keyweezy vs Stanza
 

Battle Rules:

6 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
3-0 ko
4-0 ko


Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-25-05 at 06:49 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

Win by 3-0 KO since Spoken Word voted after Stanza reached 3 votes

Stanza has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-25-05 06:20 PM.

Keyweezy has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-25-05 06:21 PM.

Keyweezy has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-25-05 06:39 PM.

Serious. I don't like you, I mean you smiled, & looked aroused
When I warned him before the bout he was "Going down"!
RV don't want you here. It's over now you're sparring w/ fear..
So I'll gauge your eyes w/ diamonds - so the victors crystal clear.
You'll sea no votes yo, wave good bye to this battle, cuz you're getting sonned n'..
Stans resembles water ..^.. the way when it boils down to it you're nothing!

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If you don't get anything. Then please don't vote. Again if you don't understand wordplay/punches DO NOT VOTE.

Voted For: Stanza

real nice battle

keyweezy-you would have had to victory if it wasn't for your first bar...that shit was garbage...but the rest of your verse was nice..punches thrown and landed...didn't see any personals but that is aight



STANZA- the reason why you won the battle is because to u were most consisten in this...all punches thrown and landed...i didn't really like your flow though...but really that isn't all that important in text...but nice verse all around

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Thanx for the vote Man .....................im up 1-0

Nice drop KeyWeezy

And do You Have a crew?>

Good verse yo. & nah I don't fuck with crews. No point to me. Upping.

Voted For: Keyweezy

nice battle mayne...

good use of vocab wit a good opening and closure...ur punches were a bit weak and u need to elevate.......

the structure was good and all but the use of words was weak and so was the use of ur rhyming skills.......
i dont know what to say about your verbal usage but nice battle dawwg...




overall vote: Keyweezy

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Eh. I'll get that vote removed. Should of raised the posts to vote. Upping.

Voted For: Stanza

Yo
When I Smack Yo Tongue W/ Oil Was The Only Time Yo Words Shined
Your FootSteps Bcuz the More of You I Take The more I Leave Behind
ok nice line 4/10 but not as good for a opener
Im Puttin Yo Shit Out On The Streetz..... Like It Was Evicted Tenants
They Call Me Breath Bcuz you couldnt Hold me for more Than a Minute
.....lol....nice one man 8/10
I didnt See Your Determination In Yo Eyes Bcuz Im Busy Merkin Yo Face
You Got Light Lyrics The Way They Fill The Room And Take Up No Space
ohhh nice closer 6/10

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Serious. I don't like you, I mean you smiled, & looked aroused
When I warned him before the bout he was "Going down"!
.....not that good
RV don't want you here. It's over now you're sparring w/ fear..
So I'll gauge your eyes w/ diamonds - so the victors crystal clear.
...hold up not a good personal there who said RV dont want him?
4/10
You'll sea no votes yo, wave good bye to this battle, cuz you're getting sonned n'..
Stans resembles water ..^.. the way when it boils down to it you're nothing!
ok nice closer 8/10

Both did an aight vese but stanza's was way better at the punches cuz he had delivery to them and had a better flow to it key weezy u need to work on that iahgt man really....cuz u had the concepts but werent hittin hard cuz of the delivery but good battle.....jus keep it up yall but my v/ goes to Stanza....for better punches
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PLZ RTF WITH A HONEST VOTE IN ONE OF MY BATTLES

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Yeah Lets Get The Slik Flo vote removed lol

still uppin

Ok, that was NOT a personal. Otherwise, I'd explain. & wtf at delivery? That doesn't really have to do w/ anything. God, some kids are so stupid.

fuck my vote coz its meant too be feed for shitty weezy

yo dont be stupid delivery is how u approach the punch to amke it hit harder make it do more damage nd sound better aight...... and yea it was a person aight kid im 20 years old and u callin me a kid....etf is wrong wit u are u a retard or sumthin dont get mad for one vote aight kid cuz stanza verse was way better aight so stfu........thnx u and have a nice day......

This was feedback posted for Stanza
 

checkin pollz an aight battle.....................

Voted For: Stanza

yours overall was better it had better rhymes and was delivered better also i like the last line
his was ok it hadd good punches
but i think you got it

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Voted For: Stanza

first off you bit a ludachris line


with more shit out on the streets then evicted tenants

so you dont get my vote

nice job ass

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This was feedback posted for Keyweezy
 

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Ludacris Line?

Man STFU I Know how his line go his line say

Im Gettin Shit off The Streets From Evicted Tenants .............So STFU and Go Sit down B4 I merk Yo ass .............

my Line is totally different from luda's line ..........

