Wayne vs CarsonJet
 

8 Bars
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Wayne has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-26-05 10:41 AM.

CarsonJet has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-26-05 10:52 AM.

Im fuckin you pussies up so say goodBYE~TO~VIRGINTY/
I'll make you fags LIE~IN~VICINTIES for the dead until the end of TIME~AND~INFINITY/(Vicinity means a place, area)
Ain't no way ya'll can fuck with the Seraph RHYMIN~ABILITY/
So go ahead and take a TRY~AT~JUST~KILLING~ME/
It doesn't matter cause i know i'll be RESSURECTED/
Cause I always "live" for havoc and my crew's FOREVER~HECTIC/
We more "precise with spits" than a PHORENSICS~TEAM/(phorensics teams sometime use DNA from "spit" to find out who a murderer is at a crime scene, so they're "precise with spits")
We the BEST~REGIME so to mess with us results in INCESSANT~SCREAMS/(incessant means constant, nonstop)
Now sleep from the bullets of my M16/
Take a "dirt nap" bitches and have some PLEASANT~DREAMS/(haha)

Vote fairly and provide an explanation. No h8 ya'll.

Wayne wanted 8 bars,But I think he meants lines.
Cus, By the time I hit four, The victory's mine.
Re-Wind, and realize,.Yeh...He was that herb Yung Wun.
It's like we all got Spur's way he's gettin Piss't-On.

Shit's deep, packed meat.........................
waynes gettin more dick than 10 chick's at madi gras
Can't reach, waynes beat.........................
Kick'em off his stool an show him gravity's a law
It's unreal in a way, I think wayne's gone gay.
This bitch actually plays more played wordplay.

Some one help this herb........Tell em CAP'S dont MERK-
He's got more LETTER's in his line's than a fuckin MAIL CLERK
Steel' your vision, witta set........sold only at Sear's
Waynes got more wood in his ear's than santa's ReignDeer
A dope for sure. I'm glad to adopt the fact that your wack
Wayne couldn't spit Back if we gave him Eight Traxx-(old tapes)

C-B-4 I finish, let me administ the damage,
Re-asses all costs....
And call Red-Cross....
This kid couldn't spit fire if I slipped him Hot Sauce.

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and you went over the limit

Nope....I counted 8 bars silly,
It just aint in the format you know of.

UPPIN.

Voted For: CarsonJet

CarsonJet:

Wayne wanted 8 bars,But I think he meants lines.
Cus, By the time I hit four, The victory's mine.
^^ehh 2/10
Re-Wind, and realize,.Yeh...He was that herb Yung Wun.
It's like we all got Spur's way he's gettin Piss't-On.
^^good bar 7/10
Shit's deep, packed meat.........................
waynes gettin more dick than 10 chick's at madi gras
Can't reach, waynes beat.........................
Kick'em off his stool an show him gravity's a law
^^ehh 3/10
It's unreal in a way, I think wayne's gone gay.
This bitch actually plays more played wordplay.
^^ehh 1/10
Some one help this herb........Tell em CAP'S dont MERK-
He's got more LETTER's in his line's than a fuckin MAIL CLERK
^^decent 4/10
Steel' your vision, witta set........sold only at Sear's
Waynes got more wood in his ear's than santa's ReignDeer
^^decent 4/10
A dope for sure. I'm glad to adopt the fact that your wack
Wayne couldn't spit Back if we gave him Eight Traxx-(old tapes)
^^decent 5/10
C-B-4 I finish, let me administ the damage,
Re-asses all costs....
And call Red-Cross....
This kid couldn't spit fire if I slipped him Hot Sauce.
^^decent closer 6/10

Overall: 32/80 (40%)

Wayne:

