"Grand Finale" Ft. Spoken Word, Opt1k, Artik Phrost
 

[Talking:Tony Green]
Yeah niggaz lets Go.........

[Verse1:Opt1k]
there's times in life you can see the end.
a loaded guncocked back which u cant defend.
and with all these ters drippin city cries out questions
under full pressure which intends power suggestions
all these bithes could rot all on the floor
cuz my inner most feeling?!o dont care anymore
all others act stupid reactin fakes and pretends
my eye's sealed shut til its all real again
then all tryna cope with the ups and downs
everyody in pain tryna deal with the sounds
many thoughts rushin through a pictures drawn
cant do much at all til the pain is gone
cruel intentions criminal minds,the bad past of me
criminal memories rush as the ink from my pen bleeds.

[Verse2:Spoken Word]
Ive been rapping since rap was just something to do
But now im getting dope, spitting something at you
Im true to the game, writting shit thatll bury you cats
Talking like you a gangsta, but yall scared of the gats
You fake MC's stay hidden like the hairs on my ass
Stop talking, Aint no way that im aware of your past
I lock and load, pop and go, youll be hearing the blast
Stay low, dont ya know, or Ill be clearing your stash
Im on another level, stay away cause im busting loose
Yall trying to catch up, but this aint duck duck goose
I got labels looking to sign me, but im too dope to choose
Like tightwalking with no net, ya'll all on a rope to lose
Im still the best and you know i run with a ruthless crew
That'll leave ya walking around with just a tooth or two

[Verse3:Artik Phrost]
…This Marks The End Of Ya Simple Ways And A Start Of A New Era
New Swear Of Heads Keying Punches Two By Two Like Noah Paired Um!!..
…A Style Kewl An’ Airy, For Yall Yeah Its Scary; How Im So Care Free
Cuz Yall ‘Brim Lactose Intolerant’; While I’m Parallel To ‘Ledge An Dairy’!!..
…An’ DoContinue Talks Trash; No Wonder That’s All Yu Bring To The Menu
So I Present To The Venue: 'Its True Good Things Eventually End', So..Please..Do Continue!!..
…Yeah, I Got KO’d Twice In The League; But Im Still The Head To Beat
Cuz Truth Be Told I Made A Whole Crew Either Contradict Themselves Or Admit Being Scared Of Me!!..
…See My Actions Speak, So Listen Cuz Realli Yu Herbs Have Yet To Learn
Text Is Deeper Than Structure, So I ‘Cremate Bars’; Its A ‘Hard Lesson Urned’!!..
…I Brought Ya ‘Food For Thought’ And Ya’ll Took The ‘Bulemic Route’
I’ll ‘Spare No Feelings Now’; Hint Towards AP An’ Watch How Ya ‘Nerve Evens Out’!!..

[Verse4:Tony Green]
(Who the fuck is that) Its Tony Green mothafucker.
(Dressed in all black) I'm on the scene mothafucker.
With some seen mothafuckers,bout to bleed mothafucker.
Glocks ring mothafucker, till you scream mothafucker.
See your brains will splat, I'm ready for that.
25 feet with a gat I shoot better than T-Mac.
Let you say what you say let you think what you think.
Cause when it all goes down you gone learn shit really do stink.
Cause niggaz shells ah fly probably make you cry.
You wantin no more drama like you Mary J Blidge.
A gangsta's story nigga I'm the sequel.
I'm somethin like TO the way I fly like a Eagle.
Nigga I'm a head bussa no problem to hid the scraps.
Nigga I swing bats like my name was Big Mac.
Niggaz begging for Encore's like my name Slim Shady.
I pitty you bitch niggaz like abandoned babies.
I got Hollywood status like I came from Cali.
Tony Green checkin out in this mafucking Grand Finale.

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Theirs the link uppin hot joint!!!!!!

[Verse1:Opt1k]
there's times in life you can see the end.
a loaded guncocked back which u cant defend.......

Opt1k your verse was simple but o.k.....you need to up your vocab and improve your structure.....try to make each line near enough the same length...your verse didn't lack in enotion tho and i felt this was your strongest point....therefore expand on this and include more in your verse

[Verse2:Spoken Word]
Ive been rapping since rap was just something to do
But now im getting dope, spitting something at you

spoken word....a good verse from you...nice flow...some funny lines....here and there and you also had metaphors as well....good verse..keep it up

[Verse3:Artik Phrost]
…This Marks The End Of Ya Simple Ways And A Start Of A New Era
New Swear Of Heads Keying Punches Two By Two Like Noah Paired Um!!..

