spoken word vs opt1k
 

Battle Rules:

20 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

topical:the world and it's problems

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-18-05 at 03:53 PM

Must drop verse in 20 minutes after check in.

opt1k has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-18-05 03:25 PM.

Spoken Word has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-18-05 03:31 PM.

ayo so many people in this world take shit for granted/
many people givin up like shit here you can have it/
like access granted pheens and also cracheads/
niggas be gettin scared too much they be wettin they beds.
people need to wake up homie and smell the roses.
many people druggin up on shit takin overdoses.
feelin light head and bloated from all this violence
many people killin each other tired of hearin them damn sirens.
damn bitchez and fukin snithez get a fukin life
niggas be frontin alot otta get shot or stabbed wit a jagged knife.
its beautiful bitch i'm talkin bout bature it's self
but we the fukers who keeps fukin up mother natures health.
destroyin the ozone layer people always be greedy
only time they feel like sharing is when they gots the needy.
to have some shit in there life they never think twice
next think ya know you got nothin u only be snortin up ice.
distinctive waves of hate penetrate many minds.
next thing ya know there a murder the scene of the crime starts to inmind.
the murderer is me homie i just killed you...
just wanted to welcome you to RV and have ya schooled
in topical/

How should i start this, I guess the world is what we make it
Every corner is a drug house, The overall respect has faded
Life is tarnished, Gun shots are more common than fireworks
And for the ones making a diiference, you try more but it hurts
The government became dirty, and we cant expect them to help
So when police brutality happens, we have to control it ourselves
Why are innocent people dying, And police are only suspended
But if we take a swing at a man in blue, We're severly repremanded
It just doesnt seem worth it, No matter how much your wording it
We think we're doing the world good, But we're really hurting it
The problems going around are getting worse by the minute
So why do we protest, If we just get arrested before we finish
I just want to speak out... about... all thats wrong in this world
Why is gas so expensive, Its gotten harder to feed my girl
Plus the rents too much to pay for such a terrible place to live
My childern cant play outside, A bullet might erase my kids
So many people are dying for ignorant reasons....so just face it
Welfare is there to help, But my check... they misplaced it
All efforts for change are getting disolved... for what theyre worth
I wish that we could bond together, anr rid problems from this earth


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ayo good one homie good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

thx you too man, im alil rusty tho aint done a topical in like 6 months

upping this for votes. Once i get 20 posts ill rtf.

ayo uppin fasho homie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!yo word you do that homie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!keep elevatin homie peace out!!!!!!!!!!!!

what up chalk.thanks for votin against me homie!!!!!!!!!11hahaha.just playin homie yo thanks for watchin out for me homie peace out!!!!!!!!!

uppin this for more votes....................... ..........

Voted For: Spoken Word

spoken word i loved this verse.
it is reality.
you didnt have to think to rhyme.
it flows so nicely.
and no cussin,slang.
good verse dog.
i'd like to do a cypher with you .
hit me up.

100

hahaha..........uppin homie!!!!!!!!!!!!fasho homie

Upping this for more votes, Will return the favor.

Voted For: Spoken Word

WOW...one sided...
ight here how it goes

Optik1-well...since both of you had kinda..the same concept..no credit to neither there.But damn dawg....ya wording and content sucked.You were just stating stuff.WHen ya just state things...then we go...SO WAT???.Use metas..build ya vocab...you know...but ya got work.And fix ya structure too.

SPoken word-Good verse.Had a good structure.Flow was better than OPtik.Concept was ....meh...but not like Optik one used anything good.You literrally owned him in content and such.Good verse.

Vote-SPoken Word

man k trini shut ur fuckin mouth man......................stop talkin shit man!!!!!!!!!!hahaha............................... ........LMFAO!!!!!!!!!!!!.............HAHAHAHA

LMFAO>>>@MACREEP WACK NAME!!!!!!

Voted For: Spoken Word

opt1k - ur verse was very interesting..u had no good vocab at all..ur structure was way off..u had no flow to it at all..u had a few good points but it wasnt that great..ur closer was kinda gay.....5/10


spoken word - i liked ur verse man..u had a good flow..u stayed on point throughout the verse..decent vocab..good imagery..jus by reading the first few lines i knew it was gonna be a good one.....7/10


spoken word wins

upping this for more votes, i always return the favor..

Upping this for more votes, drop a link ill return the favor.

uppin man ya'll haterz!!!hahahaha........uppin
!!!!!^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Voted For: opt1k

checkin pollz homie you got this...................

shit supposed to be feed get rid of it!......................................

Voted For: Spoken Word

v/SPOKEN WORD......ur words were deff. spoken in this peace u had a better flow becuz of ur great structure, ur emotion was at an all time high.i felt this dawg. ur vocab was tight.....just overall better than shodown, no hate shodown just stating my opinion
v/SPOKENWORD...........vote on the battle in my sig