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E Looch 07-19-05 03:45 PM

9th Degree vs E Looch
 
Battle Rules:

6 - 12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No D/R
No Buddy buddy shit on votes

DONT VOTE IF U DONT UNDERSTAND

Minimum posts to vote: 800

Check in by: 07-19-05 at 04:15 PM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

System 07-19-05 03:46 PM

E Looch has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-19-05 03:46 PM.

System 07-19-05 03:59 PM

9th Degree has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-19-05 03:59 PM.

E Looch 07-20-05 03:40 PM

i gotta give it up ya bars are really very rare...
..ly consitent career not so Sonny now that lines arent bein Cher'd
u could get stoned like jesus fuck it ill give u 1 hell of a pimp slap
denail letters from universal the only time u C-notes off rap
take ya loose leaf paper make an airplane an toss it in the air
truste me right there be the only way ya flow goin somewhere
aint ya fault ya family tree all bark an no bite i wish u wood
do what u say in ya raps this lazy mechanic never around a hood
no problem for me like blank math books i add up to your defeat
u stray from audio fuck a defibralator couldnt help u stay on beat
so stay with text it suits u dont get ties with a mic keep ya luck
slam an bounce ya head off my av so u get more bang for ya buck



again if it doesnt make since to u then u dont understand SO DONT VOTE

E Looch 07-20-05 03:41 PM

wow barely made it have fun with it

Nynth Degree 07-20-05 03:59 PM

6 minutes left? That's all I need, I know this fella is lame
So I'll bring E to the L, like I'm spellin' his name
He better have changed, elevated 'cuz he's dumb like inbred kinfolk
I asked if he caught my drift and he opened up a window
We know what your in-fo, like I'm givin' information
Battle me? Looch is fuckin' Goofy more than Disney fornication
Really you're like bad bombs, you blow with no direction
Looch's bars never connect, like bad cell phone reception

Forgot about this, only had time for 8 lines...G'luck :thumbup:

E Looch 07-20-05 04:00 PM

lol i felt an E L line comin

thought it would be E L fudge or some shit

i done seen about 1264 of those theses last few months

Nynth Degree 07-20-05 04:03 PM

Lol word, you know how it is when you're pressed for time. We can rematch again sometime, if you want.

E Looch 07-20-05 04:03 PM

straight wit me

strobe needs to remove that loss already

Sik Wit It 07-20-05 06:14 PM

This was feedback posted for 9th Degree
 
He better have changed, elevated 'cuz he's dumb like inbred kinfolk
I asked if he caught my drift and he opened up a window
We know what your in-fo, like I'm givin' information
Battle me? Looch is fuckin' Goofy more than Disney fornication
Really you're like bad bombs, you blow with no direction
Looch's bars never connect, like bad cell phone reception

Vs

u could get stoned like jesus fuck it ill give u 1 hell of a pimp slap
denail letters from universal the only time u C-notes off rap
take ya loose leaf paper make an airplane an toss it in the air
truste me right there be the only way ya flow goin somewhere
no problem for me like blank math books i add up to your defeat
u stray from audio fuck a defibralator couldnt help u stay on beat

v/ Tie

meh, this is only feedback though

Germ 07-20-05 06:50 PM

Voted For: 9th Degree

hmm

elooch....i liked a bunch of your concepts, but i felt your wording was just terrible, and really took away from the punch......closer was pimp, but you didn't keep that consistency through your whole verse, flow was off.......and again, wording was just waay off and really upset a bunch of punches, but i feel if you wrote every line like your closer, you woulda taken this.

9th, nice verse, started off real nice, 2nd bar, meh.......3rd was original and nice, and closer was decent......but you kept consistency the whole way through, more creative punches i though, and wording/wordplay was down and really brought effectiveness to your punches.....and that why you get my vote

overall, it was a decent battle, but i'm giving it to 9th

v/9th Degree

J. Luth 07-20-05 06:52 PM

This was feedback posted for 9th Degree
 
peepin' polls.g ood battle yo................................

Logic The Goonie 07-20-05 07:47 PM

This was feedback posted for 9th Degree
 
LMAO @ this battle

*doesn't vote to piss off Looch because he doesn't IM me anymore*

:mad:

Dervla 07-20-05 08:13 PM

This was feedback posted for 9th Degree
 
Chezecking this out.................................

