blackfrostbite vs Wayne
 

Battle Rules:

16 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 50

Check in by: 07-21-05 at 11:03 AM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

blackfrostbite has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-21-05 10:34 AM.

Wayne has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-21-05 10:44 AM.

nigga when i get through wit you,you gone call a truce/
cuz you fight worth shit,even if ya first name was bruce/
you call yaself a rapper but i geuss you don't remember/
cuz just like lil wayne,the dips won't be gettin a new member/
nigga you wack change yo tactics/
call up birdman and give him back his rap attics/
you battlin a noob who is rap addict/
why you lie i classify class,and yo ass is just sickening/(info on him in a moment)
nigga you live a lie through da internet/
cuz ya rhymes and ya fake crew intersect/
nigga you from da 313,aint no one rollin wit you now/
Detroit stood to see me,when dae saw you,dae sat back down/
yo you be smokin and spitin up ya lungs/
.......... ya smell dat you pollutin' site son/
dis is mah win,quit rappin',here let me rip out ya tongue/
matter of fact,put this rhyme to ya temple,and pull da trigga of dis gun/

its all right here,his so called lyfe
click here

By now u RUNNIN FOR HELP cause im puttin a STUNT ON YA HEALTH fuck ya crew the voters spoke "CB4 WON IT HIMSELF"// Get ya boys,my MISTAKE YA NAMELESS im gettin challenged just to MAKE KIDS FAMOUS but ya ~lame hits~ couldn`t ~tame shit~ when da crap u CREATE IS ENTERTAINLESS//
Against me ur a FOOL TO COMPARE must be steam powered cause ur FULL OF HOT AIR, n readin my verse got u slamin shit and PULLIN YA HAIR//
Braggin bout yaself nothin more than RELUCTANT LIES while u self DESTRUCT INSIDE are u really "blind"? u can`t win opein ya FUCKIN EYES//

Finish These Faggots Off!

Your SHOOK IN THIS DO OR DIE ill posses ya ass make it LOOK LIKE SUCIDE (get it?) fuck u CROOKS i`ve made ya CREW GO HIDE//
Real FAST GET DISHEVELED by the WRAITH OF A DEVIL even if u try an climb u jus get BLAST FROM MY LEVEL//

listen...the BESTS-SPOKEN got sundin to leave ya'll CHEST-OPEN, have ya BREATH-STOLEN STRETCH-JOINTS-BITCH leave the scene disgusting wif TECHS-SMOKIN!!!

UR-RYHMES-DEFECTIVE My LINES-CONNECTED,
Right to ur jaw to LEAVE-UR-MINDS-DISLEXIC!!!

This was feedback posted for blackfrostbite
 

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This was feedback posted for Wayne
 

wayne took this, but i aint votin

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Voted For: Wayne

Yo this was a pretty tight battle, you both came pretty strong, it was a hard battle to judge, Both had good punchlines, but i think wayne came a little harder in that aspect, Black had better flow, and was easier to read and better structure, But i think Wayne came harder with the punches and personals, witch took it for me.. Good Battle No hate..

Return a Honest vote to one of my battles in my sig.. Please

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This was feedback posted for Wayne
 

ok nice abttle yall jus wanna see the pollz and see my crew is doin good....

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Voted For: Wayne

You had great confidence in this battle.....u used good words for the opening but ur closing was weak and needs elevation.....

vote: wayne

Voted For: Wayne

Wayne's shit was actually pretty nice.
Aside from ALL-THE-CAPS and //'s and ~'s and (get it?)'s

With a normal structure, It would be a nice verse.

As for Black, you can just tell he's a newbie from the structure and his set up of punches, in a str8 up mother goose way. But he'll get better.

RTF with an Honest Vote Here.
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=201559

Voted For: Wayne

Blackfrostbite- i see that you have elevated from your other battles....this battle you had a lil more vocab and you wasn't wit all that gun-play and shit...your punches still need to more structured and your personals well you just need to elevate in that section...but good verse for you




Wayne- your verse was the obvious favorite in this battle...your lines were complex had vocab and multis...your punches were ok...didn't really hit like that...your personals were also ok...but nice verse all around...

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Voted For: Wayne

Wayne won Easily....................................