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American Tiger 07-25-05 08:03 AM

Stanza vs CarsonJet
 
6 Lines
3-0 ko
4-0 ko
House Rules

The...
1hr check
1hr drop
Can't be done....your not on.....
So just check in an drop today.

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-28-05 at 08:03 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Win by 3-0 KO

System 07-25-05 09:02 AM

CarsonJet has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-25-05 09:02 AM.

American Tiger 07-25-05 09:05 AM

This schmuk shoulda ducked, he's outta luck like hockey pucks
Stupid Fuck,....Shit...Even the Omen says you "suck"
A walkin vaccume bag, I'd use ur face for one time punching bag
Break your nose and wipe your lips with Tony Green's nut rag
In submliminal message....Stanz states "expect the unexpected"
That means accept he blows, but he's got the best connections

System 07-25-05 10:39 AM

Stanza has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-25-05 10:39 AM.

Stanza 07-25-05 11:11 AM

Yo

Slittin Ya Wrist So You Really can Say That Im Cuttin Ya Time
Gave Ya Verse Vaginal Bruisin the way I Was Fuckin Ya Rymes
This Guys Words couldnt add up to Shit.... Comin Out My Ass!
He Cares for The Envoirment The Way He Recyclin That Trash
We Know How He Ducks Battle So Lets Watch As Carson Jets
Livin Legend? Seem Like You Dyin The Way Im Layin Yu to Rest

-Quickie-

Done in Like 5 Minz g2g

Peace Goodluck

TeamOne 07-25-05 04:06 PM

This was feedback posted for CarsonJet
 
hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm Stanza came hella played and really didnt have punches...... Jet only had that last line tho........ i wont vote, but close battle...... if i was forced id go for Jet because of Stanza's played lines and weak wording

Bizarre 07-25-05 04:31 PM

Voted For: Stanza

Stanza:
ur structure was good.......you had good rhymes flowin there although ur opening was weak....i still think it needs elevation...

carson:
ur rhymes were good.....your punches werent hard enough......ur structure was alright but ur opening n closure were good but i think stanza took this by an inch





vote : Stanza

American Tiger 07-25-05 04:57 PM

If you actually win this. It is truely a sad day in RV history.

Stanza 07-25-05 05:27 PM

Well sad days Will come .....................................Still Uppin

American Tiger 07-25-05 05:32 PM

Lmao. If you think so.
21-11.....;) 21-12
..........

13th. 07-25-05 05:39 PM

This was feedback posted for CarsonJet
 
checkin pollz an ight battle!!!!!!!!!!!...........

.Barz Of Steel. 07-25-05 05:45 PM

This was feedback posted for Stanza
 
Stanza got this easily........

Keyweezy 07-25-05 05:57 PM

Voted For: Stanza

Slittin Ya Wrist So You Really can Say That Im Cuttin Ya Time
Gave Ya Verse Vaginal Bruisin the way I Was Fuckin Ya Rymes
This Guys Words couldnt add up to Shit.... Comin Out My Ass!
He Cares for The Envoirment The Way He Recyclin That Trash

Vs.
In submliminal message....Stanz states "expect the unexpected"
That means accept he blows, but he's got the best connections

Overall - Stanza dropped harder in this battle, punches connected & came more consistant. Carson your shit was played & didn't really connect. But you had one alright bar which was the closer. Just work more on punches & you'll be alright.
No hate.

American Tiger 07-25-05 06:43 PM

O this is just str8 bull shit.
Me bein played....
I aint ever seen a bar look like any of mine in my life....

Go ahead....keep gettin your DR. whatta freakin joke...
Thank god its just text.

Germ 07-25-05 08:20 PM

Voted For: Stanza

uh, this battle was not very good..both came with basic concepts; stanza had the played shit, carson had the shit that just wasn't punches.....so basing it off of punches, im giving it to stanza, cause carson seemed like he wrote it in about 3 minutes....

both need to prop up their text skills......or at least try next time, word, keep up both

v/stanza

Confucius 07-25-05 08:29 PM

This was feedback posted for Stanza
 
this was an easy win stanza nice job but of course u know that

Stanza 07-25-05 11:03 PM

Yeah battle being closed now ......Srry dog You losed


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