Im fuckin you pussies up so say goodBYE~TO~VIRGINTY/
I'll make you fags LIE~IN~VICINTIES for the dead until the end of TIME~AND~INFINITY/(Vicinity means a place, area)
^^decent opener 4/10
Ain't no way ya'll can fuck with the Seraph RHYMIN~ABILITY/
So go ahead and take a TRY~AT~JUST~KILLING~ME/
^^filler 0/10
It doesn't matter cause i know i'll be RESSURECTED/
Cause I always "live" for havoc and my crew's FOREVER~HECTIC/
^^more filler 1/10
We more "precise with spits" than a PHORENSICS~TEAM/(phorensics teams sometime use DNA from "spit" to find out who a murderer is at a crime scene, so they're "precise with spits")
We the BEST~REGIME so to mess with us results in INCESSANT~SCREAMS/(incessant means constant, nonstop)
^^decent 3/10
Now sleep from the bullets of my M16/
Take a "dirt nap" bitches and have some PLEASANT~DREAMS
^^ok 3/10

Overall: 11/50 (22%)

Your verse was basically all filler

Vote: CarsonJet


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lmao....

My good bars got less points than my bad bar's.
Text battles have really gone to shit.
I think its just that kids dont know how to battle any more.
So....How would they know how to vote? Exactly....;)

another moron in need of education.
Shit's deep, packed meat.........................
waynes gettin more dick than 10 chick's at madi gras
Can't reach, waynes beat0/10 THATS NOT THE BAR
Kick'em off his stool an show him gravity's a law
It's unreal in a way, I think wayne's gone gay.
This bitch actually plays more played wordplay0/10 THATS NOT THE BAR

Shit's deep, packed meat.........................
waynes gettin more dick than 10 chick's at madi gras
THATS A LINE
Can't reach, waynes beat0/10
Kick'em off his stool an show him gravity's a law
THATS A LINE
It's unreal in a way, I think wayne's gone gay.
This bitch actually plays more wit played wordplay0/10
THATS A BAR

Uppin. I promise I wont vote on your battle. If you vote here.

This was feedback posted for Wayne
 

were u battlin carson or jus talkin about yaself....until da last bar???

This was feedback posted for CarsonJet
 

bah.....battles too long..........................

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This was feedback posted for Wayne
 

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Voted For: Wayne

i liked your verses but some punches werent quite hard enough.....the opening was good along with the closure.....ur vocab work wasnt ur best....but it was good overall..


vote:Wayne

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Voted For: CarsonJet

hahaha.. ....aye I though wayne had him cause his sit came in hot as hell but he was beat Jet won hand down

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Lmao Text Heads.
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This was feedback posted for CarsonJet
 

Wow,

i didnt know you did dope text too, props...

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Voted For: Wayne

Flow - Wayne had the better flow and what now even though the structure was a lil off, carson didnt catch much flow with urs....no hate

Punches -Umm im gunna say tie, both had fair ammount of punches in this battle nothing spectacular though.

Personals - Carson had a few personals that hit hard in this...wayne didnt see much personals

Multies -This is were Wayne runs away with the battle, his multis were off the hook, carson ur multis lacked...no hate......

Vocab-Once again wayne dominated in this catergory with his excellent vocab...once again carson...didnt see much from ur verse wit vocab

Originality - Both pretty original nothing to played in this battle.....so tie....

But overall as u can see v/Wayne

Please RTF

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Voted For: CarsonJet

hmmm this battle wasn't that good....both verses lacked in punches and personals....however ima break it down

carsonjet: i think you came with the better punches....yours flowed better....and you had more wordplay and metas....
Some one help this herb........Tell em CAP'S dont MERK-
He's got more LETTER's in his line's than a fuckin MAIL CLERK
^^^my fave line

wayne: your verse lacked in punches.....i didn't feel like you really dissed him with anything that you said.....your structure was all over the place as well

therefore overall my vote goes to carsonjet for better punches and meta's

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Voted For: CarsonJet

Nice punches came harder, and had some nice vocab,

V/Carsonjet

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what the hell is this? I already won this battle.
everybody vote again. this clown reset the polls.