Voted For: Stanza

Serious. I don't like you, I mean you smiled, & looked aroused
When I warned him before the bout he was "Going down"!
^^weak punch....but it was worded ight..so ya get points for that
RV don't want you here. It's over now you're sparring w/ fear..
So I'll gauge your eyes w/ diamonds - so the victors crystal clear.
^^^blah......weak
You'll sea no votes yo, wave good bye to this battle, cuz you're getting sonned n'..
Stans resembles water ..^.. the way when it boils down to it you're nothing!
^^OK....I guess

Ur punches weren't exactly all that hot.You worded ya lines Ok.....that may have been the plus side to ya verse.Ya flow was choppy at points...speccially in that last line.Just make ya punches hit harder.

When I Smack Yo Tongue W/ Oil Was The Only Time Yo Words Shined
Your FootSteps Bcuz the More of You I Take The more I Leave Behind
^^Played as fuck...I heard this a couple times before
Im Puttin Yo Shit Out On The Streetz..... Like It Was Evicted Tenants
They Call Me Breath Bcuz you couldnt Hold me for more Than a Minute
^^^people could hold they breath longer than a minute
I didnt See Your Determination In Yo Eyes Bcuz Im Busy Merkin Yo Face
You Got Light Lyrics The Way They Fill The Room And Take Up No Space
^^^OK.................not all that bad

You had a played bar at first....but it got better afterwards.To me.....this verse was nothing special.Rhyme scheme sucked.But I think your punches had a slight edge to Key.

Vote-Stanza

Voted For: Stanza

Stanza
When I Smack Yo Tongue W/ Oil Was The Only Time Yo Words Shined
Your FootSteps Bcuz the More of You I Take The more I Leave Behind
Ha..pretty good opener
Im Puttin Yo Shit Out On The Streetz..... Like It Was Evicted Tenants
They Call Me Breath Bcuz you couldnt Hold me for more Than a Minute
Ahh..could have been better..okay concept
I didnt See Your Determination In Yo Eyes Bcuz Im Busy Merkin Yo Face
You Got Light Lyrics The Way They Fill The Room And Take Up No Space
Ha..pretty good closer

Overall nice decent verse..had a couple okay punchlines..some okay meta's..overall keep it up

Keyweezy
Serious. I don't like you, I mean you smiled, & looked aroused
When I warned him before the bout he was "Going down"!
Ahh...naw
RV don't want you here. It's over now you're sparring w/ fear..
So I'll gauge your eyes w/ diamonds - so the victors crystal clear.
Hah..nice
You'll sea no votes yo, wave good bye to this battle, cuz you're getting sonned n'..
Stans resembles water ..^.. the way when it boils down to it you're nothing
Dont really rhyme

Overall vote-Stanza
for having a better overall verse..keep it up

........................STill uppin.......................

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This was feedback posted for Stanza
 

stanza took this by miles man key u need to elevate

shit supposed to be a vote^.........................................

.............................................Still Uppin 4 da last time damnit @!!!!

Voted For: Keyweezy

You got him by a nice little punch line good work I liked the crystle line it was hot.....................

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Livin Legend Stay Outta my Fuckin Battles Hoe

One line votin And Shit

Voted For: Stanza

Im Puttin Yo Shit Out On The Streetz..... Like It Was Evicted Tenants
They Call Me Breath Bcuz you couldnt Hold me for more Than a Minute

^^ that bar rite there sonned this kid...
but Stanza u came real easy on my man rite here

Key you gotta come harder fam...even if he is a vet u gotta come hard in every battle


both emcees keep ya head up

v/stanza

Voted For: Keyweezy

KeyWeezy:

Serious. I don't like you, I mean you smiled, & looked aroused
When I warned him before the bout he was "Going down"!
^^lol good bar 8/10
RV don't want you here. It's over now you're sparring w/ fear..
So I'll gauge your eyes w/ diamonds - so the victors crystal clear.
^^decent meta 5/10
You'll sea no votes yo, wave good bye to this battle, cuz you're getting sonned n'..
Stans resembles water ..^.. the way when it boils down to it you're nothing!
^^dope closer 7/10

Overall: 20/30 (67%)


Stanza:

When I Smack Yo Tongue W/ Oil Was The Only Time Yo Words Shined
Your FootSteps Bcuz the More of You I Take The more I Leave Behind
^^decent opener 6/10
Im Puttin Yo Shit Out On The Streetz..... Like It Was Evicted Tenants
They Call Me Breath Bcuz you couldnt Hold me for more Than a Minute
^^good bar 7/10
I didnt See Your Determination In Yo Eyes Bcuz Im Busy Merkin Yo Face
You Got Light Lyrics The Way They Fill The Room And Take Up No Space
^^not great but ok 6/10

Overall: 19/30 (63%)


Vote: Keyweezy.

Pretty close battle, but keys opener was pretty good as was his closer, i think if your closer was better stanza you would have easily won but i think you underestimated your opponent here.


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