Kordozar vs Daubs
 

Battle Rules:

6 - Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 07-17-05 at 01:05 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

Win by forfeit

Kordozar has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-17-05 12:36 PM.

Daubs has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-17-05 12:50 PM.

This pussys a chicken, look, he has the same attributes as eggs do..
Because the first 4 letters of your names scrambled describes you..
Your lines are similar to gardners, both manage to soil me..
And brewing up for kings is the only time you represent loyalty..
Ya verses get laughed at so much, like jaguars they, cause a pause..
Santa dint bring RV nothing but bad,look, < just a subjective clause..

Explinations if needed:

Bar1 = Kord > Dork and simple wordplay.
Bar2 = loyalty royalty, his user title.
Bar3 = Jaguar is a car and cat> cars and paws/cause a pause. He joined in december.

Everything else is too simple imo, dont get something PM me or dont vote

I will rtf on honest explained votes.

WTF it missed my last punch out?! .

Strobe will fix it, anyway GL.

Voted For: Kordozar

This pussys a chicken, look, he has the same attributes as eggs do..
Because the first 4 letters of your names scrambled describes you..
HAHA..
Your lines are similar to gardners, both manage to soil me..
And brewing up for kings is the only time you represent loyalty..
OK
Ya verses get laughed at so much, like jaguars they, cause a pause..
Santa dint bring RV nothing but bad,look,
UM..OK I GUESS


BREAKDOWN-VERSE WAS OK...DIDN'T REALLY STRIKE ME AT ALL EXCEPT FOR YOUR OPENER WHICH WAS PRETTY NICE...I DON'T KNOW WHERE THE RHYME IS IN YOUR CLOSER AND I READ THE BITCH LIKE 30 TIMES...




Ya Battles Show You Like To Get Dicced Fuccin Whore!
Don't Finish A 'StateMent' Watch I Cut 'DA' Off Like A Judge In Court
HAHA..NICE
Slugs Will Pour Into His Chest Because Of That Crap That He Burns
We Where Exchange Gifts He Gave Me A Punch I Throw Wacc In Return
HAHA
Don't Come Out Ya Mouth With A Personal Or The Berreta To Ya Brain
I Hope You Don't Plan On A Win Because Every Verse 'UBS' Like The Last Three Laters Of His Name
OK


BREAKDOWN-YOUR VERSE WAS PRETTY GOOD...HAD SOME PUNCHES IN THERE WITH A PERSONAL ON HIS NAME...PRETTY NICE

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Voted For: Kordozar

Pretty decent battle but ima have to give this one to kordozar

Daubs

This pussys a chicken, look, he has the same attributes as eggs do..
Because the first 4 letters of your names scrambled describes you..
Decent opener
Your lines are similar to gardners, both manage to soil me..
And brewing up for kings is the only time you represent loyalty..
naw
Ya verses get laughed at so much, like jaguars they, cause a pause..
Santa dint bring RV nothing but bad,look, < just a subjective clause..
Naw

Kordozar


Ya Battles Show You Like To Get Dicced Fuccin Whore!
Don't Finish A 'StateMent' Watch I Cut 'DA' Off Like A Judge In Court
Decent Opener
Slugs Will Pour Into His Chest Because Of That Crap That He Burns
We Where Exchange Gifts He Gave Me A Punch I Throw Wacc In Return
naw
Don't Come Out Ya Mouth With A Personal Or The Berreta To Ya Brain
I Hope You Don't Plan On A Win Because Every Verse 'UBS' Like The Last Three Laters Of His Name
nice

Overall vote : Kordozar..for having better punchlines..and a couple of good nameplays

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Voted For: Daubs

u had good openin but a bit of a weak closing....nice wordplay...(kord) to (dork)...lmao....good multis and punches with good confidence....

the first bar of dork....weak but good rhyming...
2nd... " "
3rd... " "

Overall vote
Daubs

Nice rhyming skills dorkozar

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checkin pollss.... you got this man.......................

