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.Barz Of Steel. 07-24-05 05:35 PM

Barz Of Steel, Leady, And Indeph Present...."ACUNAMATATA!"
 
Dont be fooled by the name hoes

No worries bitches, we're still the best :thumbup:



"Acunamatata"

Leady:


the writtens im spittin are rippin you cunts
im a first place MC so chances of u winnin are second to none
im an un-beleivable wordsmith i came to wreck songs
and leave ya crews dispersin like my name was tephlon
but i aint fuckin wit dat bitch.. ill jus kick it wit yall
da kid wanted beef so i started bringin it R.A.W
no-ones weaker than him im beatin this bitch
you cud drop rhymes in brail.. i still aint feelin ya shit
but fuck this shit because yall know im the best
ill start killin you cats......... just to show im a vet
im ruthless n shit bring u n ya clique n its a tragedy
call me an amputee cos ill destroy yall single handidly
its animal cruelty wit wat im spittin on you cats
call me a train because im known to rip it on a track
but im done n thats it now yall know what the crack is
likes the bombings in london this shit is tragic

Hook:

the next time your brain.. thinkin stupid shit...
its time to remind ya brain if you could spit.
cause remember I'm the same one who could rip..
you in a split second so choose it quick

Barz Of Steel:


I use pain to slay haters, aint nobodys name greater
Its like 'fat kids playin' Twister' the way Im the game breaker
I was made to hate fakers, so I come straight n juss nasty
Its like 'throwin' matches at Atari's' the way that I 'Pac heat'
Testin me's like 'sex with convicts'- itll get ya in trouble
Cuz I 'come through in the clutch', like drivin' stickshifts in tunnels
No need to trip or to stumble...cuz I also rock "automatics"
N rhyme so 'stupid dope' Im like retarded drug addicts
Its like pancakes ordered by fat kids-- Im bound to get stacks
My 'pocket's always full' Like QB's about to get sacked
Cant touch this text that I bring hard to disrespect with these mean bars
I 'prey on you fools' like ministers sexin with retards
Leave you left with obscene scars, Barz is rhymin the greatest
My words stay 'Sunnin' kats' like Phoenix signin' free agents
Each of my lines leave ya wasted, I cant help but demand respect
They only thought Jesus was perfect..cuz I hadnt set the standard yet

Hook:

the next time your brain.. thinkin stupid shit...
its time to remind ya brain if you could spit.
cause remember I'm the same one who could rip..
you in a split second so choose it quick


Indeph:

oh shit! indeph on dude, its more then mic check one two.
cause I'm countin sheep,niggas here slept on you.
I got rest when I'm readin,they expectin I'm leavin.
but question:will they all get depressed when I'm breathin?
fuck them fuck you you too,damn right I mean you.
I got used to usin these hand mics,but you gotta read too.
enjoy my text,for now,but those annoyed of deph.
cause get tricked cause I got some decoys void for death.
the last time I was called wack,was way back then....
I dropped some wack shit.....................so it aint happen.
so next time your lips get loose,forget the rules.
forget the law.this the era of when shit get raw...
and the principals....I'm finished with dealin with these nincompoops.
fuck you I got shit to do.15 years of ad-mi-ration....
YOU ARE THE 1ST TO READ THIS FAR.. so congratulations!

Hook:

the next time your brain.. thinkin stupid shit...
its time to remind ya brain if you could spit.
cause remember I'm the same one who could rip..
you in a split second so choose it quick

.Barz Of Steel. 07-24-05 05:36 PM

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=199925

Link #1.......

BRB with the other one, but Im gonna make another post for it to Up my post count :thumbup:

.Barz Of Steel. 07-24-05 05:37 PM

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=201035

Link #2 bitches and hoes.........

Indeph 07-24-05 05:39 PM

*takes credit for minor inclusion* I made the hook :)

leady 07-24-05 05:43 PM

lol ye dont be sleepin on dis u sluts

.Barz Of Steel. 07-24-05 05:44 PM

I wrote the second verse :)

B To The D 07-24-05 05:45 PM

liked a lot funny name lol erm gud gud 8/10 keep up

Kawn Flixx 07-24-05 05:45 PM

This was a pretty decent drop..felt that you both could have used better wordplay..and vocab..All of your's had some nice punchlines..the whole thing was flowing together and it was really good.. Overall keep it up..and thankz for dropping a link

.Barz Of Steel. 07-24-05 05:46 PM

It was my idea to drop the link, even tho indeph said we didnt have to :)

Anything for BC :love:

leady 07-24-05 05:48 PM

both??? lol im pretty sure 3 people dropped on this not 2 :p

Pro. 07-24-05 06:16 PM

Bars ripped this shit apart...I like that shit..nice punches an wordplay..

tha multi'd where nice....


