Chalk Clorox vs Drakel
 

Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No D/R
No Hate

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 07-24-05 at 06:42 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

Drakel has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-23-05 07:51 PM.

word, take a look at this first, to get most of my shit

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=190779

match wits with this bitch? shit, i dont know what to say
so chalk writes up his lines.....but i just brush'em away
now see im confused...9 on ya record and been here for a year
so did you come here to battle....or start a moddling career?
even if he wasnt queer, wouldn't listen to what this faggot called me
cause im not takin anyone seriously looking like dragon ball Z
have no skills dude, you choose to write, but thats your flaw
only hooks you ever put together......are putting on your bras
whack is in his system, wishin he wasn't, but with him its a fuckin virus
so is losing something you like then....or is it the luck of the irish
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gl.

Chalk Clorox has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-23-05 08:11 PM.

nah, i didn't pre-write this, i got really gunned last night, woke up at 1 o'clock and then decided to set up those two battles....wrote that in like a half hour though, just cause im kinda tired

This was feedback posted for Drakel
 

man to he has suffered a nother loss u had a better verse entirely keep it up

Voted For: Drakel

match wits with this bitch? shit, i dont know what to say
so chalk writes up his lines.....but i just brush'em away
have no skills dude, you choose to write, but thats your flaw
only hooks you ever put together......are putting on your bras

vs

NOTHIN...... ur last bar woulda been real hard hittin...... like 2 years ago.... i dont think Chalk expected to win this battle anyways if u see his openin line about not bein able to battle for shit....

Almost every category goes to Drakel includin punches, personals and structure... i guess Chalk had alil flow to it altho the structure was god awful... this battle was pretty one-sided in my opinion

V/Drakel

word, i hear that.....use to be like that when i started......wordness to your effort though.

keep up.

Voted For: Drakel

good battle ya heard

best opening by Drakel:
match wits with this bitch? shit, i dont know what to say
so chalk writes up his lines.....but i just brush'em away
Nice wordplay

Weak closing by chalk boy:
i gatta come sick,or this fight will get worse,
i know if i come whack every one will think i was bitin your verse
a punch but not hard

Best line:
now see im confused...9 on ya record and been here for a year
so did you come here to battle....or start a moddling career?
Nice bar goin on

Weakest line:
have no skills dude, you choose to write, but thats your flaw
only hooks you ever put together......are putting on your bras
No rhyme....didnt seem like a puch...ya need to elevate a tiny bit





















Overall vote is to Drakel

Voted For: Drakel

Drakel... haha ya shit was funny man.... good personals, good hard punches. ya opener was just ok... lacked in a hard punch... good concept but just lacking a little bit. now your closer on the other hand was straight hotness.... excellent closer, funny as hell, hard punch... very good verse here

ya best bar:
now see im confused...9 on ya record and been here for a year
so did you come here to battle....or start a moddling career?

Chalk Clorox... first of all your structure could use some help, if your structure is bad it ruins the flow to your verse. second of all, there was really no personals in your verse, it could of been used for anyone. the only personal in there was the 5000 posts. ya opener wasnt very good, you even dissed yourself in it.....?????? your closer was pretty good... the setup line could of been better. some of your lines were stretch compared to the other line in that bar

ya best bar:
i gatta come sick,or this fight will get worse,
i know if i come whack every one will think i was bitin your verse

lmlo at getting tips from a 2-7 dude.....saying that bar doesn't rhyme, haha

oh well, good lookin.....http://img1.imagetitan.com/img1/1/5/bump.gif

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Voted For: Drakel

Aii

Chalk
Aii MAn Your drop was BasicallY Waht I Expected a Diss at The Post count and A ryme with the word bitch and so On man You drop very Predictable and I think that That Is not hwo you should do it and you Had no punchez jus insults that Sound like you were fussin or somethin man BasicallY you didnt supply what I was lookin for in This battle so I couldnt give you my vote man srry

Drak
You know that we not the coolest peeps but if you wouldve used this verse on me then you wouldve won lol j/k ....but yeah man You really did good in this verse You dropped decent punchez good wordplay and then you had some personals so that really kicked off your verse and basically you toke this battle to the best of your ability and owned it jus like you shouldve ...I wouldve kicked yo ass if you wouldve lost this battle lol Im jus playin man anyway You dropped great Keep it up man You Talented

my v/ Drak

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Voted For: Drakel

chalk:
ill admitt it i cant battle worth shit,
5000 posts and you still havnt elevated bitch,
what do posts gotta do with elevatin? not a good punch/opening
but fuck it, your about to get raped,
cause i dont see your punches stickin like invisable tape,
if his punches are invisible tape, then they DO stick
ill kill this dude,
random line, don't add this if u're over the 10 line limit
leave your body worse than what your life is like,,
your winning chances like,
a dude in karate actually winning a fight,
like rhymes with like, but not very original, and karate people can win fights
put your verse in the mirror so you can reflect your loss,
your verse was writtin yesterday im bustin off top,
first decent punch, at least it makes sense
i gatta come sick,or this fight will get worse,
i know if i come whack every one will think i was bitin your verse
another good punch, good closing

overall- most of your punches didn't make sense, you got more than 10 lines, extra lines hurt ya flow


drakel:
match wits with this bitch? shit, i dont know what to say
so chalk writes up his lines.....but i just brush'em away
good punch/wordplay/personal
now see im confused...9 on ya record and been here for a year
so did you come here to battle....or start a moddling career?
doesn't hit too hard, but ok
even if he wasnt queer, wouldn't listen to what this faggot called me
cause im not takin anyone seriously looking like dragon ball Z
nothin special, ok tho
have no skills dude, you choose to write, but thats your flaw
only hooks you ever put together......are putting on your bras
oooooo diss, chalk wears bras
whack is in his system, wishin he wasn't, but with him its a fuckin virus
so is losing something you like then....or is it the luck of the irish
good closing, but chalk's was better

overall- better punches, good flow, makes sense, wordplay's ok, much better verse

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