Voted For: Daubs

Daubs
This pussys a chicken, look, he has the same attributes as eggs do..
Because the first 4 letters of your names scrambled describes you..
original and was funny
Your lines are similar to gardners, both manage to soil me..
And brewing up for kings is the only time you represent loyalty..
aight
Ya verses get laughed at so much, like jaguars they, cause a pause..
Santa dint bring RV nothing but bad,look, < just a subjective clause..
ok even more original
not your best work thou daubs i know you can come harder

Ya Battles Show You Like To Get Dicced Fuccin Whore!
Don't Finish A 'StateMent' Watch I Cut 'DA' Off Like A Judge In Court
aight
Slugs Will Pour Into His Chest Because Of That Crap That He Burns
We Where Exchange Gifts He Gave Me A Punch I Throw Wacc In Return
weak
Don't Come Out Ya Mouth With A Personal Or The Berreta To Ya Brain
I Hope You Don't Plan On A Win Because Every Verse 'UBS' Like The Last Three Laters Of His Name
this was the best line in the battle
it was an ok verse that had a couple of weak bars an a couple of good ones

ovorall-i think that daubs got this cause i felt that his personals and lines were more clever and i just simply enjoyed his verse more
but both of ya stay up

vote-daubs

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Voted For: Daubs

Flow-Daubs....simply well....Kordazor had some lines that didn't rhyme.I hate to break it to ya...but court and whore doesn't rhyme.And ya last bar was stretched a bit.

Punches-Daubs...though it was very weak...Kordozar had nutin.His shit was basic,and not hard hittin at all.

Personal-Daubs because that other guy had none.But that personal daubs had was shit.JUst being honest there.

Multis-Neither...both of you try to get some next time if you could.

Originality-DAubs obviously.....though very weak.

VERy weak battle

Vote _DAubs
hit one my battles up in sig.

Voted For: Daubs

My vote goes to Daubs

DaUbs: first off lemme say this was a close battle but Daubs gets my vote juss becuz I enjoyed his verse more..I juss like the delivary of it Your punches hit a lil harder in my opinion This was a good job

Kord: My you had some punches but I think Daubs hit you a lil harder like I said this was a close battle....I don't know whatr to tell your verse was good..Daubs juss got you this time

Daubs Best Line:

This pussys a chicken, look, he has the same attributes as eggs do..
Because the first 4 letters of your names scrambled
describes you

Kord best line:

Slugs Will Pour Into His Chest Because Of That Crap That He Burns
We Where Exchange Gifts He Gave Me A Punch I Throw Wacc In Return

good job boh of you

v/daubs

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Voted For: Kordozar

ok Kord jsut had better punches man.. Daubs try not to explain all ur punches cuz that means ur going way too complex and put if u dont get it dont vote and u wont have to explain..mostly Kord had me laughing and it was harsh with good name and wordplay so yeah..congrats to him..keep writing people

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lol...............................................

Voted For: Daubs

FLOW-Daubs...though both of you need to ditch that basic rhyme sheme.Kordazor even had a stretched line at end.

Punches-Daubs...that Kordozar guy was far too weak.It's all about wordplay and metas.Ya can't go staiting shit.I seen a lot of your battles daubs.and I must say...ya punches are very creative.

Personals-Daubs had the only personals in this.Kordozar bassically saying generic lines that weren't really that hot.

Mutlis-Like I said..both of you need to get rid of multis.Some might tell you it's not a requirement.But it is.That's wat separates you from newbs.And based on how whack cats are on this site....combine punches and multis...and you'lll get worshipped.

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Voted For: Daubs

VERYYY weak battle...wow !

first of all...every1s punches were pretty corny !
Daubs u called him a Dork...*wackkk*
Kordozar u said UBS...*wackkkk*

Punches - wow ummm...i have to say Daubs...only because his attempts to punch were better then Kordozar's attempts...neither of u really had anythin hard hittin 2 say...work on that

Personals - Daubs...he at least tried to say some personal shyt...Kordozar ur verse jus sounded mad random...it sounded like u were jus rhymin words jus to rhyme them....didnt really say anythin about Daubs

Wordplay - neither...both verses were madd simple...nutin made me think...work on ur vocab usage alil more 4 both of yall

Multis - neither...there werent even any attempts

Metaphors - Blahh... daubs...even tho they werent hard hittin at least they were there...u both tried but they werr both wack...but Daubs were ALIL if that, harder hittin

once again...this was a weak battle...no hate...jus work on ur punches n metaphors....but

Vote - Daubs


yall can return the favor on the battle in my sig...good look

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lol, il rtf later.

No beef, but if i came that weak, maybe you can school me if when i get an open spot :thumbup:

man...i had a lot a typos,....was in a rush typing it....





you know this guy is full of shit?He posted in my battle with sixth sense sayin we both whack like he did here.I wanna battle him and merk him and teach him a good lesson.

Voted For: Daubs

i liked the chicken line, it's a decent punch
dork, lol made me laugh it was funny,
gardners'n soil very good flip n was a good hit
this loyalty line was also decent
i laughed at his verse as well...lmao
and ur last line just top't it off off, like sugar on weetbix..


now Kordozar must of had a bad day, with the level of battles he has won..goin against daubs...dude u come no where near hard enough..

v/dauds