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Spektikul vs Kordozar
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8 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 350 Check in by: 07-26-05 at 03:34 AM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. Closed - Expired / old battle win |
Got Plans Tomorrow So I'll Post A Verse Right Now.....
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Kordozar has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-25-05 03:37 AM.
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Kids A Pussy...Spek Has No Actions............ Never Merked Shit
Your Sweet...Life Hands You Lemons To Blends In With Your Verses Herb Bitch, Clap A Teck Get Buried Next To Vets What The All Say Your Punches Always Been Cracked.......Like Speks In The Hallway 8 Lines Of Hotness From You? I Doubt It Why The Hell You Spittin Cause Like Olds Folks You Only Need Speks To Watch The Television With That Wackness....... Keep Quiet Or You'll Really Get Touched Ya Hoods Pussy..You'll Only See Canada Ride Out In Delivery Trucks Speks-Meaning Glasses Duh Sweet-Sugar Delivery Trucks-Canada Dry Keyd Son!!!.... |
Spektikul has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-26-05 01:57 AM.
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^Pffft, lemme show you how its done, yo yo... (half-assed key) Hows this kid plan to win, he made an alias just to battle Spek Know he saying "fuck you, pay me"? Look how quick he left his battle cheque (check) We call you bitches cause its true, its a R.eal A.ll W.oman crew R.A.W's just like your avatar, cause you only got herbs stading behind you Tell me what your loyal to, wait, go get more wins against wack kats first 14 wins against noobs, which would be your biggest accomplishment on Rapverse All woman crews audio section to me only sounds like a giant whore-moan (hormone) Only reason you think your higher ranked than me right now is cause your-stonned Explainations (If Needed)
-He checked in and possibly dropped with an alias cause hes scared.
-He checked in so quickly (chequed in) -Avatar has weed behind him...herbs are behind him (his crew) -Loyalty=member title -14 wins are all against newbs...4 losses are against them too..lol. VOTE UP! |
Rofl! The Punch About Alias Was Fake I Made That Naem Because I Didn't Have Any Battle Credits....
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This was feedback posted for Spektikul
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This was feedback posted for Kordozar
3 bars of crap, and the 4th one was an attempt at dissin' canada......this was garbage......the first one, you said he was sweet, you fucktard, haaaaaaaaaaaaaaahahahahahahhhahahahahaha
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Ok If They Was Wacc Why You Leave Feedbacc For Me? Any Ways Upping For Some Votes....
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Wack or not, its a legit battle and votes would be appreciated rather than feed or dots.
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you're an idiot..... its because i was talking about your verse. |
This was feedback posted for Spektikul
RV keeps fallin' off..
/Go The Establishment go.. |
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That's Nice How Canadians Sticc Up For Each Other............
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^It really is...
lol. VOTE!!!! |
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Voted For: Spektikul
Kids A Pussy...Spek Has No Actions............ Never Merked Shit Your Sweet...Life Hands You Lemons To Blends In With Your Verses ^^wat the hell.....shit sucked Herb Bitch, Clap A Teck Get Buried Next To Vets What The All Say Your Punches Always Been Cracked.......Like Speks In The Hallway ^^Ok mutlie I guess...punch lacked 8 Lines Of Hotness From You? I Doubt It Why The Hell You Spittin Cause Like Olds Folks You Only Need Speks To Watch The Television ^^Good rhymin...OK punch With That Wackness....... Keep Quiet Or You'll Really Get Touched Ya Hoods Pussy..You'll Only See Canada Ride Out In Delivery Trucks ^^STronger rhyming...bad punch U got nice rhyme scheme and shit....but you lack the punches.Where are your personals too?90% of ya verses should be peronals.I didn't see any wordplay either.JUst had some similes and shit that didn't hit hard. Hows this kid plan to win, he made an alias just to battle Spek Know he saying "fuck you, pay me"? Look how quick he left his battle cheque (check) ^^^Nice...wordplay good... We call you bitches cause its true, its a R.eal A.ll W.oman crew R.A.W's just like your avatar, cause you only got herbs stading behind you ^^LMao....DOPE Tell me what your loyal to, wait, go get more wins against wack kats first 14 wins against noobs, which would be your biggest accomplishment on Rapverse ^^ok.....not as good as the others All woman crews audio section to me only sounds like a giant whore-moan (hormone) Only reason you think your higher ranked than me right now is cause your-stonned ^^OK... Good verse.Beautiful structure.Had a dope rip on crew and his past battles.A nice wordplay had begging.Nice line about the avatar.ONly complain would be the basic rhyme sheme. Vote-SPektikul VOTE IN LINK BELOW OR THIS VOTE WILL BE REMOVED http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=202287 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
This was feedback posted for Kordozar
Flow-kor- Was Nice And It Was More Enjoyable To Read
Pers-was Also Won By Kor Cuz There Were Some Punches That Surprised Me Evrything Else Was Even So Kor Gets Ma Vote |
Macreep Stop Being Mih Personal Dicc Succer Every Battle You Voted Against Me Get Out Of Here Kid...........
