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What is Love?
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(What is love) Caring, kindness, mercy, grace Holding someone tight and starring death in the face (What is love) Giving your life up for your friend Always being there no matter what, even til the very end [repeat] [verse 1] When given the question, “What is love?” Do you think of a rose, candy, or a dove? Romance, sex, hugging, kissing, cuddling? Fireworks, stars, taking off as in a shuttle? Tell me if you know what love is all about Nothing you say ranks more than a shout There’s only One Who truly loves and gives freely Even though we are old rags that are filthy This love is for everyone, its agape Given to all who wants to inherit eternity All you do is only follow and believe And paradise is the gift you will receive [hook] (What is love) Caring, kindness, mercy, grace Holding someone tight and starring death in the face (What is love) Giving your life up for your friend Always being there no matter what, even til the very end [repeat] [verse 2] From the peak of Everest to the bottom of the Pacific This love reigns forever and not at all specific It’ll be given to everyone a thousand times over That’s more luck than you have in findin a 4-leaf clover This love actually occurred at first sight And doesn’t discern from yellow, black, or white It was around even during the beginning of time And will be around when the sun loses its shine This love can’t be found over a rainbow But it can fill the emptiness with your soul All you do is only follow and believe And paradise is the gift you will receive [hook] (What is love) Caring, kindness, mercy, grace Holding someone tight and starring death in the face (What is love) Giving your life up for your friend Always being there no matter what, even til the very end [repeat] [verse 3] This love I speak of can only be found in One And that is in the Only Begotten Son His love is continuous, it’ll never end A perfect love from the One Who never sinned Took a whip and even wore crown of thorns While many cried out in a constant mourn Carried a cross to the top of a hill called Calvary Then nailed and hung up on that same tree Defeated death by raising up on the third Bestowing His love on everyone who believed His word All you do is only follow and believe And paradise is the gift you will receive (What is love) Caring, kindness, mercy, grace Holding someone tight and starring death in the face (What is love) Giving your life up for your friend Always being there no matter what, even til the very end 4x http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2303955 |
Muay good, everything bout it was superb, good read, structure, etc. 9.9/10 cuz u know nuttin ain't perfect, keep it up!
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come on y'all, can i get some feed...............
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ok, really would like some some more feed on this
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^some nyce imagery.....goin on there.... you got a good concept here....i didnt see the last verse coming...though...judging by yur name i should have....i would have lyke to have seen a lil more depth with the imagery....love is something yu can get graphic with.....8/10....everything else was onpoint keep writing mayne....yu got it in yu |
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Love is something that endures through every emotion, it is something that has conquered many nations, melted stone, fabricated masterpieces, sparked wars, and yet still manages to strike everyone of us. And abusing the love can be detramental and sometimes unchangable.
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still lookin for some feed on this, anything will be nice
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Mayne... Bru.. on the real I love it ...The hook is off the chain...and the best endin....mayne........Mayne......I cant say nuphin.....five stars hands down..but dont fall off . Polish the gift you've got
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since Christian Soldiers is gettin some more feed, uppin this again
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man dope piece, nice flow because of outstanding structure....good emotion nice imagery.....good use of vocabulary...up on multis yo......keep postin and doin ya thing 8.5/10 rtf on my sig links
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thanks man, favor will be returned, uppin this...................
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damn man, very emotional you have a good emotion in your writing, the stucture is good flow is good, but damn that emotion, nuce imagerym good choice of words vocab is decent not gonna say it could be ipped cuz really im reall feelin this one man. keep doin ya thing ya know this was very good man, i'd like to see some more some time.
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thanks man, if you want more check out Christian Soldiers, uppin this..............
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