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GKillaz05 vs Oreo
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10 Linez No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting ...REMATCH! Oero won a close battle last time... ...Was down to 4-4 when Oreo got The last vote... Good Luck homie, no hate :thumbup: Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 07-21-05 at 06:37 AM Must drop verse in 180 minutes after check in. |
GKillaz05 has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-21-05 12:39 AM.
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Oreo couldnt make my head bounce if he rapped on a trampoline...
Your personals are made up, must be trapped behind a TV screen... Its easy to guess between me and you who will take dis victory... You think you rap great but you suck kids fake n contradictory... Fuckin Oero think your black but you just white in the middle... Shoulda been called instrument.. kids is played like a fiddle... Your punches are brittle man thats why they always fall apart... Kid begs for his votes Cant wait til you and your D/R's depart... Oero loves to put nuts in his mouth... like he craves cashews... Everyone knows your queer... when you listen to Dave Matthews... |
oreo has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-21-05 12:40 AM.
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much respect for you killaz........
my last battle here havent battled in 5 months but its straight not worried if i win or lose cuz im gone after this you like to "beat it" and to touch lil kids in thier neverland to be contraversial only hot thoughts you could get if you were jackson during his pepsi commercial your past number 1 cuz your just a zero, rocking bootleg fur,cat hair not chinnchillas you murdered the hoods gansta tony the tiger just to be a cerial "g killaz" burn some money so you can pretend the presidents are people you need some zombies in your hood to make your residents evil the only ice and rocks you have to move is shoveling hail and sleet you could ride a beat if your drove with an mp3 playa on top of your car seat i got you shook from the last battle,i hear you heart its louder the faster it beats your must have lost your visa on your road cuz you have no credit on your streets |
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Voted For: oreo
aight oreo got this one man Gkillaz: Oreo couldnt make my head bounce if he rapped on a trampoline... Your personals are made up, must be trapped behind a TV screen... Its easy to guess between me and you who will take dis victory... You think you rap great but you suck kids fake n contradictory... Fuckin Oero think your black but you just white in the middle... Shoulda been called instrument.. kids is played like a fiddle... Your punches are brittle man thats why they always fall apart... Kid begs for his votes Cant wait til you and your D/R's depart... Oero loves to put nuts in his mouth... like he craves cashews... Everyone knows your queer... when you listen to Dave Matthews... 5/10 verse was pretty good but could have been better u had some attempts at personals but they could have been harder ~vs~ oreo: you like to "beat it" and to touch lil kids in thier neverland to be contraversial only hot thoughts you could get if you were jackson during his pepsi commercial your past number 1 cuz your just a zero, rocking bootleg fur,cat hair not chinnchillas you murdered the hoods gansta tony the tiger just to be a cerial "g killaz" burn some money so you can pretend the presidents are people you need some zombies in your hood to make your residents evil the only ice and rocks you have to move is shoveling hail and sleet you could ride a beat if your drove with an mp3 playa on top of your car seat i got you shook from the last battle,i hear you heart its louder the faster it beats your must have lost your visa on your road cuz you have no credit on your streets 7/10 nice verse also u had some good punches and personals your personal about the cerial won me over though nice battle |
dawg you couldnt take me if i was giving myself away come on now
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that was towards chalk my fault for the freepost but i dont even know oreo man just dropped an honest vote like u did chalk u voted for him to so he most have done aight
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upppin and thanks for the feed....the freeposting cool cuz it ups this lol
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good battle g man..........yeah that vote was gay.
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Voted For: GKillaz05
Flow-hmm....both even here.But Oreo...next time structure your verse better for a better read. Punches-Again...almost even.but i gotta give it to Gkillaz due to oreo's played punches.Visa/credit lines are played our nowadays.There's even one in the tutorials. Multis-all of Gkillaz lines ended with words with more than one syllable Vocab-Both of you good here.But GKillaz had it...contradictory....one of the best vocabulary votes used on this site. Originality-Like I said before...Oreo had some played lines.Like Visa/credit...so Gkillaz has this. Personals-Both of you need to elevate here big time Very close battle Vote-Gkillaz VOTE IN LINK BELOW http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=202387 |
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^^return the favor in my vote....please...........
