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Get How good are you? audio wise
yea since everyones been asking me how good i think they are audio wise drop a track and ill give you a full indeph statement on what i think....no bullshit
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www.soundclick.com/leady time to shine...... lol *waits for u to hate*
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leady IMO has to be in the top 3 audio heads in the RV
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word@u spellin indeph my style :cool: |
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thanks man appreciate dat... mad respect especially conciderin all da beef n crap from before |
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that beef is all in the past fams........................ |
ye ye no doubt bruv...... all i need now is da rest of da site to stop sleepin on me lol
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they prolly sleeping on you cause your new to the site but most vets on this site are wack but since there vets people say that they like their music and dont listen to any audio from the new cats in the site......youll get recognized just battle a top audio head.~1~
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yea i kno wat u mean narc... once i vgot time to record for a battle ima see wmho da most respected is n battle em
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damn that shit was nice the way ya flowed and showed emotion about the topic props to both of ya~1~
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^^ thnx man.. appriciate it
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no doubt fam... i didnt like my verse really but it was rushed so ya know lol
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then you might wanna battle EC cause hes respected audio wise |
word EC v Leady....
Oh btw...strobe pm'ed back dere is 7 otha ppl who have put in a request to hold tournies b4 me....so i sad allow it...:thumbup: |
^^ did he say what other tourneys there were?
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yeah EC elevated pretty fast..
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ayooooo stop cloging my thread jesus christ you damn uk heads. anyway ima give my un biased opinion on ya track like i never met you before.....starting with leady...
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ok lets see....what your doing good and need to work on...listeing to time to shine flow/rhyme scheme-you took a interesting rhyme scheme on this beat.....its on point though. your flow is definatly better on the second verse. i only heard one time where i think you slipped. for the most part your flow is on point, and good. delivery/rideing the beat- this is what is making you stand out from the other uk kids on this site, your delivery is pretty good...but when you deliver you chorus you SUCK...i mean in this song ya chrous it sounded nothin like a hook at all. this is where you need to ride the beat, put a little harmony/melody into the hook, or just swtich up ya flow. but overall ya delivery is decent ...can always be tweaked a lil....but WORK ON YOUR HOOKS. pronounciation/breathe control- it may just be the "american heads" but most of the time i have no fuckin clue what ya saying...i find i cnat inderstand the rhymin word really. sometimes i slur my rhymin words too.....or your accent is jus fuckin with me....WORK ON PRONOUNCIATION. ....breathe control for the most part its good, jus before the hook i could hear you inhale. but mixing can fix that... style/lyrics- alright i think its safe to say that most of us are still trying to find or build up or own unique style...your style on this track sounded original your presence and flow and overall sound sounded orginal for the most part....hmm voice, im not one of those cats who judge a track on someones voice. jus cause you dont sound like a big black guy from new york im not gonna hate ya track. voice is you ...do you.....lyrics nothin really stand out. you had a couple of good lines the leady is nice /newspaper line was coo same with the latrine or howeva you spell it line.... What to work on- HOOKS, HOOKS, HOOks, this is your downfall. learn to ride tha beat use the ups and downs of the beat for ya hook make ya voice go up and down. bring in some melody (layer ya hook with like 5 voccal tracks).....Also work On Anounciation (i bielive is the correct term)....cause if i cant understand you than im not buying ya track/ cd..... done with indpeh critizing.... |
respect... some people dont understand me but like u said its only americans dat find dat problem but even then its only a select few americans... so i reall feel its down to accent wit dat problem.. hooks aint my strong point but im not a hook man... im all bout bein raw..... i dont do mharmonic n melodic deliveries lol im strictly raw to da point... dat is basically wat UK hip hop is aswell... listen to most uk peeps mhooks n its not melodic its raw n aggressive... but i also noticed da hook comes down to personal taste cos i know alot of peeps dat love it but dey into dat raw type.. but others dont n dey into dat more melodic type get me.... but nice1 on da break down
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ok e.c. is next...ill do it in a bit, i gotta make some phone calls real quick
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ok listening to life of a legend. flow/rhyme scheme-ok ya flow is on point, but its not smooth, its choppy in some points ex. instead of saying i have mon-ey.... say i have money. jus smooth it out a bit more polish it up. rhyme scheme is basic a/b style..... delivery/riding beat- ok i was impressed with you on this track....usually ya real quiet, but ya delivery was pretty good i was feelin it a little...riding the beat you did this well....even in ya verse you rode the beat well...see leady on his chorus he rode the beat, and didnt jus spit a couple bars over and over. you rode the beat well chorus was some what catchy....delivery can be worked on and tweaked pronounciation/breathe contro- ok this is the same as leady pretty much...it may just be the "american heads" but most of the time i have no fuckin clue what ya saying...i find i cant understand the rhymin word really. sometimes i slur my rhymin words too.....or your accent is jus fuckin with me....WORK ON PRONOUNCIATION. ....breathe control for the most part its good, jus before the hook i could hear you inhale. but mixing can fix that... style/lyrics- ok ya didnt try and imitate anyone so style for now you are pretty straight, i can tell ya still trying to find ya own style to settle into....lyrics they were pretty good considering you were telling a story instead of goin for punches....overall the lyrics were good for this story, they were a lil corny at times but overal pretty straight what to work on - smoothen out ya flow, work on ya lyrics a lil bit.....work on announciation.....speak clear.... |