Leady..you came out swingin but really had no punches,yeah I know it aint about punchlines,but your verse was nice...couldve used more multi's


indeph..That was nice...your verse was funny,I like tha congrats part..funny!

nice wordplay,flowed nice ...right along with ery'body on the open mic,it was tight..

would like ta hear an audio on this song..

8.5/10

Bars kill'd it...NICE :thumbup:

leady 07-24-05 06:28 PM

if i used more multies it wouldnt mhave been text friendly.. i mean i even dropped multies rhymin like 7 syllables lol but no doubt.. respect on da reply kidda.. btw did u understand all my lines????

Formation 07-24-05 06:31 PM

I Want In On The Remix Enough Said

TheCritic 07-24-05 06:33 PM

I understood all of em...an yeah..you came out wit multi's,but didnt follow threw.

it was nice,DiddicK... :thumbup:


No hatin just being a critic.(get it.)

~Tony Green~ 07-24-05 06:40 PM

Damn this was decent Barz did rip it up and Indeph my nigga holin it down for the chi ripped this bitch as well leady since you do audio and all I didn't think you would come as hard as you did even though you dissed my fam but you all was on your A game this was nice 8/10 if any of yall wanna collab holla!

leady 07-24-05 06:46 PM

cool... didnt follow threw??? well i didnt fart so i cudnt shit to follow threw :p

Indeph 07-24-05 06:49 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Tony Green
Damn this was decent Barz did rip it up and Indeph my nigga holin it down for the chi ripped this bitch as well leady since you do audio and all I didn't think you would come as hard as you did even though you dissed my fam but you all was on your A game this was nice 8/10 if any of yall wanna collab holla!



aren't I a known audio head too? :( fucka leady :mad:

leady 07-24-05 06:55 PM

lol u know u love me indeph sweety :p... me n u will mhave to rip on an audio sometime... u droppin any cds soon or nefin??? if so lets do one for it lol

Ysdat 07-24-05 07:10 PM

*claps*

this was as good as super dooper pooper scooper

.Barz Of Steel. 07-24-05 07:24 PM

yeppppppppppppppppppp

.Barz Of Steel. 07-24-05 08:03 PM

uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuupppppppppppppppppppppppp pppp

Fuck Indeph and his link rule :)

leady 07-24-05 08:04 PM

lol we rulle.... im bored mite drop suttin quick i dunno

MADDRAPPER 07-24-05 08:52 PM

Come on this site as visitor but like prisoner I’m abuse
Need equal right for the legal fight stuff it don’t amuse
Cats talk to loud and walk true and proud with no skills
I try flow ill like streams kills their teams with thrills
Read but use bad light a sad sight to see I hurt my eyes
Girls mini-skirt just flies up now my body alert and fries
My pride bulk like sidewalks abuts streets at the putt putt
Eat while playing miniature golf one girl sweet strut strut

leady 07-24-05 09:04 PM

take dat sumwere it needs to be.. u been doin dis for years and still suck man seriously

.Barz Of Steel. 07-24-05 10:18 PM

Owned..........

.Barz Of Steel. 07-24-05 11:01 PM

uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuppppppppppppppppppppp

Indeph 07-25-05 06:07 AM

Drop a link in each post after your 1st. ;)

.Barz Of Steel. 07-25-05 12:17 PM

I don't have to follow the rules because Im dating Indeph ( Hey babe :love: )

leady 07-25-05 12:29 PM

o im not loved anymore??????? :(

Indeph 07-25-05 12:33 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by .Barz Of Steel.
I don't have to follow the rules because Im dating Indeph ( Hey babe :love: )


:cussing: keep that on the low or drop a link or this will be closed

Artik Phrost 07-25-05 12:41 PM

Ayo, imma be honest...and give yall my opinion....

Quote:
Originally Posted by .Barz Of Steel.

"Acunamatata"

Leady:


the writtens im spittin are rippin you cunts
im a first place MC so chances of u winnin are second to none
im an un-beleivable wordsmith i came to wreck songs
and leave ya crews dispersin like my name was tephlon
^yu complimentin him?...im kinda lost on the meanin of this
but i aint fuckin wit dat bitch.. ill jus kick it wit yall
da kid wanted beef so i started bringin it R.A.W
no-ones weaker than him im beatin this bitch
you cud drop rhymes in brail.. i still aint feelin ya shit
kew kew lil punch...concept ive heard b4
but fuck this shit because yall know im the best
ill start killin you cats......... just to show im a vet
im ruthless n shit bring u n ya clique n its a tragedy
call me an amputee cos ill destroy yall single handidly
nyce concepts....realli not my flavor in effect, but pretty kew
its animal cruelty wit wat im spittin on you cats
call me a train because im known to rip it on a track
but im done n thats it now yall know what the crack is
likes the bombings in london this shit is tragic
str8 ender....

