Young Blaze vs. Traidmarx
 

8 Lines Minimum
Agree on exact limit in your check ins

Check Ins due Wednesday
Verses due Friday

(All due dates are eastern time)

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checkin in how many lines ???

Check.................

ight Check it....................
Testin The Best Is Unlawful,But I'm Never Stressin,For Starters
So No Ones Sorry To See Y'n Smack The Balls Off Of "T"(Tee).................................
.................................................. ......Like Professional Golfers
This Jerk Must Be Slippin',Cuz Ur Verse I Be Rippin....
U Aint Seein Me ,Fag, I'll Leave "T"(tea) In A BAg Jus Like Workers For Lipton
Hit Wit Books U Get Beat Wit Words.Boys Act Like Angles See Us an walk Curved
Our Rhymes Aint Equal,This Battle Is Like England The Way That T Gets Served
Surgical Incisions Have T 'Confused About Death' Like Batteries Re-Used
Lynching Remains Shoot T "back To The Future" He Still Wouldn't "Escape".................
.................................................. ..................The Parental Abuse
An "Cryin For Dead Rappers" Isn't The Only Time I' Carry "Wept-Puns"(weapons)
Plus If Traid Killed Off Blaze Jr/ He Couldn't Teach Me a Less-Son
I discharge "Fire" no doubt Youngs Always Blazin This Cowards
This dude just aint "Touching My Bars" like “Bums" purposely Taking Showers
I’m "Ripping His Vocals" plus Blaze is also "Slaughting” Weak Peeps
He's like “Midgets Hang Gliding" this “Winds” (win) Out Of His Reach
Weapons and Artillery is "Dialect" it'll leave ur face looking like a Pasta Dish
Shift Techniques and Snatch the "Tongue Out Your Head" like that Member Of Kiss
U Beatin Me Isn't True Or Eva Gonna Happen It's All Fiction
Im Done wit u like a pg Tried Of Dribblin.......U I'm Dishin.........................................
.............................Then Leave U Surrounded By Shells Like Unhatched Chickens

*Done*

Fucking dope........

lmao...aiiiight man i'll post by tonite

here ya go took abot 10 mins on it


look man the K or the 9 will make u sleep similar to a dog in a bed//
news flash tell ya dick ryder to let me post before he starts cloggin the thread//

ya verses are old like bitches wit tits that sag to the knees,you laughin at me??//
bastard please,why does ya verse stop and pause more than scratched CD's//

and see ya name is young blaze so that alone defines ya entire bar template//
young blaze isn't really fire so to most readers you barely spark an intrest//

its been known i'm sick when i'm spittin,verbal addiction leave you twitchin//
and i can tell ya took 7 days on ya verse cause that shit was weekly written//(weakly)

ya enitre verse gets blown away,this battle blew up in ya face like underthrow grenades//
shoot you thru ya notebook and soak the page,call this dude round trip cause he goes both ways//

week 11 knockin him down and out,we know you bite so careful with ya hands around ya mouth//
confident but my verse found ya doubt,cause now ya like registers at night they countin u out//

come on uppin for some votes

young
both ya had some streched ass lines...really wasnt feelin all those fukin dots in youngs verse but he had really good word play interesting concepts(t in england) n couple of punches i was feelin...i actually really liked the verse and its content and most of the delivery...

trade
ur only prob was the streched line, u beasted... the first bar was good but too long...
so was a couple others but they were still funny and relevant... in my opinion u took this battle wit a better flow and vocabulary...
my favorite lines
and see ya name is young blaze so that alone defines ya entire bar template//
young blaze isn't really fire so to most readers you barely spark an intrest//
its been known i'm sick when i'm spittin,verbal addiction leave you twitchin//
and i can tell ya took 7 days on ya verse cause that shit was weekly written//

like i said before, to me, trade took this with originality in my eyes but i can deffinitly see y someone else would vote the other way
good close battle...

v//trademarx

blaze spit fire, maybe im buggin, but i just kept goin back to tradmarx bars
man this battle got me confused... but my vote stands

shit was a close battle

Ur Buggin............that vote was weak...sayin i spit fire...lmao

dont start bitchin...... damn man

Vote : Traidmarx

Y.Blaze ---> ok...tha opener...tha golf concept i swera LI used that a lil back..but meh it was ok nuttin really crazy...your flow is messed up like a mofo cos of ur stretched ass lines...also tha whole "T" thing is pissin me off...its get borin quick...your midget bar made me laugh yo...nice...that was your nicest bar the rest are all :bored: to be honest..."wept-puns" was aiight but i unno jus seemed you were forcing shit..7.5/10

Trraidmarx-->your opener str8 owns...dopeness...u cudda worded it betta and kept the flow betta..cnt believe u used a scratched CD line meh -_- moving on quickly...ok your fallin off like blaze ya shitsjus gettin poor...aiight nice punch wid the "weekly" wordplay..decent..im gettin bored yo..ok closer was nice n decent solid punch nice...8/10

Close battle...Traid gets it for having more than 1 okay bar Peace...


RTF in ma sig mofos :shoot:

:wtf: :mad: :shoot: :cussing: :thefinger :(

That hurt my feelings man

lmao..... you'll be aiiiight

i vote to my opinion homy...no hate or dick ride...
chek my track record, my votes might not be popular opinion, but i dont have a typical outlook on whats supposed to win a battle
for instance
i bet u think trademarx third bar suckedn and hardly rhyned, but to me, thats what won the battle...to steel trades words: he went outside of the 'template' most niggas on this site seem to follow... im not sayin young is a carbon copy cuz he deffinitly do what he do very well, but trades shit 'sparked' my 'interest'...bassically young did evry thing i expected him to do, while trade shook shit up. with one bar.......


blaze
by the way, thanx for doubting my vote young, it made me think it over...and now im sure he beat u

thanks for noticing the bar i thought it to be a good personal myself

Traidmarx wins.
Closed.