ok will do tradmarx later i got some shit to do
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word....check out the perfect woman......make sure u listen till end cause it has a lil twist...nothin big
soundclick link in sig.... |
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thnx man. i appriciate the time u taken to do this safe, n thanks... |
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/b...tionz_music.htm
Hit up either one of the first 2 on my page, or both :thumbup: I love you New Method :love: |
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/6/c...ymore_music.htm listen to this shit man
dont sleep on it |
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ok i saw ya pic and was like dammnnn this kid look like some fat ass white kid that got a mic for christmas. ...enough said listening to live on stage... flow/rhyme scheme-ok ya flow is smooth, but it needs work, cause its on and off, sometimes you speed up or slow down to land ya rhymes on the snare....you also land ya shit late and early you need to time ya shit and land it better....rhyme scheme is aight, needs work to make ya flow better.... delivery/riding the beat- ok personally i think ya voice is sick lol i dont know why but i love it. thats what makes ya delivery good ....like when you first come in im like damn, soo ya delivery is nice..riding the beat is kinda on the fence....cause sometimes you do it good other times blahhhh jus landing rhymes on the snare.. pronounciation/breathe control,- ya prounciation is good, i can clearly understand...some words you need to announciate better but overall good announciation...breathe control was pretty good considering you were straight flowin never really took small punches...did you punch in at all? or did you edit out ya breaths because i cant really hear any noticable breathing... lyrics/style-ok this is where you are lackin ....lyrics and style...you need to get more original stlye and lyrics....your a fat white kid, not a big black man in harlem....drop the 50 cent lyrics, you dont stab peoplem, you dont have gangstas ect. and by ya lyrics ya style is comin off like you tryin to be a thug, but your not....find a unique style do you... what to work on-LYRICS LYRICS LYRICS...flow polish it up.....ya chrous isnt bad just add some dubs or double ya vocal layers so we can tell its a chorus....and finally quality in the begining i could hear the HISSSS like whoa...work on ya production a bit.... |
hello wes =/
my s click in my sig.Don't listen to the topical battle quality is asslick --__-- do a indeph look at indeph :) |
lol at wes city thinkin he sum audio coneseur....or sum shit
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lol @ kids not caring about your opinion....jealousy
and the listes is indeph ...invek...blak~magik |
listening to indpehs-born alone....
ok jus had to get this out of the way ...QUALITY IS SHITTTTTT, its gaping ass vagina shitt dick fuck cunt bitch tits.... flow/rhyme scheme-flow is pretty straight....its smooth for the most part, im feeling it, rhyme scheme is good, oyu switch it up and dont jus go a/b scheme like a lotta cats. ya didnt rush or slow down to fit ya words in nice... delivery/riding the beat- aight this is where i thin you lackin son...for one up ya delivery, i know you got balls i hear you in the yahoo chat room son , use em....i know you can unleash ya emotion on a track so DOO IT!!. there was only one time ya emotion was good you yelled "OHH SHIT!! and im like who cares" but most of hte time you were kinda monotone. put ya whole voice into it not jus one part of it. pronunciation/breathe control- good on both from what i can hear....but i cant hear much cause of your SHITTY ASS FAG QUALITY!!!!...let me produce ya tracks ill do wonders lyrics and style- this is no problem for you, i heard you on yahoo saying that you want to be unique you want every line to be a hott line ect....so jus kee p doin you....YOU HAVE FAGGOT GAY DICK RETARD QUALITTY!!!...excuse my tarretts what to work on- riding the beat/delivery, EMOTION....and last but not least............................................. .................................................. ..... . . . . . . . . .. . . . . .ya mutha fuckin quality |
thank yaz wessy :)
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listeing to lifes a song flow/rhyme scheme-you suck..........haha no....this is dope flow is smooth and on point, your dad must have been black.... lol rhyme scheme can be a little bit more complex in some points....but flow is on point and smooth very polished....wait i heard one spot where you slipped a little delivery/riding the beat- you do both of these very well what can else can i say... im feelin ya emotion...and you ride the beat very well very well....... pronounciation/breathe control- good and good lyrics/ style- lyrics are good you can always up ya lyrics.....style ya doin you so keep it up...and yea...overall ya style comes with time....so give it time to find ya own unique style what to work on- quality, quality, maybe ...a more complex rhyme scheme, and complex lyrics maybe .... overall just polsih ya shit up more and keep droppin tracsk |
woooooooorrrrrrrrrrrddddddddddd!!!!!!!!
Thanx man |
no prob........get at me with a beat so we can collab
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ok invek aka ike is next
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