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Just blacklist him Kor ^
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Voted For: Spektikul
Kids A Pussy...Spek Has No Actions............ Never Merked Shit Your Sweet...Life Hands You Lemons To Blends In With Your Verses OK, REASONABLE WORDPLAY, NOT A BAD OPENER. Herb Bitch, Clap A Teck Get Buried Next To Vets What The All Say Your Punches Always Been Cracked.......Like Speks In The Hallway UMMM.... WHY IN THE HALLWAY BUT GOOD CONCEPT. 8 Lines Of Hotness From You? I Doubt It Why The Hell You Spittin Cause Like Olds Folks You Only Need Speks To Watch The Television SORTA PLAYED, BUT A DECENT PUNCH NONE THE LESS. With That Wackness....... Keep Quiet Or You'll Really Get Touched Ya Hoods Pussy..You'll Only See Canada Ride Out In Delivery Trucks MEH, WORDPLAY WAS THERE, HALF DECENT PUNCH. __________________________________________________ _________________________ Hows this kid plan to win, he made an alias just to battle Spek Know he saying "fuck you, pay me"? Look how quick he left his battle cheque (check) GOOD PERSONAL, ORIGINAL CONCEPT. We call you bitches cause its true, its a R.eal A.ll W.oman crew R.A.W's just like your avatar, cause you only got herbs stading behind you LMAO DOPE PUNCH NICE PERSONAL GOOD WORDPLAY. Tell me what your loyal to, wait, go get more wins against wack kats first 14 wins against noobs, which would be your biggest accomplishment on Rapverse NICE PERSONAL, PUNCH WAS PRETTY MEH. All woman crews audio section to me only sounds like a giant whore-moan (hormone) Only reason you think your higher ranked than me right now is cause your-stonned DECENT WORDPLAY, MADE ME LAUGH...GOOD CLOSER. __________________________________________________ ______________________________ OK, THIS WAS ONE SIDED IMO, KORDOZAR HAD THE BETTER STRUCTURE AND A FEW GOOD IDEAS BUT LACKED ANY HARD HITTING PERSONALS,MOST THE SPEK SHIT HE USED HAS BEEN WAY PLAYED OUT. SPEK CAME HARDER WITH EVERYBAR AND HAD SOME NICE PERSONALS WHICH HIT HARD. AS I SAID ONE-SIDED. NO HATE. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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This was feedback posted for Spektikul
I liked the word choice.. lemme break it down tho to be more specific.
(Hows this kid plan to win, he made an alias just to battle Spek Know he saying "fuck you, pay me"? Look how quick he left his battle cheque (check)) - one thing i notice right away.. there is no solid flow.. i cant read this with any consistency.. this isnt a great line to begin with but i cant even try to explain the first verse. (We call you bitches cause its true, its a R.eal A.ll W.oman crew R.A.W's just like your avatar, cause you only got herbs stading behind you) - i like the first part of this.. the flow thing got me again.. but not bad of a stab at all. (Tell me what your loyal to, wait, go get more wins against wack kats first 14 wins against noobs, which would be your biggest accomplishment on Rapverse) - i gotta be honest.. this bit was weak.. it seems like i had to read a book just to get to the kats first - rapverse rhymes.. (All woman crews audio section to me only sounds like a giant whore-moan (hormone) Only reason you think your higher ranked than me right now is cause your-stonned) - alright Overall - If i could vote for this.. it would go to Spek.. i wont breakdown kortozar cuz im really not feeling a single word he got down. Spek, i see where ur going with ur multi-syllable rhyming, but you def need to work on the rest of your body.. It looks like you just through a bunch of shit together and put 2 rhymes at the end.. ur better off not doing that and creating an easy to read flow.. but not bad at all.. pe@ce |
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This was feedback posted for Kordozar
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Voted For: Spektikul
ROFL @ Spek.. you ripped this up kid... the whore moan and herb lines were tight.. your flow was on.. and punches and personals were fire.. i had ur structure tho.. fucking make ur font bigger.. blind nigga'z like me cant read that shit.. fah real holmes... good battle.. now kord u had punches and u are a talented text head.. i feel as though u didnt drop ur hardest.. and u may have been able to take this battle.. had u dropped ur hardest.. but i feel u went a bit half assed on ur punches.. ur personals could have been harder hitting.. ur flow was good.. and ur structure was iight. u just needed to up the punches were as.. spektikul's personals was really what got this battle for him.. so no hate to either.. Spek just gets this with personals... Vote:Spektikul |
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