!Impact! vs ~k-trini~
 

Battle Rules:

12 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-23-05 at 05:02 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

!Impact! has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-20-05 05:04 PM.

ok

If i keep rollin and i ceep merkin/
it'll be your jaw guy im hurtin/

Draw for the shank nd start insertin/
and i'll leave real blood still squirtin/

In the night... you'll catch me lerkin/
I'll stab you in the back while your workin/

Strangle you with some wire or string/
Body built upper-cut then i swing/

Ill brake your heart just like a disket/
and i wont find trini just like a comet/

Come heavely just like the blitz/
and ill take you to parts and ill take you to bitz/

~K-Trini~ has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-20-05 05:43 PM.

This cat's about as far from dopeness as Pluto is to the sun
He shows off as much skill as he does his record
.................................................. ................................NONE
Impact and K-Trini in the title is like seeing a cat-in-rain
Your idea of having impact is having two of these(!) at-your-name
Lines stretched all over the place,he like a squid-out-of -view
I'ma KO you,but you used to it,cause Wes City already did-it-to-you
Between him and me,lyrically,phyysically,it's done,he got no combat
Him storing his AOL CD in a box is how he's ever "Im-Pack"
Gangsta?,me-yeah,you-no9,cause you the one rumbling-with-cops
And just like the evening rain,this cat crumbles-in-drops
Standing front me right 'hair',I outta cut him like a 'barber'
This bitch doesn't drop bombs,like the opposite a pearl harbor

Meh....not my best....but I still merk this newb.

Lmao....................5-0 me.............keep practicing ImPact.

Try making ya rhymes longer,add some worplay and shit.

Voted For: ~K-Trini~

Meh............................................... ........................

This was feedback posted for !Impact!
 

You easily took this by far kid, but I can't vote.

^^wtf???
You tellin Impact he took this by far???

AN why can't ya vote?

You'd get it DQ'd if I voted against you. You'd call it hate.

^^NO I won't.......as long as ya explain it...I won;t get it removed,

And you must be an asshole to think this kid got me easily.He didn't have one punch.

Lol you didn't have any punches either. All your concepts sucked ass, too. Don't cry because you lost.

Trini why are u up ur own ass?
Dont be so confident. I might be new but i dont think ur verses were very good or rhymed for that matter.
Why is somebody an asshole for thinking mine was better than urs? Everybody has a different taste

At least I had concepts and I had multis & personals

The kid had no wordplay,newb structure,basic rhyme sheme,and no punches.

His whole verse was comprised of gangsta talk.Talkin about how he gonna beat me up or kill me while we on the net.Kiddo...that shit dun impress nobody here.Go in real life with that gangsta talk.
And fuck off 9th. degree,,,,you an asshole to think I lost.

i came below my minimum....but I still merked this newb.

Fine If you win you win man!! but thers no need to cry coz someone didnt like your verse m8you acted like a lil boy which you probs are so just look at ma avatar thats wot i think of yah ... ill see yah around m8

Voted For: ~K-Trini~

ayo homie your was just ill man more word play homie check

this cats about as far from dopeness as ploto is to the sun.
he shows off as much skill as he does his record...............................NONE
now that lines originality at it's best

if i keep rollin i ceep merkin
it'll be your jaw guy im hurtin
now that line sucked man he KO your as impact!!!!!!!!!!!!hahaha................

ayo check

let me school lil newb and let me take him back to school
bitch make ur lines longer...k-tini kidnapped this fool.
bitch dont know shit look at his vocab and structure
this was no contest might as well impact cuz u a buster.
yea you may think you dope bitch look twice CLICK CLACK.
homie that's the sound of my clock thats gon make a real impact.
keepin it goin lessons will hit ya ears catch contact
like a hitman i get pain for keepin wanna be's dispatched
!!!!!!!!!!!!hahaha..............vote goes to k trini no doubt..........keep elevatin impact

This was feedback posted for ~K-Trini~
 

i cant vote on this cause trini is in my crew but damn nice drop trini

ah shit DAMN i forgot yo narc.................PM me i vote has to be disqualified cuz im in his crew.........shit i forgot o well then that just feed back homie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Voted For: ~K-Trini~

yo k-trini won this battle man he had so punches and wordplay
impact elevate battle more to work on your punches personals word play and all around flow man not hate

return the favor at my battle here aight:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=200482

Voted For: ~K-Trini~

If i keep rollin and i ceep merkin/
it'll be your jaw guy im hurtin/
wack no punch stop glorifyin urself

Draw for the shank nd start insertin/
and i'll leave real blood still squirtin/
once again no punch

In the night... you'll catch me lerkin/
I'll stab you in the back while your workin/
no punch

Strangle you with some wire or string/
Body built upper-cut then i swing/
wack ur not hard so stop trying

Ill brake your heart just like a disket/
and i wont find trini just like a comet/
wack didnt even rhyme :/

Come heavely just like the blitz/
and ill take you to parts and ill take you to bitz/
no punch really
all ur lines were corny and played so work on creativity metaphores and vocab oh yea and try to put a personal in ur battle
ok other kid no need to break it down ur flow was better but u had personasls
all i can say is work on ur vocab and try not to use as many fillers