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3-Dimensional vs lyrical mage
Battle Rules:
6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 07-19-05 at 06:13 PM Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in. |
lyrical mage has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-19-05 05:44 PM.
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lyrical mage has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-19-05 05:47 PM.
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you say you can spit but ill take that chance....
yo ass cant spitt even if you did the rain dance... yo say you a legend?man that just too fictional... i cant see yo rhymes even if they were 3 dimensional... im like a drug persciption with many side effects.... nausia, headaches, and a your whack reality check... so dont go around calling niggas hos and bitches... just cause you want us dont mean we can grant yo wishes... |
where the fuck you at nigga
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3-Dimensional has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-19-05 06:09 PM.
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Lyrical Mage this is a lyrical maze/
People might felt you at first now you a lyrical phase/ I know reading this you ducked from the moment you saw it/ You flows the clothing line boss from 98 its garbage/ How you go post your baby picture under flyweight/ I know if your girl saw me she’d be my date/ If You even got a girl you probably got a man with new tits added/ You trapped in the closet get out like Rufus you dick addict/ The biggest loser in student’s yearbooks is what you had to sign/ Tried to buy punchlines but bankrupt ya clock’s on hammertime/ Somebody shoulda drowned you for using the word lyrical/ The fact that you can rhyme a little is still a miracle/ You got to use ya old rhymes so you got a mirror flow/ Call this cat an infant he teething on mixtapes and stealing those/ Same lines that rappers use to diss his type/ “Lyrical mage is a man” he pull down his pants women say sike/ girls say his dick the length of they babies ultrasound height/ |
This was feedback posted for 3-Dimensional
damn one sided u merked this cat good punches and nice personals for a newb dag good job
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yo half of yo shit is lies i never recycle my lines or use them
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Yo we uppin this for votes please vote and drop a link and I will return the favor honestly..........
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This was feedback posted for 3-Dimensional
if i could vote ill vote for u cause of that one line about rufus that mess was crazy
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Im still Uppin for more votes !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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This was feedback posted for lyrical mage
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Voted For: 3-Dimensional
nice verse dropped here by 3-d..: good use of vocab skills there....ur opning was good but the ending was a bit weak and needs some elevation......................................... . ur best punch is: Lyrical Mage this is a lyrical maze/ People might felt you at first now you a lyrical phase/ ur weakest punch is: The fact that you can rhyme a little is still a miracle/ You got to use ya old rhymes so you got a mirror flow/... nice battle..... Vote: 3-D |
Ayo Im Still Uppin for more votes from ya'll so please vote !!!
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Yo Im still uppin for more votes for this battle
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Voted For: 3-Dimensional
Good ....nice...punchlines I liked the baby teathing this you won but I wanna see some deepa shit outta you next time kid. |
Voted For: 3-Dimensional
3-dimensional Lyrical Mage this is a lyrical maze/ People might felt you at first now you a lyrical phase/ ^nice opener good use of words^ I know reading this you ducked from the moment you saw it/ You flows the clothing line boss from 98 its garbage/ ^good personal..kinda weak though^ How you go post your baby picture under flyweight/ I know if your girl saw me she’d be my date/ ^Haha again good personal got him good^ If You even got a girl you probably got a man with new tits added/ You trapped in the closet get out like Rufus you dick addict/ ^good way to mix in r.kellys video...good punch^ The biggest loser in student’s yearbooks is what you had to sign/ Tried to buy punchlines but bankrupt ya clock’s on hammertime/ ^gOOD punch kinda weak^ Somebody shoulda drowned you for using the word lyrical/ The fact that you can rhyme a little is still a miracle/ Good word usage and very hard hitting punch^ You got to use ya old rhymes so you got a mirror flow/ Call this cat an infant he teething on mixtapes and stealing those/ ^best line hard punch right hurr^ Same lines that rappers use to diss his type/ “Lyrical mage is a man” he pull down his pants women say sike/ girls say his dick the length of they babies ultrasound height/ ^HAHAHAH pretty good closer^ Lyrical mage you say you can spit but ill take that chance.... yo ass cant spitt even if you did the rain dance... ^Weak opener not a good punch^ yo say you a legend?man that just too fictional... i cant see yo rhymes even if they were 3 dimensional... ^forced the rhyme right there.....didnt hit hard^ im like a drug persciption with many side effects.... nausia, headaches, and a your whack reality check... ^you talk about urself more than u diss him^ so dont go around calling niggas hos and bitches... just cause you want us dont mean we can grant yo wishes... ^bad closer not a hard hitting punch^ -NO HATE JUST STATING MY OPINION v/3-dimensional RTF! |
^^care to return the favor...vote honestly.......do it up or i will remove the vote!
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Voted For: 3-Dimensional
just a better verse than lyrical mage, nothing special, had some nice flow to it and had some nice punches, but it was just a lil better than lyrical mage and he didnt do as many lines |
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