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^^^return the favor in link in my vote please,,,,,
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Voted For: oreo
gkillaz05: Oreo couldnt make my head bounce if he rapped on a trampoline... Your personals are made up, must be trapped behind a TV screen... ^^^DA 1ST LINE WAS DECENT..BUT DA SECOND 1 WAS HORRIBLE LOL Its easy to guess between me and you who will take dis victory... You think you rap great but you suck kids fake n contradictory... ^^^^NO Fuckin Oero think your black but you just white in the middle... Shoulda been called instrument.. kids is played like a fiddle... ^^OKAY Your punches are brittle man thats why they always fall apart... Kid begs for his votes Cant wait til you and your D/R's depart... ^^^WACK Oero loves to put nuts in his mouth... like he craves cashews... Everyone knows your queer... when you listen to Dave Matthews... ^^^NO....IN YA WHOLE VERSE U HAD NO CREATIVITY OR EVEN A GOOD PERSONAL FAM oreo: you like to "beat it" and to touch lil kids in thier neverland to be contraversial only hot thoughts you could get if you were jackson during his pepsi commercial ^^^DECENT...MJ LINES R PLAYED AS FUKK your past number 1 cuz your just a zero, rocking bootleg fur,cat hair not chinnchillas you murdered the hoods gansta tony the tiger just to be a cerial "g killaz" ^^^LOL...DIS WAS FUNNY burn some money so you can pretend the presidents are people you need some zombies in your hood to make your residents evil ^^^WHOOO...ORIGINAL I NEVA SEEN DIS AND IT WAS WORDED PERFECTLY the only ice and rocks you have to move is shoveling hail and sleet you could ride a beat if your drove with an mp3 playa on top of your car seat ^^^^OKAY NOW DAT WAS SUPER WACK LOL..U WERE TRYIN 2 HARD i got you shook from the last battle,i hear you heart its louder the faster it beats your must have lost your visa on your road cuz you have no credit on your streets ^^^GOOD PUNCH.. V/OREO....2 ME DIS WAS A VERY WUN SIDED BATTLE OREO WAS VERY CREATIVE AND CAME WITH SOME ORIGINAL SHIT...WHILE GKILLAZ VERSE WAS VERY BORIN LOL REAL TALK RETURN DA FAVOR |
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Voted For: oreo
ok Oreo got this with better punches but both u guys do need to up ur skills, especially structure, also Oreo u could use more flow as well, but G ur punches really didnt do much but u did flow good <table style=filter:GLOW(color=Green)>V/Oreo</table> jsut cuz he had harder punches |
^^ and please vote on the battles in my sig they have been open way too long
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Voted For: oreo
Oreo couldnt make my head bounce if he rapped on a trampoline... Your personals are made up, must be trapped behind a TV screen... aight.. no punch... Its easy to guess between me and you who will take dis victory... You think you rap great but you suck kids fake n contradictory... ok... Fuckin Oero think your black but you just white in the middle... Shoulda been called instrument.. kids is played like a fiddle... aight.. Your punches are brittle man thats why they always fall apart... Kid begs for his votes Cant wait til you and your D/R's depart... aight.... Oero loves to put nuts in his mouth... like he craves cashews... Everyone knows your queer... when you listen to Dave Matthews... ha decent and aight ending but noting stood out besides this last bar elevate ya diss and punches fam but not a bad drop... 6.0 you like to "beat it" and to touch lil kids in thier neverland to be contraversial only hot thoughts you could get if you were jackson during his pepsi commercial ha decent start... your past number 1 cuz your just a zero, rocking bootleg fur,cat hair not chinnchillas you murdered the hoods gansta tony the tiger just to be a cerial "g killaz" ha good punch and more creative so far... burn some money so you can pretend the presidents are people you need some zombies in your hood to make your residents evil good im feeling it... the only ice and rocks you have to move is shoveling hail and sleet you could ride a beat if your drove with an mp3 playa on top of your car seat decent.. i got you shook from the last battle,i hear you heart its louder the faster it beats your must have lost your visa on your road cuz you have no credit on your streets decent ending.. man u had creative punches look like u focus more, flow well punches effective and all around tight drop... 8.5/10 he won hands down... |
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Voted For: oreo
Structure-Gkillaz had nice structure had it flowin nice, oreo ur lines was mad stretched make each line end at the same point.up on that yo Vocab-Oreo had better vocab, caught my eye a couple timies, but nothing special...gkillaz had poor vocab both up on that as ur verse goes on enhance ur vocab so it is more enjoyable to read...both up on that! Multis-Both really lacked multis nothing appealing to my eye in this catergorie at all...both up on multis u 2 should no better, no hate yo Personals-Oreo Had better personals that weree more plain to see....Gkillaz ur personals werent appealing nor noticable man up on that fo real. Punches-Oreo had better fresher punches that hit hard fa sho man....Gkillaz when u throw a punch make sure it actually hits ur opponent, no hate just stating true feedback!..... Originality-Oreo had tight fresh verse everything was tight about it except structure, Gkillaz had only the good flow going for him wasnt feelin his disses yo V/oreo RTF if you would, sincce i took the time to peep ur battle. |
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