MC:Philosopher vs Chalk Clorox
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 07-21-05 at 06:51 PM

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Chalk Clorox has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-20-05 06:55 PM.

MC:Philosopher has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-20-05 07:28 PM.

yo ima leave a chalk outline of your body like a stencil
and kill you with no point like a broken pencil
you sentenced to lifetime loser time for u to appeal
but ima leave a bigger stain on your record than your own name will
going up side brick walls is the only way ull be a head bangger
im no stranger.....you look at your record and see your own danger
you couldnt sipt freshness if your tooth-paste i a new thread
this cats been runnin like a jack ass and still cant get ahead
you couldnt cds(see these) flows if they were burned on a memorex
they only way hes a head of me in rhyming iz cuz he said he suck in text**

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okay okay voting shall atart and they cant read the second one untill they vote dawg

Voted For: MC:Philosopher

ill kick this off by psycin uou out,
you couldnt beat me if you had a psycik tellin you what im about,
{made no sence 2/10}

your whack you really are,
you need a ghost rider(writer),
cause you cant handle bars,
{4/10saw what you were diong but didnt do it}
for a philosopher you have no tech(technology),
and you suck at text,ill sever your flesh,like virgins after sex,
im here to say,
{no punch here 0/10}
that chrime pays,
ill wave bi (bye)
cause im rippin you apart both ways
{didnt hit 3/10}


yo ima leave a chalk outline of your body like a stencil
and kill you with no point like a broken pencil
{played but good opener..better than his 5/10}
you sentenced to lifetime loser time for u to appeal
but ima leave a bigger stain on your record than your own name will
{nice personal 7-10}
going up side brick walls is the only way ull be a head bangger
im no stranger.....you look at your record and see your own danger{didnt hit hard but cool 5/10}
you couldnt sipt freshness if your tooth-paste i a new thread
this cats been runnin like a jack ass and still cant get ahead
{should have switched but 5/10}
you couldnt cds(see these) flows if they were burned on a memorex
they only way hes a head of me in rhyming iz cuz he said he suck in text**
{played but killin his shit 6/10 should have switched this two}
you killed this cat man keep diong your thing...vote on my battle

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=201011

This was feedback posted for Chalk Clorox
 

fucking weak battle.................................

This was feedback posted for Chalk Clorox
 

Chalk Clorox . . . i think MC:Philosopher has this one . . . but i do like ur closer "ill wave bi (bye)
cause im rippin you apart both ways" but that was really the only good part of ur flow . . . structure needs work and MC:Philosppher i got the closer and all but i think u could have reworded better . . . NO HATE

uppin for votes drop a link and we will hit u back

Voted For: MC:Philosopher

Ok weak battle here, wtf at chalk that was mad weak especially as you have an ego.

Stick to topicals.

Philosopher gets my vote due to the fact he actually threw punches had a bit of wordpolay and better concepts, although a few were played imo.

He had a better structure / flow / punches / overall verse.

Easy battle.

NO HATE

RTF IN 3 DAYS OR THIS VOTE WILL BE DQUED.

uppin for votes............................................. ..

Voted For: MC:Philosopher

Aight My vote goes to MC, Cause his flowed alot better and actually had some punches up in it, aswell as the structure was good, Both yah have to elevate, Yah gotta concentrate on ya Punches and making them hit harder. CHalk you hade some wack lines in there, Just work at it... No hate.

Return the Fav, On a battle in my Sig..... Please

This was feedback posted for Chalk Clorox
 

props for droppin chalk u knew u werent great but u tried so props nice to see u back
good battle to both of u

uppin for votes............................................. .. thanx for the feedback

Voted For: MC:Philosopher

one sided..

punches - mc.
everything - mc.

chalk your text really needs elevating. you said you suck, & it showed in your verse.
no hate to you chalk..

Voted For: Chalk Clorox

philosiphiers closer...this is what i got out of it...

you couldnt cds(see these) flows if they were burned on a memorex
they only way hes a head of me in rhyming iz cuz he said he suck in text**

^ basically what you said was, he is ahead of you in rhyming, because he said he sucks.........which makes no fucking sense........and the rest of your verse was shit too

so i vote for chalk, cause his closer was pretty neat, although weak, still beat anything from philosiphers sheet (shit) :cool:

Voted For: MC:Philosopher

Mc;philosopha got this better structure and harder punches...philosopha you had really good opener and closer and nice personals and punches

chalk seriously you need to elevate..your structure was horrible. and your punches were weak.....

yo ima leave a chalk outline of your body like a stencil
and kill you with no point like a broken pencil
you couldnt cds(see these) flows if they were burned on a memorex
they only way hes a head of me in rhyming iz cuz he said he suck in text**

vs.

nothin