Mr. Lyricist vs pictureperfect2
 

Battle Rules:

6 - Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Hate
No Dickriding.



Minimum posts to vote: 400

Check in by: 07-26-05 at 07:51 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

Mr. Lyricist has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-26-05 07:28 PM.

pictureperfect2 has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-26-05 07:30 PM.

You'll get sonned, & I'll whore-eyes-n' put an end to your sight.*
& if you think you MAY win, bitch I got 11 more months on my side.
You won't be perfect, after I rip picture out of the frame.
Cuz' he was born with an L - like Sam Jacksons' government name.
Even w/ a hot chick PP can't get/be hard, it's a mystery :confused:.
So I'll dish 2 swipes to open your chest, & add in-salt to injury.

Explanations for the dicktards - * whore-eyes-n' = horizon should add up from the beginning.

If you don't get anything else, don't vote.

this kid is the shit at rapping.... yo i surrender
cuz if your mr. lyricist..........
........... u dissed all of rap and my gender
avy a pimp? yet ya skill w/ a girl is the same as a bar
and ya heard he said he was rusty...........
............................................ even outside of his car
if this kid was offered head i know what he'd choose
cuz i read his verse............
.............and saw he doesn't put brains to use

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Voted For: pictureperfect2

ok this is an aight battle but really it was one sided here PP2 got this fo sure u had more punches and that were hittin as well.....a betta flow a better verse totally though u didnt have anywordplay or not enuff of personals but its ok u got the punches and thats what got u my vote......but ML u need to work on ya delivery so punches can hit harder aight man and flow as well need to have that flow down try to use mulit's as well......but my v/ goes to Picture Perfect2..........
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PLZ RTF WIT A HONEST VOTE IN MY BATTLES IN MY SIG.....THNX U VERY MUCH IN ADVANCE.......or vote gets removed......

uppin.............................................

Voted For: pictureperfect2

6 line battles r gay.....but hey

pp2:
this kid is the shit at rapping.... yo i surrender
cuz if your mr. lyricist..........
........... u dissed all of rap and my gender
^^GOOD OPENER...I WAS FEELIND ANAME PLAY BUT WHUTSZ UP WITH ALL DA PERIODS
avy a pimp? yet ya skill w/ a girl is the same as a bar
and ya heard he said he was rusty...........
............................................ even outside of his car
^^^DECENT...U FLIP'D WHUT HE SAID IN DAT QUOTE
if this kid was offered head i know what he'd choose
cuz i read his verse............
.............and saw he doesn't put brains to use
^^^NAH....2 BASIC

PP2...I DIDN'T SEE MUCH CREATIVITY BUT I GUESS DATZ UR STYLE U GET RITE 2 DA POINT BUT OVERALL U HAD A SOLID VERSE

mr.lyricist:
You'll get sonned, & I'll whore-eyes-n' put an end to your sight.*
& if you think you MAY win, bitch I got 11 more months on my side.
^^^LOL...SIGHT & SIDE DONT RYHME FAM..DAT WAS FORCED
You won't be perfect, after I rip picture out of the frame.
Cuz' he was born with an L - like Sam Jacksons' government name.
^^LMAOOO...ILL DAT WAS MADD WACK
Even w/ a hot chick PP can't get/be hard, it's a mystery .
So I'll dish 2 swipes to open your chest, & add in-salt to injury.
^^^BEST LINE OF YA VERSE AND IT WAS WEAK

MR....IN A 6 LINE BATTLIN U DIDN'T HAVE 1 HOTT LINE 4REAL NO HATIN OR NOTHIN......

V/PP2....VERY EASILY

uppin.................... and mr. L what was your name when u used to battle here?

upppin.....................................,,,,,,, ,,,,

This was feedback posted for Mr. Lyricist
 

If i could.. id vote for lyricist..
- good punchlines.. good flow.. the only thing im not feeling is "whore-eyes'n'" If u were to just rap this and not write it.. it would make no sense to whoever is listening.. Im no great, but think about that next time u wanna break up words to different words that sound good

upppin............................................ .

Voted For: pictureperfect2

You'll get sonned, & I'll whore-eyes-n' put an end to your sight.*
& if you think you MAY win, bitch I got 11 more months on my side.
^^good...Like the wordplay in set-up..4/10
You won't be perfect, after I rip picture out of the frame.
Cuz' he was born with an L - like Sam Jacksons' government name.
^^played here....3/10
Even w/ a hot chick PP can't get/be hard, it's a mystery .
So I'll dish 2 swipes to open your chest, & add in-salt to injury.
^^not much of a punch....1/10

OK..flow/structure was good throughout the whole verse.1st bar was your best.Nice wordplay and all.And that 2nd bar...I know I've heard sumtin similar to it somewhere before.Get more creative.3rd bar wasn't a punch as it was more of gangsta talk.

this kid is the shit at rapping.... yo i surrender
cuz if your mr. lyricist..........
........... u dissed all of rap and my gender
^^OK....but seemed sloppy wit the rhymin words..3/10
avy a pimp? yet ya skill w/ a girl is the same as a bar
and ya heard he said he was rusty...........
............................................ even outside of his car
^^good play of the qoute...7/10
if this kid was offered head i know what he'd choose
cuz i read his verse............
.............and saw he doesn't put brains to use
^^Ok...but basic...4/10

OK...an ite verse.1st bar was ite..good concept..but didn't like the way it was put together.The 2nd bar was the best in the whole battle.A good personal play of qoute.The 3rd bar was a lil Basic.I think if Mr.Lyrisist put a good punch for the last bar...he woulda had it

vote-PicturePerfect2

uppin............................................. .....

upppin............................................