E Looch 07-21-05 03:27 PM

woooooooooooooow

didnt see this comin

TeamOne 07-21-05 04:00 PM

This was feedback posted for E Looch
 
sorry i couldnt vote for my buddy Loochy

:)

N.Tavarez 07-21-05 06:18 PM

Voted For: 9th Degree

checking pollsssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss

Removed

N.Tavarez 07-21-05 06:19 PM

my bad ya'll cliqued the wrong button................

Grave Digger 07-21-05 06:19 PM

Voted For: 9th Degree

Looch:
i gotta give it up ya bars are really very rare...
..ly consitent career not so Sonny now that lines arent bein Cher'd
meh, weak, wordplay was coo', wording was fucked and it didnt really hit
u could get stoned like jesus fuck it ill give u 1 hell of a pimp slap
denail letters from universal the only time u C-notes off rap
meh, wording was fucked, weak, just a "meh" bar
take ya loose leaf paper make an airplane an toss it in the air
truste me right there be the only way ya flow goin somewhere
umm, this was wack man, straight up wack
aint ya fault ya family tree all bark an no bite i wish u wood
do what u say in ya raps this lazy mechanic never around a hood
played lines = wack
no problem for me like blank math books i add up to your defeat
u stray from audio fuck a defibralator couldnt help u stay on beat
this was "meh" again
so stay with text it suits u dont get ties with a mic keep ya luck
slam an bounce ya head off my av so u get more bang for ya buck
meh, wack, didnt feel this either, it was "meh"

9th:
6 minutes left? That's all I need, I know this fella is lame
So I'll bring E to the L, like I'm spellin' his name
These L initial lines are getting played and not so fresh even when flipped but this still came out decent
He better have changed, elevated 'cuz he's dumb like inbred kinfolk
I asked if he caught my drift and he opened up a window
made me almost smile, a borderline decent line
We know what your in-fo, like I'm givin' information
Battle me? Looch is fuckin' Goofy more than Disney fornication
didn't hit, I've seen similair concepts but with differant wording, this was "ok"
Really you're like bad bombs, you blow with no direction
Looch's bars never connect, like bad cell phone reception
NO!

v/9th degree, for having 2 or 3 decent bars, wich beat looch's 0 decent bars or 1 decent bar, I cant remember, anyways, looch you came wack, your wording was mad fucked and shit looked force, I go with 9th obviously.

DoContinue 07-21-05 06:20 PM

This was feedback posted for 9th Degree
 
looch had some straight wordplay but it wasnt really hittin...
the opened up tha window line was tha best in this battle... im not votin but 9th wins from that window line...

L.I. 07-21-05 06:29 PM

Voted For: 9th Degree

6 minutes left? That's all I need, I know this fella is lame
So I'll bring E to the L, like I'm spellin' his name
He better have changed, elevated 'cuz he's dumb like inbred kinfolk
I asked if he caught my drift and he opened up a window

v.

Nothing

9th came okay with those two decent bars. The first was actually dope but the catch the drift concept ive seen before. Flow was fine, wordplay was coo. Just an average verse as Ive seen u come much much better. The last two bars were more of a blah gotta make sum lines type. Meta's usually end up that way. You just had the witty verse.

E Looch came weak. He didnt connect on his wordplay. His opener was a good concept but the wording was way off. Very stretched as well. Flow wasnt that great throughout. The closer was coo but really didnt deliver a hit. That was pretty much the scenerio throughout your whole verse. The older, wack style of RV got you the loss. Those lines might have been considered dope back then, but that style fell off a long time ago. So get back to battling, adapt, and elevate cause you didnt come close on this one.

Nynth Degree 07-21-05 06:52 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by E Looch
woooooooooooooow

didnt see this comin

I'm as surprised as you are...if not, more surprised.

TeamOne 07-22-05 10:15 PM

werd to bad cell phone reception........... wackest bar ive heard from 9th

gotaasswhoopin4u 07-23-05 12:35 AM

This was feedback posted for E Looch
 
wtf, looch battling?