Hook:

the next time your brain.. thinkin stupid shit...
its time to remind ya brain if you could spit.
cause remember I'm the same one who could rip..
you in a split second so choose it quick

Culda done without the hook...not really feelin it....its iight

Barz Of Steel:

I use pain to slay haters, aint nobodys name greater
Its like 'fat kids playin' Twister' the way Im the game breaker
I was made to hate fakers, so I come straight n juss nasty
Its like 'throwin' matches at Atari's' the way that I 'Pac heat'
kew concepts...feelin the multis...effect was iight
Testin me's like 'sex with convicts'- itll get ya in trouble
Cuz I 'come through in the clutch', like drivin' stickshifts in tunnels
No need to trip or to stumble...cuz I also rock "automatics"
N rhyme so 'stupid dope' Im like retarded drug addicts
^lmao....funni shit there....
Its like pancakes ordered by fat kids-- Im bound to get stacks
My 'pocket's always full' Like QB's about to get sacked
Cant touch this text that I bring hard to disrespect with these mean bars
I 'prey on you fools' like ministers sexin with retards
retard concept..got redundant...and i liked the 1st way yu used it...kew concept though...if it were by itself
Leave you left with obscene scars, Barz is rhymin the greatest
My words stay 'Sunnin' kats' like Phoenix signin' free agents
Each of my lines leave ya wasted, I cant help but demand respect
They only thought Jesus was perfect..cuz I hadnt set the standard yet
nyce wordplay in the 2nd line....sick ending...


Indeph:

oh shit! indeph on dude, its more then mic check one two.
cause I'm countin sheep,niggas here slept on you.
I got rest when I'm readin,they expectin I'm leavin.
but question:will they all get depressed when I'm breathin?
fuck them fuck you you too,damn right I mean you.
I got used to usin these hand mics,but you gotta read too.
...not realli feelin the opener...nothing realli grabbed my attention...
enjoy my text,for now,but those annoyed of deph.
cause get tricked cause I got some decoys void for death.
the last time I was called wack,was way back then....
I dropped some wack shit.....................so it aint happen.
so next time your lips get loose,forget the rules.
forget the law.this the era of when shit get raw...
and the principals....I'm finished with dealin with these nincompoops.
fuck you I got shit to do.15 years of ad-mi-ration....
YOU ARE THE 1ST TO READ THIS FAR.. so congratulations!
im not realli feelin this part either...seemed yu were spittin to be spittin



Overall:...pretty good drop...outta what i've seen on here....BOS..took this...his last two bars were sick....I wish he woulda came at the same calibre..in the rest...Leady had some kew concepts....up ya Creativety and yu'll be fine...But i guess yu fit in with the board style....i like InnDepths verse the least...it was cocky...which is good...but, nothing stood out.....ya'll had good flow, though....respects on that......


RTF: "The Creation..by Armed Forces"

leady 07-25-05 12:45 PM

crews dispersin.. goin gone vanishin.. all mhis crews have fallen apart n died so wen i make crews disperse like tephlon mean i destroy em make em die... maybe u didnt know about all mhis crews fallin apart???

Artik Phrost 07-25-05 01:08 PM

^ dont think i did know that...i been gone for a while...but, i had a feelin yu were talkin bout somethin more than what i was picking up....

leady 07-25-05 03:27 PM

ye ye no doubt :)

.Barz Of Steel. 07-25-05 05:21 PM

I :love: you leady!!

Ok Indeph, I'll keep our very physical relationship on the low ;)

.Barz Of Steel. 07-25-05 07:57 PM

Thanx for the feed btw Artik :love:

Germ 07-25-05 09:44 PM

barz had the best verse.....some shit was pretty funny.....indeph didn't look like he tried, no offense, lol....leady was decent......overall i guess it was worth the read, keep up to all three, hoes!

MADDRAPPER 07-25-05 10:33 PM

Man Yall Cats Must Be From England , London Are Some Damn Where Giving Props To A So So Verse No Multi's This Would Suck If It Were Spit On A Microphone

leady 07-25-05 10:40 PM

LOL dick fuck off... seriously or set a battle up so i can rip you


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