Artik phrost....really like your style...this is the second piece of writing i've read from you and i think your real good....too many good lines to mention and metaphors were real nice....punches were hot also....get at me bout a collab sometime

Verse4:Tony Green]
(Who the fuck is that) Its Tony Green mothafucker.
(Dressed in all black) I'm on the scene mothafucker.

T.......an o.k verse but i've seen better from you....i think you used too much repitition....your flow was off at some points also...anyway all in all a nice piece and ya'll styles of writing worked well together....i look forward to more from all of you........

Thanxx lil mama uppin fo more feed!

Uppin to the top!

this was fire

singularly i liked third n forth verse best
2nd verse was good t dont get it twisted
first verse was not much on its own but was the perfect set up for the tempo, vibe, feeling n just, total mindset of the song...great placements wit da verses
most yall need vocab, but thats just my preference mad niggas are simple lyricaly but nasty at story telling n punchlines n shit like that./..so i took it for what it was and enjoyed alot...hot shit!

chek my O.M.....its called Hate on this

iight thanxx uppin to the top gimme a link to your om!

damnnnnnnn fiya dawg artik phrost took that shit to another level yo opt1k came better thanusual not to hard but aight spoken word was hot to tony green u did your thing nice collab

[Verse3:Artik Phrost]
…This Marks The End Of Ya Simple Ways And A Start Of A New Era
New Swear Of Heads Keying Punches Two By Two Like Noah Paired Um!!..
…A Style Kewl An’ Airy, For Yall Yeah Its Scary; How Im So Care Free
Cuz Yall ‘Brim Lactose Intolerant’; While I’m Parallel To ‘Ledge An Dairy’!!..
…An’ DoContinue Talks Trash; No Wonder That’s All Yu Bring To The Menu
So I Present To The Venue: 'Its True Good Things Eventually End', So..Please..Do Continue!!..
…Yeah, I Got KO’d Twice In The League; But Im Still The Head To Beat
Cuz Truth Be Told I Made A Whole Crew Either Contradict Themselves Or Admit Being Scared Of Me!!..
…See My Actions Speak, So Listen Cuz Realli Yu Herbs Have Yet To Learn
Text Is Deeper Than Structure, So I ‘Cremate Bars’; Its A ‘Hard Lesson Urned’!!..
…I Brought Ya ‘Food For Thought’ And Ya’ll Took The ‘Bulemic Route’
I’ll ‘Spare No Feelings Now’; Hint Towards AP An’ Watch How Ya ‘Nerve Evens Out’!!..

[Verse4:Tony Green]
(Who the fuck is that) Its Tony Green mothafucker.
(Dressed in all black) I'm on the scene mothafucker.
With some seen mothafuckers,bout to bleed mothafucker.
Glocks ring mothafucker, till you scream mothafucker.
See your brains will splat, I'm ready for that.
25 feet with a gat I shoot better than T-Mac.
Let you say what you say let you think what you think.
Cause when it all goes down you gone learn shit really do stink.
Cause niggaz shells ah fly probably make you cry.
You wantin no more drama like you Mary J Blidge.
A gangsta's story nigga I'm the sequel.
I'm somethin like TO the way I fly like a Eagle.
Nigga I'm a head bussa no problem to hid the scraps.
Nigga I swing bats like my name was Big Mac.
Niggaz begging for Encore's like my name Slim Shady.
I pitty you bitch niggaz like abandoned babies.
I got Hollywood status like I came from Cali.
Tony Green checkin out in this mafucking Grand Finale.



Those Two Verses
The best shit ive seen In a while Shit was mad crazy You should get mad feed on this man Realy good shit

10/10

NICE STUYFF

word those verses were hot

uppin this for fam

ayo uppin this collab its hot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

On the club scene as a thug mean hardcore like a submarine
Got potions galore on the oceans floor and got the shores hugged keen
Don’t want enemy ships getting the identity Of my script
Because my quotes don’t float on boats but yet make people trip
It could make a guy panic like the titanic sink his pride for obscenity
Yeah always find whack ID’S in a stack of MC’S headed to my vicinity
Peep clever and heap together some love rap wanna hug
ASAP, so girl your butt is brown and its cut round and snub
Girl I want cake” but MADD I don’t date see you later cuz”
"Aw boo don’t go"

man post a damn feed not no wack drop homie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!RPFLMFAO@^^^!!!!!!!!!

