DoContinue vs Stanza
 

Battle Rules:

6 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting



Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-21-05 at 07:26 PM

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Stanza has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-21-05 06:39 PM.

DoContinue has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-21-05 07:11 PM.

time to make this bastard hurt, blast his shirt, Stanza RAW? he aint
put his polls in tha catholic church and we still not lookin up to St.
He switched crews now RAW IS WAR... so its time that i crack down
he wanna headbang? :headbang: does this punk like ROCK? well im finna lay the smackdown!!
We'll never see him contact lines, or spit wit a nice rhyme
his punches connect like women's TV-only once in a LIFETIME!!


the second line was a play on wrestling...monday night RAW...

Man I Got This win Yo You Suck Ass lol

I cant beleave I actually wasted my lines on yo wack ass

Voted For: Stanza

Beatin You Is Gonna Be Funny like Chris Rock Becomin Dope In Ya Sig
6-0 Battle Rec...5 from No Shows....25$ on Hand....Yeah You Livin Big
...aight opener 6/10
Waitin On Dude to Throw a Punch?...Id Rather wait for The Dead To Rise
Because I See Through This Dude Like He Had Rental Wrap As a Disquise
....lol...nice 8/10
Im Stoppin The Dude Sickness Like Medical Aids Clearin Yo Infections
He say He Delivers Punchez But..The Server Cannot be found..
Like Lost internet Connections
.....lol good closer 8/10
22/30...nice one u did very good job here nice battle and nice punches kept the verse interestin and fun....they were hittin hard too...fav. was closer

time to make this bastard hurt, blast his shirt, Stanza RAW? he aint
put his polls in tha catholic church and we still not lookin up to St.
aight opener 4/10
He switched crews now RAW IS WAR... so its time that i crack down
he wanna headbang? does this punk like ROCK? well im finna lay the smackdown!!
aight good wordplay there 6/10
We'll never see him contact lines, or spit wit a nice rhyme
his punches connect like women's TV-only once in a LIFETIME!!
...lol nice closer hard hittin 8/10
18/30
ok nice punches here as well but didnt feel ur opener taht much culda been a tie there but ur opener was very weak need to improve on that.....but it was an aight thing jus keep it up but that closerbut the rock and smackdown was good though wrestling is old so didnt it that hard as uwanted to....

v/ Stanza verse was a lil better harder punches.....

RTF wit a honest vote in either battles in my link or vote gets removed........thnx in advance.......

Voted For: Stanza

A'ight...this was pretty one sided...Stanza came with harder punches...decent flow from both...DoContinue...I liked that play on wrestling, but it wasn't enough to take this...:(...but yeah this was a pretty one sided battle...Stanza gets it for comin a lil harder...

No hate...

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Voted For: Stanza

Stanza
eatin You Is Gonna Be Funny like Chris Rock Becomin Dope In Ya Sig
6-0 Battle Rec...5 from No Shows....25$ on Hand....Yeah You Livin Big
Statement and weak punch.
Waitin On Dude to Throw a Punch?...Id Rather wait for The Dead To Rise
Because I See Through This Dude Like He Had Rental Wrap As a Disquise
I blah blah blah.
Im Stoppin The Dude Sickness Like Medical Aids Clearin Yo Infections
He say He Delivers Punchez But..The Server Cannot be found.. Like Lost internet Connections
Ohh, I actually liked this closer. Cept for the set up.

Overall, I don't see why you say you are amazing. You make statements and go "I will, I do" blah blah blah. Work on making punches, not statements or self glorification lines.

DoContinue
time to make this bastard hurt, blast his shirt, Stanza RAW? he aint
put his polls in tha catholic church and we still not lookin up to St.
No. Bad personal and set up was weak.
He switched crews now RAW IS WAR... so its time that i crack down
he wanna headbang? does this punk like ROCK? well im finna lay the smackdown!!
I'm gonna line, wordplay was ok.
We'll never see him contact lines, or spit wit a nice rhyme
his punches connect like women's TV-only once in a LIFETIME!!
Ok closer, but nothing that great.