E Looch 07-24-05 02:45 AM

lmao ^ word

comedy from the voters young kids now imember why i stoped battlin on this kiddy board


and that catch the drift concept came from me :thumbup:

L.I. 07-24-05 03:51 AM

but 9th made it 10000 times better then u eer said it...as did many other kids

Nynth Degree 07-24-05 10:23 PM

Meh, upping.

E Looch 07-24-05 10:56 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by L.I.
but 9th made it 10000 times better then u eer said it...as did many other kids



um no

strept throat

Cocaine 07-25-05 04:16 PM

Voted For: E Looch

wow this was a pretty tight battle.. 9th.. i felt u could have taken this.. had u came a bit harder.. some of ur lines i was really feeling.. but there was a bar in there that i thought was pretty lame and that was ur opener..

E-Looch.. well i havent seen u around much.. but i definitely dont think ur rusty.. u had some pretty nice concepts.. that mechanic line was nice.. and i liked the sonny and cher line..

Overall.. this was a pretty good battle. i just felt looch came harder.. and just edged out 9th....

La Cosa Nostra 07-26-05 12:48 PM

Voted For: 9th Degree

Aiight.. One sided.. Looch, are you just trying to be too complex or is that actually just jibberish to make people get the impression your dissing him? Nothing at all in your verse interested me. You were attempting some decent concepts in your verse but the way you worded it was complete garbage. I think this is one of those things where you understand what your saying, but other people dont. And dont listen to any dickriders that vote for you, because their not being honest. This is comming from someone who doesent know you nor care for your feelings. Clean up your style big time. Start doing punches that arnt just a jumble of words, you would never ever ever ever ever ever ever see a rapper attempt to spit lines like that in a free style or pre written diss.. and thats because THOSE LINES ARE WEIRD. yadig?

9th, first bar was aiight, third line was stretched, you might wanna check that, the punch was meh on that bar too, third bar wasnt bad, the set up was coo.. Could of used a better concept for the punch, forth bar was aiight, nothing really wowed me, but you did a decent job, and your one up simply because your bars actually had something behind them.

Looch, this is by no means a hate vote and I'm being brutally honest with you for your own good not mine. Take it how you want to take it. But I'm out. Peace.

Sixth Sense 07-26-05 12:54 PM

Voted For: 9th Degree

i gotta give it up ya bars are really very rare...
..ly consitent career not so Sonny now that lines arent bein Cher'd
....lol nice opener 8/10
u could get stoned like jesus fuck it ill give u 1 hell of a pimp slap
denail letters from universal the only time u C-notes off rap
aight good line 6/10
take ya loose leaf paper make an airplane an toss it in the air
truste me right there be the only way ya flow goin somewhere
ok nice as well 6/10
aint ya fault ya family tree all bark an no bite i wish u wood
do what u say in ya raps this lazy mechanic never around a hood
aight good line 6/10
no problem for me like blank math books i add up to your defeat
u stray from audio fuck a defibralator couldnt help u stay on beat
gettin too weak now 4/10
so stay with text it suits u dont get ties with a mic keep ya luck
slam an bounce ya head off my av so u get more bang for ya buck
aight nice closer 6/10
TOTAL 36/60

vs.

6 minutes left? That's all I need, I know this fella is lame
So I'll bring E to the L, like I'm spellin' his name
aight good opener 6/10
He better have changed, elevated 'cuz he's dumb like inbred kinfolk
I asked if he caught my drift and he opened up a window
....lol...nice punch there 8/10
We know what your in-fo, like I'm givin' information
Battle me? Looch is fuckin' Goofy more than Disney fornication
aight nice..6/10
Really you're like bad bombs, you blow with no direction
Looch's bars never connect, like bad cell phone reception
.....lol....nice puncha nd the closer at it 10/10
TOTAL 30/40

EL- ur verse was good nice lines and flow was aight but didnt feel ur punches that good u ad 12 lines and nothin really hit hard though u kno try to work more on tha delivery cuz some of ur lines that recieved 6/10 coulda had a beter delivery and coulda been a better punchline aight so work at that......

9th- ur verse waas good though it was short u brung alot of punches to ur verse and had a good flow to it too....nice punches there and the closer was the best one keep it up 9th mna very good at it man.....

v/ 9th degree cuz he had a short verse but still brung more hard hittin punches so my v/ goes to 9th degree........
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