Lol..........why didn't you make your own thread for this...... :laugh:

hahaha.....................^^^yea LOL

this whole thing was ill I liked the vocab and flow it was hella cool keep writing all of u guys..and if this is an audio i'd love to hear it lol..but yeah good stuff keep writing

^^^LoL the dumbiest shit I ever saw not the verse the way he posted it in another OM LoL!

I think tha first 2 cats verse was kinda soft, and completely different from tha last 2. I was really feelin Artiks verse. She came wit some nice disses, and punches and what not. I think she shined more in this collab, but then when I seen my nigga Tony's drop...I was feeling it. Only thing is, you started out good, but then you started fallin off on your verse. And at tha end, you put out too many unneccessary metaphores. So, I was thinkin, if you came wit some good fillers to fill in those metaphores, you're verse wouldve been a whole lot better. But, this was a nice collab, no hate to anyone. Tha first 2 heads, ya'll verse was good....Nothing Special, Unquotable Lyrics, mainly because it wasn't interresting. Tha verses were a lil boring. But, I give this collab a 7. Nice shit...And nice teamwork. Keep doin what ya'll do.


Tony, hit me up on PM one more time, and I will do a fresh collab wit you from scratch. I'll hit you up witta good verse, if tha concept is coo.


Keep ya'll heads up!

iight J Dizzy good lookin bout to hit you up!

hey yall hit me up http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=202092) can even drop a rhyme if you want

ooookay uppin!!!!

LOL...Tony Green....haha...i didnt even know u was still on this site.....this is Invektive

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artik had an good verse, except it didn't fit with everyone else's piece......and everyone else just had average drops, nothing really too deep......expand your thoughts peeps, get creative; tony, you said mother fucker 5 times in the first 4 lines......widen vocab, deeper thought......and this coulda been dope.

yo this was a nice collabo here amn mad nice yall did it mad good and TG's verse was the best though no offense but yall did good anyways but keep it up wit yall doin aight man but that was hott.......1

good lookin yall Invektive what down didn't even know you was still on this site LoL me and Invektive had a war out of this world LoL and Kesse yeah I was tryinn to get my point across hard witrh the mothafuckers LoL good lookin yo!

uppin to the top!!!!!!!!!!

dat shit is hot ya'll
i like Tony shit Motha Fucka

LooooooL good lookin foe uppin!

Verse4:Tony Green]
(Who the fuck is that) Its Tony Green mothafucker.
(Dressed in all black) I'm on the scene mothafucker.
With some seen mothafuckers,bout to bleed mothafucker.
Glocks ring mothafucker, till you scream mothafucker.
See your brains will splat, I'm ready for that.
25 feet with a gat I shoot better than T-Mac.
Let you say what you say let you think what you think.
Cause when it all goes down you gone learn shit really do stink.
Cause niggaz shells ah fly probably make you cry.
You wantin no more drama like you Mary J Blidge.
A gangsta's story nigga I'm the sequel.
I'm somethin like TO the way I fly like a Eagle.
Nigga I'm a head bussa no problem to hid the scraps.
Nigga I swing bats like my name was Big Mac.
Niggaz begging for Encore's like my name Slim Shady.
I pitty you bitch niggaz like abandoned babies.
I got Hollywood status like I came from Cali.
Tony Green checkin out in this mafucking Grand Finale


ok....this was aight...but man u could'nt use yo own style fo this .....all did was take the way
Cube did his verse and put yo name in it and slapped sum okay punches in it...this was okay the rest of it was hot though Tony green use your own style next time

uhm yeah. it was not that bad. would have sounded better with a chorus. it was hot but it doesn't really connect when I read it. but yeah this was hot. how about that remix tony green. I got you homie.

^^^Remix to what hit me up and holla at me

But I did not steal n e thing from Cube his style and words was way diffrent from mines!

ah yo man foe holla at me for a collab i gotz a mad verse to put up wit ur style homie holla.........PM me homie peace ur foe!!!!!!!!!!!opt1k.....hahaha....REALITY CHECK!

yea tony green make a remix i might drop a fw lines up ther aight i neva really did the om thing so it would be a nice way to start

iight I'm a remix to I Aint Fuckin Wit Cha pm a verse MC opt1k I'm gone holla at you.