping the confusion
Cuz him being ill, well thats just one of "Opt1kals illusions" *
Dude acts like he's the shit, but forreal, he's softer than pillow's be
So I'll "Bash His Brains With A Guitar"......................................
That's what I call "Putting Thoughts To A Melody!!!!!!!" **

* An Optical illusion is when you see things that aren't really there. So him seeing that he's dope is an illusion.

** His sig said "Putting Thoughts To A Melody" but he's probably gonna change it when he reads my verse...

Uppin for your verse...

Don't Ho-Show man...

this punk callin me out actin like a real hard nigga
bitch bow muhfuka,disgrace 2 ur crew,mr.one hit wondea
puttin ill matic lines demolishin wit punch lines.
i spit a glock sideways rippin ya apart i never drop my eye.

Uppin for some votes....................

hahaha.....nice verse...........respect for ya barz...................uppin this battle............................................ ....................hahaha...................

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Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.

this punk callin me out actin like a real hard nigga
bitch bow muhfuka,disgrace 2 ur crew,mr.one hit wondea
YOU ARE JUST JOKIN RIGHT
puttin ill matic lines demolishin wit punch lines.
i spit a glock sideways rippin ya apart i never drop my eye
I GUESS YOU AREN'T


BREAKDOWN-LINES DIDN'T EVEN RHYME...I HOPE THAT YOU WEREN'T EXPECTIN TO WIN...ALL BARZ HAD TO DO WAS RHYME AND HE WOULD HAVE WON...SERIOUS ELEVATION NEEDED



This fag thinks he's dope? Well I'm stopping the confusion
Cuz him being ill, well thats just one of "Opt1kals illusions"
HAHA NICE*
Dude acts like he's the shit, but forreal, he's softer than pillow's be
So I'll "Bash His Brains With A Guitar"......................................
That's what I call "Putting Thoughts To A Melody!!!!!!!" *
HAHA NICE


BREAKDOWN-WASN'T REALLY CLOSE AT ALL...TWO PUNCHES...WELL HAYMAKERS THROWN AND LANDED SO SWEET LIKE...CAN'T REALLY SAY MUCH MORE*

Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.

Black magik won this shit hands down. way betta punches and his shit ryhmed. optikal you fucking suck.

Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.

BOS:

Good verse fam it was short but sweet. Personals hit, and the punches were hard and connected.

Opt1k:

Yo verse wuz wack dogg. Keep elevating

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Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.

iight ight barz dominated inm this battle...

heres the breakdown

punches:barz
personals:barz
werdplay:barz
structure:barz

barz of steel- your verse was fuckin nice, just like the heading said "short and sweet"...nice play on his name, also had originality in the punches...nice

opt1k: no hate dawg but sumof your shit didnt even rhymed...the punches wer...well.. there werent any...

barz-
This fag thinks he's dope? Well I'm stopping the confusion
Cuz him being ill, well thats just one of "Opt1kals illusions" *
7.5/10...first line was a cross between filler an leader...but dope punch in the end
Dude acts like he's the shit, but forreal, he's softer than pillow's be
So I'll "Bash His Brains With A Guitar"......................................
That's what I call "Putting Thoughts To A Melody!!!!!!!" **
9/10...dopeness, both lines had punches and were original

op1k

this punk callin me out actin like a real hard nigga
bitch bow muhfuka,disgrace 2 ur crew,mr.one hit wondea
1/10..uhhh, no comment
puttin ill matic lines demolishin wit punch lines.
i spit a glock sideways rippin ya apart i never drop my eye.
2/10...uhhh, a bit better

my vote goes to barz of steel

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