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established lyrical threats ft opt1k, lyrical mage and knaledg1
yo just re-openin this shit. i dunno why the fuck bone collector closed this. :huh: :huh:
Established Lyrical Threats Opt1k i be droppin lyrics like pigeons be shittin ghetto musik turn up,the point is what u missin this is ill rappers all together makin a hot song. been through it all fromm 1999-2001 ive been shot,stabbed robbed and saked, but take a look at this nigga bitch i keep comin back cuz there aint NO WAY in the world i'll fall so as ya niggaz keep penetratin i be fukin ur bitchez. niggaz be actin all hard till i step leave wit stitchez cuz everybody do thangz homie i run my block our will be heard whether ya love it or not nigga front the musik bitch i'll have ya ass shot cuz our lyrics kill mc's,are beatz be breakin speaker wattz see nigga in the back round,bitchez dont know how i roll so mic tell maj and knaledg we’re ready to go WHOA!!! One mic Yo man, opt1k, im glad you passed me the mic Im glad to spit, and im glad to recite You spit dopeness, we cumin to leave emcees hopeless Never fallin off the subject we always focused Man we always got the “knaledg” for this Why the fuck would you not be coppin my shit Rockin the mic, act bad holdin a glock wen I write Blow your mind, but you still won’t have forgot that I’m nice don’t step to me, if you aint ready for work Y’all know that I was just clearly deadly from birth Wreckin this verse, for you haters, I aint gone let you disperse We aint gone get physical we reppin with words y’all haters actin ill when you a disaster case if you want to be welcomed back, don’t bother askin Mase I don’t care what you say im still gon’ trash the place So, its gon’ be “a long hot summer” like im Masta Ace I just cock back, fire, then release my grip Everybody gets shocked, like hearin Jesus spit Yo mage, c’mon cast a spell on these bitches I need a rest, so I can chill, and concentrate on my figures! Lyrical mage yo my lyrics are killer like I made a deal wit the prince of pain Even when it rains, I still have enough energy to send down flames And even if I die my lyrical soul will still dish out nightmarish rhymes Its crazy when they find a dead body but don’t know who to blame for the crime I sit here slow as molasses writing freestyles while time passes And after a battle I always rise up like a phoenix from its ashes Im a straight killa wit most of my battles ending in a real tragedy I beat a dude so bad they gave him therapy to bring him back to reality Theres a lesson learned not to boggle a respected lyrical master Cause I come through and leave like a hurricane disaster Still a beginner but great for my time you know But after a year you’ll know this master flow Knaledg1 I'ma lyrical threat, a vet who make cats sweat, Any emcee test me best turn around and jet, 'Cuz I ain't done yet, I'm hea to inject checkmate On you muthfuckas and leave y'all wet, Hea I go ready to blow like a lethal weapon, I'll knock yer' ass out like a game of Tekken, And I'm wreckin' all ya cats b'fo you even expect it, Call tha U.N. bitch.... so they can inspect it, Fo' 8 years I've been forcin' fear into my foes, They can feel it from they toes way down to their soul, I stay writin' and recitin' 'til I'm a thousand years old, Grampa Joe's even gotta admit that I'm dope, So why tha fuck you pussies luv to push me, 'Til I let loose wit' my verbal uzi, I day walk like Wesley Snipes hittin' tha pipe, When night falls nigga.. I'm ready to fight, Everybody raise yer' blunts and take one toke, Just like a ninja son I vanish in smoke. |
yo if its links ur after:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=200019 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...135#post2295135 |
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uppin, lets get sum feeback on this...............
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i'm gonna keep it real cos you my fam
ok this wasn't the hottest piece i think you lot should have stepped your game up and really showcased your skills in this piece. one mic i personally thought your verse was the best in this piece all of you need to up your vocab a bit more and come harder with your punches. but this was an ok piece ~piece~ |
thanx for the feedback man, appreciate it. uppin...
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uppin yall get this going
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yer, c'mon people lets get the feedback comin in...
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uppin this homie!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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uppin this shit, c'mon people lets get sum feedback on this....... i'll defo' rtf
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i don't care if u say its wack, jus' let us know wot u think.......
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uppin this shit homie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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this joint was ok. some verses were better than others. yall need to work on puttin more punches in ya verse or some multies or somethin so its not as bland ya feel me.
one mic's best bar I just cock back, fire, then release my grip Everybody gets shocked, like hearin Jesus spit ^nice solid bar, i was feelin that one opt1k's best bar nigga front the musik bitch i'll have ya ass shot cuz our lyrics kill mc's,are beatz be breakin speaker wattz ^this was ok pretty basik tho. ya need to work on ya flow Lyrical mage best bar I sit here slow as molasses writing freestyles while time passes And after a battle I always rise up like a phoenix from its ashes ^you ha dthe best vocab but your flow n structure were all over the place knaledg1 best bar Hea I go ready to blow like a lethal weapon, I'll knock yer' ass out like a game of Tekken, ^ i liked this bar jsut cuz i aint heard Tekken in a while n it was a good bar too tho overall this coulda been alot stronger i give it a 6/10 but its was decent returnt he favor. Links in the sIG |
^^ haha man WERD and to be honest man ive elevated alot hiomie real so peep all my OM's i used to be opt1k now im shodown i changed my name but yea THANKS..........
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yer man thanks for that feedback, appreciate it. uppin this...................
link:- http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=204846 |
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=204195 |
Accept gifts and that help uplift my pride best take this
As true don’t let fakes twist you because stress just piss Me off, never blunder fake and silly try undertake responsibility got a committee report now in a shitty court need some agility ready to say yes to charges stay best in garages because i fix cars and mix bazaar drink |
okkkkkkkkkk, that didnt make any sense................
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this was gay... you had NOTHING Witty or even funny. For TOPICAL, you had NO imagry and ya didnt have a good rhyme scheme.... this was bad... no offence, call me out or what ever, but it was bad...
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fair enough then, if you think that way, but if you wanna post here and make feedback, make it GUD. uppin this......
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MAN TELL THAT HOMIE To shut the fuck up!?!?!?!?!?!
this OM was old this was when we started out!!!!!!!!!!!!!! nigga wanna see skillz battle me in a topical..................... set it up heres the rules bitch no crew votes no hate votes no favor votes 2 days drop.................1 day check in cuz i got work the topic punk bitches hatin on a niggas work!!!!!!! |
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where that bitch at MAN!!!!!
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