4fil vs afropimp
 

Battle Rules:

10 - 17 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-21-05 at 02:08 AM

Must drop verse in 45 minutes after check in.

afropimp has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-21-05 01:39 AM.

just call me pimp cuz my fro is now gone
or call me daddy cuz i fucked ya mom
leave ya cracked like tha star in the bottom of my sig
dont win cuz i may bring pain where your fam lives
aint no stoppin the poppin one shot i got him
take the tek to ya neck breathe ya last breath
now ur left wit death cuz u wanted respect..wat a wreck
are u 4 rill ill 4 fill ya whole griil wit 45. shots that kill
im illl and welcome back fuck a verse ill win just sayin rap
rat-a-tat-tat tha sound a da gat..
as it spray and lay yo body flat
im one of da cleanest but fa sho da meanest
leave yo hoe in da hospital cuz she O.D on my penis
so who wanna battle this one done
you was so seriuos but to me this is fun

4fil has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-21-05 02:03 AM.

*Ahem*

The dudes a royal ass hole.............. And he’s acting like he’s rich
Keeps his dog close to him Cause the closest he gets to a bitch
10 - 17 lines???............. This kids got newb written all over him
From when you clicked accept............ the battle was over then
He claims he's layal to the game what about to words he speaks?
cause giving me a good battle was a promise he failed to keep
Your living on thin ice.... so watch your step this battles heating up
I'd post a picture of your face.... but then the ice might crack up
I checked this kids dental records............ It says he got braces
Wait what’s this? The doctor also said that he found sperm traces
He flips beef like he flips the script… so I’ll cook him with ease
The Pimp’s styles tasty... Only Cause he works over at wendies
The Pimp’s Running away…. While his words are at a stand still
No wonder the kid flows well… his careers aimed down hill

Good luck........ :thumbup:

Uppin does any body vote anymore???
Nice try4

This was feedback posted for 4fil
 

u killed him all his shit was played and no punches props to both of yal though u ready for that crew battle?

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Voted For: 4fil

nice battle mayne...

good use of vocab wit a good opening and closure...ur punches were a bit weak and u need to elevate.......

the structure was good and all but the use of words was weak and so was the use of ur rhyming skills.......
i dont know what to say about your verbal usage but nice battle dawwg...













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yo 4fil dat wuz tight homie!!! You won eazyly homie!! 1!!

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Voted For: 4fil

eh easy onesided battle... 4fil had a overall better verse i thought he had better wordplay structure. and his punches were more complex.. overall nice job. work on your metas a lil more though you could get more crafty i think...
afropimp weak verse... i think you need to work on your structure and your punches.. go read old battles and elevate some more... overall one sided

Vote... 4FIL

rtf... and vote on this

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...875#post2324875

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This was feedback posted for 4fil
 

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Voted For: 4fil

The dudes a royal ass hole.............. And he’s acting like he’s rich
Keeps his dog close to him Cause the closest he gets to a bitch
10 - 17 lines???............. This kids got newb written all over him
From when you clicked accept............ the battle was over then
He claims he's layal to the game what about to words he speaks?
cause giving me a good battle was a promise he failed to keep
Your living on thin ice.... so watch your step this battles heating up
I'd post a picture of your face.... but then the ice might crack up
I checked this kids dental records............ It says he got braces
Wait what’s this? The doctor also said that he found sperm traces
He flips beef like he flips the script… so I’ll cook him with ease
The Pimp’s styles tasty... Only Cause he works over at wendies
The Pimp’s Running away…. While his words are at a stand still
No wonder the kid flows well… his careers aimed down hill

VS.

NOTHING.

V - 4fil.