This was feedback posted for pictureperfect2
 

You'll get sonned, & I'll whore-eyes-n' put an end to your sight.*
& if you think you MAY win, bitch I got 11 more months on my side.
nice word-play meta....

You won't be perfect, after I rip picture out of the frame.
Cuz' he was born with an L - like Sam Jacksons' government name.
streched,

Even w/ a hot chick PP can't get/be hard, it's a mystery .
So I'll dish 2 swipes to open your chest, & add in-salt to injury.

2ed line u've fliped it, i've spit something like that befor i said, i'll stab ya punches just to add insult to injury...
still decent flip...

some decent punches... nice verse...





this kid is the shit at rapping.... yo i surrender
cuz if your mr. lyricist..........
........... u dissed all of rap and my gender
decent

avy a pimp? yet ya skill w/ a girl is the same as a bar
and ya heard he said he was rusty...........
............................................ even outside of his car\
aight

if this kid was offered head i know what he'd choose
cuz i read his verse............
.............and saw he doesn't put brains to use
aww nice punch here good ending

close battle but pictureprefect just edge this out close battle nice punches good fight

Voted For: Mr. Lyricist

mr.lyricist break down!

You'll get sonned, & I'll whore-eyes-n' put an end to your sight.*
& if you think you MAY win, bitch I got 11 more months on my side
I like tha play on tha words...good punch,but it didnt have any multi's( :huh: )
but still connect'd nice...8/10

You won't be perfect, after I rip picture out of the frame.
Cuz' he was born with an L - like Sam Jacksons' government name.
Sorta weak...but tha punch was coo..I like'd it! 6/10

Even w/ a hot chick PP can't get/be hard, it's a mystery .
So I'll dish 2 swipes to open your chest, & add in-salt to injury.
I sorta got this punch but didnt...."Dish 2 swipes?"..was that like dick on a plate,cuz if it was then that was nice...SWipe means in chicago is dick!
7/10

PicturePerfect his ur breakdown..."an I need more creativity?Hah!"

this kid is the shit at rapping.... yo i surrender
cuz if your mr. lyricist..........
........... u dissed all of rap and my gender
structure was nice,Very nice at that...but tha opener was played,not really a punch..5/10(cuz tha structure)

avy a pimp? yet ya skill w/ a girl is the same as a bar
and ya heard he said he was rusty...........
............................................ even outside of his car
Best punch thus far,personal an structure was on point..but tha punch was mundane at best...7/10

if this kid was offered head i know what he'd choose
cuz i read his verse............
.............and saw he doesn't put brains to use
Really? what where you tryin ta say?...I think you couldve throwin tha punch different,but still lacked creativity,and bad for a closer...4/10

Hey,I know im not tha best...but I judge battles on tha strong points of both contenders...not on multi's an wordplay..if tha punch connects it connects...so sayin that mr lyricist won cuz his connect'd an had good wordplay..while PP had lack'd in really throwin any punch that hit as hard as Mr's!

No hate just elevate,Str8 up an down! :thumbup:
Return vote an honest 1 please...

cold steel is a homo...... uppin....................

Voted For: pictureperfect2

this kid is the shit at rapping.... yo i surrender
cuz if your mr. lyricist..........
........... u dissed all of rap and my gender
avy a pimp? yet ya skill w/ a girl is the same as a bar
and ya heard he said he was rusty...........
............................................ even outside of his car
vs
You'll get sonned, & I'll whore-eyes-n' put an end to your sight.*
& if you think you MAY win, bitch I got 11 more months on my side.

and mr, i aint even like that line too much....
picture def took this for adding a personal in every bar
1st 2 bars nice hard hits
mr must be rusty cuz he fell off after 1 bar

bitches lickin bitches............................

Voted For: pictureperfect2

Mr. Lyricist
You'll get sonned, & I'll whore-eyes-n' put an end to your sight.*
& if you think you MAY win, bitch I got 11 more months on my side.
^self glor, no damaging punch 0/10^
You won't be perfect, after I rip picture out of the frame.
Cuz' he was born with an L - like Sam Jacksons' government name.
^Iight word play, semi diss 4/10^
Even w/ a hot chick PP can't get/be hard, it's a mystery .
So I'll dish 2 swipes to open your chest, & add in-salt to injury.
^sorta forced the rhyme, good wordplay 5/10^
OVERALL:Your verse was good structured, i was able to catch a good flow, only flawws were ur personals and punches i dont feel that they were hard enough.....and you had some self glor, talking about urself....save that for the cyphers

PicturePerfect2

this kid is the shit at rapping.... yo i surrender
cuz if your mr. lyricist..........
........... u dissed all of rap and my gender
^Good punch and set up for the diss 6/10^
avy a pimp? yet ya skill w/ a girl is the same as a bar
and ya heard he said he was rusty...........
............................................ even outside of his car
^Once again good set up for the punch, hit hard 7/10^
if this kid was offered head i know what he'd choose
cuz i read his verse............
.............and saw he doesn't put brains to use
^pretty decent closer, 5/10^
OVERALL:u stayed consistant with your punches....they were effective to ur opponent....ur flow was off but u made up wit ur outstanding punches......you take this for better punches..

v/pictureperfect2

RTF on my new text battle.....thanks man