Overall, you didn't have that many punches. Only one I found was your closer. Your wordplay was blah, but that doesn't count as a punch.

Vote goes to Stanza for having a decent closer. The rest of the verses sucked. DC had some wordplay, but that's it. Work on better wordplay Stanza.

v- Stanza

This was feedback posted for DoContinue
 

yo this is ok but i cant vote yet so i'ma say big up on ya choice of words

Voted For: Stanza

time to make this bastard hurt, blast his shirt, Stanza RAW? he aint
put his polls in tha catholic church and we still not lookin up to St.
wack opener nothing
IS WAR... so its time that i crack down
he wanna headbang? does this punk like ROCK? well im finna lay the smackdown!!
personal but i t was mad wack lol
We'll never see him contact lines, or spit wit a nice rhyme
his punches connect like women's TV-only once in a LIFETIME!!
mad played
ok ur lines were pretty played so work on creativity and ur personals werent that great at all to be honest
ur vocab was extremely basic up that overall u need mad elevation

Beatin You Is Gonna Be Funny like Chris Rock Becomin Dope In Ya Sig
6-0 Battle Rec...5 from No Shows....25$ on Hand....Yeah You Livin Big
lol nice personal it was funny
Waitin On Dude to Throw a Punch?...Id Rather wait for The Dead To Rise
Because I See Through This Dude Like He Had Rental Wrap As a Disquise
lol funny 1st line kinda played
Im Stoppin The Dude Sickness Like Medical Aids Clearin Yo Infections
He say He Delivers Punchez But..The Server Cannot be found..
Like Lost internet Connections
good never seen that b4 creative
ur vocba was good to
only thing i could say was try to throw in even more personals but u got this easy

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Voted For: Stanza

Stanza:

Good verse, original concepts, pretty creative...Punches all connected and hit, which is always a good thing :thumbup:
Structure was good, so flow was on point throughout the entire verse...Wordplay was pretty good, but you need to up your vocab. Overall, a strong verse

DoContinue:

Ok verse from you as well. You weren't that creative though, seeing as your smackdown line and womens tv line were both played as a fuckin sport...Didnt really see any real personals in either verse, so that is something that you both need to work on.

Overall, just elevate in being more creative

V/ Stanza

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Now we still uppin ........................

Voted For: Stanza

lol . . . (thats me still laffing @ the closer great job) Stanza gets my vote because of better punches and wordplay . . his drop was more organized and the structure wa a lot better than DoContinue . . . also the flow was better . . easier to follow . . . but what really got me was the wordplay cause DoContinue's drop seemed basic and elementary and Stanza's took it. . . Overall Stanza . . . NO HATE

Voted For: DoContinue

time to make this bastard hurt, blast his shirt, Stanza RAW? he aint
put his polls in tha catholic church and we still not lookin up to St.
We'll never see him contact lines, or spit wit a nice rhyme
his punches connect like women's TV-only once in a LIFETIME
vs.
Im Stoppin The Dude Sickness Like Medical Aids Clearin Yo Infections
He say He Delivers Punchez But..The Server Cannot be found..
Like Lost internet Connections
^^^
but that internet line is decently played and similies dont hit as hard...
...
do had a solid verse even the one i didn't like was still a decent bar.

yo return the fav. link in sig... i wont get this removed if u dont vote cuz im not gay but return one anyway

still uppin ...........................................come on lets get this damn thang closed

Voted For: Stanza

ok . . .
Flow and structure: Stanza took this one cause his flow was easy to follow and rhymes better structure
Wordplay, Meta, all the god stuff: Stanza also gets this because they jsut connected so much better than docontinue's
And my fav. catergory Punches: hands down to stanza no question . . . Overall satnza took this . . No Hate . . .