Blackmage vs Mimesis
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 07-16-05 at 04:18 AM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

Mimesis has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-16-05 03:46 AM.

Blackmage has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-16-05 03:56 AM.

You just talk bitch.. fuck you.. now everybody, watch this
I'll easily get a Black-out.. without ever going unconcious
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Gettin rocked kid.. with simple wordplay, hardly flowing rhymes
And punches so stranded.. you could rival the top clothing lines
This hoe is mine.. so used to failing.. but man, I'll be real with you
The only time Mag succeeds.. is when I empty one out killing you
Drilling your shit.. so kick back and drink.. you shouldnt be involved
Cause I drink Fosters.. that's just a title you've grown up being called
Brawlin with hotness? Im beating you down and kid, theres no telling
Cause your already half Black.. now the other will be red with swelling

Using ""'s doesn't mean your wordplay is dope, kid.

And, you're done.

you can't shit on black,not a pot to drop it in, you rhyme piss
you scared, i'd call you a cock but you tryin to mim sis
I believe you an mc, i have to be deceived
thought he was hot, i told him he's not...and he agrees
what he needs is to learn to vent, i'll Arizon out nicely
M.aybe I.n M.onths E.valuation S.hould I.ncrease S.lightly
arrogant? I might be you're easily upstaged
cause you can't create a wordplay until you learn to up the page

Not a pot to piss in
cock=chicken chicken-coward
his avy
arizona = air his zone out
His I.M. is uhhwhatupB

Good Luck i'm going to bed it's 3 a.m. man...

huh?
 

What was that about? I sense hostility. did i piss you off somehow

No..

..but in a battle you can't be nice :love:

Upping this..

Somebody vote the fuck up...

Word.

Voted For: Mimesis

mimesis u had nice punches lol the wordplay line is so true i hate it when ppl do that ur vocab was also alot better than his umm work on metas i guess
black ur flow was really basic work on vocab work on ur personals too if u think those were goood ur high and try to use a metaphore

Thanks for the vote..

Upping for more yo..

Vote up.

upping this shit.

somebody vote.

fa real....

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somebody vote.

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somebody vote.

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upping this shit.

somebody vote.

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Voted For: Mimesis

Iight Honestly Mimesis Took This Easy Punches Was On Point Personals Was There His Whole Verse Was Nice Structure Was On Point Don't Really Like The Dots But Ehh The Verse Was Still Nice

Blackmage Ya Verse Was A Little To Simple Punches Were A Basic No Real Personals Structure Was A Little Out Of Order And Overall Seemed Like You Could Of Came Harder So Mimesis Gets Mih Vote

Vote-Mimesis

Voted For: Mimesis

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rtf here Mim ^

Sorry Black, you my homeboy, but Mim has you here..

Black:
Some decent hits in the verse, openener was a lil forced on the wordplay of ''Mim sis'...wasnt feelin that, the maybe in motnhs elevation line was hot, nice creativity there

Overall ya verse was aight, I can see that your lyrical content is proll better suited too audios...still a straight drop, against most other textcees on here, you would of got the win, but Mim took it....Sorry man


Mim:
Nice verse, alot more complex with the text, better structured verse, nice disses throughout, each bar hit a mark with the punches....wordplay cant be faulted neither...You definately got the win homie....Good job y'all...Nice battle

This aint for pink slip tho is it?...'cause Black is reppin RAW....

rtf tho Mim....or vote will be removed .....(sorry to sound like an asshole but you know how hard it is to get good honest votes)

Peace an uppin for y'all...

I'll hit your battle up now, Verb..

Word.

Upping.

verbal, im in 2 of the same crews that spul is in.

get me another link or something.

Voted For: Mimesis

jus checkin' why my name is spoken in this biznatch. but mimesis killed it anyways ~_~

word! plus we brothers like pancakes nah mean? :shoot:

Voted For: Mimesis

v/mim

not great but beta here, thought ya first bar was pretty dope nice original concept but wasn't feelin the 2nd much, the fosters line was nice and you came with a gud finisher

black I wasn't feelin much of ya stuff here, thought you had a chance after readin mims cos it wasn't his best but ur punches were abit forced to me

pz