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Daubs vs (X)eed
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8-10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No Bullshit G'Luck :shoot: Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 07-17-05 at 06:08 AM Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in. |
(X)eed has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-17-05 05:40 AM.
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Daubs has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-17-05 05:41 AM.
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Like old rusty saws, this bitch just cannot manage to hack-it..
And if eed aint a cheater, whys he pre-checked the brackets!! Ya punches wouldnt be powerful if they were delivered in tanks.. And your loyal to the game,..no wonder your (X)eed'in ya banks!! You miss out on all the fun, kinda like a muslim at christmas.. And like dealers going ape.....you nothin but monkey business!! Your teeth are already fucked so dont ask for more toffee.. And its like you throw matches.......at clothes.................. .........................the way you burn a hole in your pocket!! Meh, should be enough. Explinations if needed: 1 x = checked 2 read his sig and game/banks and exeeding river banks. 3 simple worplay 4 you should get it Dont get anything, pm me or do not vote!! |
Hes finally found something similar between Bush and Him
his verses are held {captive} like Dunsten Checks in chances of winnin is quite slim like a person skatin on thin ice he follows.......... his own feet, as if Big Foot were to recite the mans playin himself, waitin for someone to "cum" even if he got a "wet willy"he wouldnt "blow" any stunts the chimps in "splits" found Tony blairs now on his knees he be going "bananas" like Daubs wuz hangin from trees ^^^^^^ aiight ... xplanations dunsten cheks in is amovie bout ...... a monkey ... hus i held captive... and yer... u shud get that you ppl should get the big foot adn follow his feet line and now tony blairs ..on his knees ... and has got allied wit bush ..4 help... and yer... u shud get taht tooo dnt understand dnt FUCKIN VOTE |
Nice, good luck .
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Awww Almost 4got.... The Whole Monkey Thin Wuz..cuz Hes Got An Ape In His Avatar.//// So Anywayz..uppn
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Voted For: Daubs
Ya punches wouldnt be powerful if they were delivered in tanks.. And your loyal to the game,..no wonder your (X)eed'in ya banks!! You miss out on all the fun, kinda like a muslim at christmas.. And like dealers going ape.....you nothin but monkey business!! vs the chimps in "splits" found Tony blairs now on his knees he be going "bananas" like Daubs wuz hangin from trees daubs was more witty and creative his wordplay was better and wasnt forced..his punches hit harder than xceeds...hence more quotables...xceed had some good concepts but just couldnt word them right, or deliver the punch |
This was feedback posted for Daubs
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This was feedback posted for Daubs
EZ fam..........dont win den niggas D/r keep it bangin folk..........
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Voted For: Daubs
open: Daubs.....way better opener just mad emore sense and connected.....X.....didnt really flow good...... close: Aight....by both really a tie here.....both were kinda good closers...... personals: Daubs at least mention his name in the verse and had better personals wt that.....X.....didnt need to though...... metas: Both had metas and really another tie here as well.....cant decide which ones better...onb this..... punches: Daubs....jsut better punches cuz of delivery to them X need to work on ya delivery......but daubs props on the punches...... wordplay:....Really none here didnt see that much wordplay here ...... win: Daubs......cuz just a better verse had way good punches that packed alot pof damage and connected and a good opener.......there.....X need to work on ur delivery to punches just keep practicin and elevate aight myv/ daubs..... http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=198196 RTF^^..........OVGR |
Il hit that up later mate.
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Voted For: Daubs
I guess you did pretty aiight.....u came out hard on top and showed ya true colourz.... Like old rusty saws, this bitch just cannot manage to hack-it.. And if eed aint a cheater, whys he pre-checked the brackets!! Pretty tight opening there....i like the way u used ya rhyming skills and showed it And its like you throw matches.......at clothes.................. .........................the way you burn a hole in your pocket!! But your closing was weak....didn't rhyme so needed to elevate Multis: NONE Punches: Daubs Rhymes: both Verbal: both |
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Voted For: Daubs
daubs won easy took it wid jus liking his punches better and better personals no hate to xeed but elevate a bit then u will get him lol anyways vote=daubs |
Voted For: Daubs
Like old rusty saws, this bitch just cannot manage to hack-it.. And if eed aint a cheater, whys he pre-checked the brackets!! 6...LoL!! decent play on the name and a nice concept in the first line Ya punches wouldnt be powerful if they were delivered in tanks.. And your loyal to the game,..no wonder your (X)eed'in ya banks!! 7...LMAO!!! playin off some g-unit shit, nice punch here. You miss out on all the fun, kinda like a muslim at christmas.. And like dealers going ape.....you nothin but monkey business!! 6...funny line again, especially with the monkey shit, monkey lines are funny. Your teeth are already fucked so dont ask for more toffee.. And its like you throw matches.......at clothes.................. .........................the way you burn a hole in your pocket!! 5...not feelin this, i didnt like the first line and the 2nd line was irrelevant to the setup. OVERALL: 24/40 Hes finally found something similar between Bush and Him his verses are held {captive} like Dunsten Checks in 6...LoL!! decent punch and play off the avatar. chances of winnin is quite slim like a person skatin on thin ice he follows.......... his own feet, as if Big Foot were to recite 4...wtf!! this was wack, not funny and just gay. the mans playin himself, waitin for someone to "cum" even if he got a "wet willy"he wouldnt "blow" any stunts 4...weak again, played to fuck and just wack. the chimps in "splits" found Tony blairs now on his knees he be going "bananas" like Daubs wuz hangin from trees 7...LMAO!!! a dope closer, probably the funniest bar in this battle. OVERALL: 21/40 close battle....(x)eed had the best bar of the battle, but only problem was he was not consistent, daubs was consistent with good punches, had one weaker one at the end but other than that came with comical shit. V/ - Daubs RTF!! on the marv battle, (or i will remove my vote, werd :thumbup:) |
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