MC:Philosopher vs ColdSteel
 

Battle Rules:

CREW BATTLE M.M.M. Vs. W.A.R.


6 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 07-30-05 at 10:09 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

MC:Philosopher has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-27-05 05:05 PM.

I gotta spit form the end in reverse for u to finish me
U sippin Hennessey …..and from anywhere but Memphis cause it aint a ten-I-see(Tennessee)
True name cause u aint hot and you steel rhymes that’s a true fact
Saying he wanna “CHANGE” the game so he lined up “4 QBS” to get a “DOLLAR BACK”
This kid is wack…. He only win one liners and no shows unless he battling sorry cats
Name of a fake rap hero cold steel save your life the villains sending me
He so slow he walked to “McDonalds” to try to find his “arch enemy’
I aint gonna spit gun talk cause I really don’t need to spray
Forget a clip to the head his brains already where defeat lay( the feet)
Never in~vite-a-man (vitamin) to battle its not good for your heath
Reflecting back ova your dead body so in your avatar you see yourself
Let hell freeze ova so u can get a breath of fresh air like a pack of mints
So fuck using pen-n-paper ur crews just dead people like the sixth sense
Mislead Meager Mother fuckers no wonder u don’t get respect
Not to mention half of your damn crew is a bunch of R.A.W. rejects

ColdSTEEL has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-28-05 07:22 PM.

dang man drop your verse already it dont take a year but i forgot u got post a written

Look at the chump of the crew,Claims himself the boss!
This battle is over even Randy Mcnally cant help ur "Loss!".
"Drop quicker!"...Why?...We know your fake son!
Take this "L" like vitamins...cuz ur gonna be lookin like he Ate 1.(8-1)
He aint even a worthy fighter,sorta like Bernard Hopkins.
Ur punches been seen ery'where,sorta like bird droppins!
Imma make this real eazy...like Wit built in strategy!
Cuz the only time you get close ta ah crown is if you filled in cavity's!

Okay...

This was feedback posted for ColdSTEEL
 

checkin polls.................G'luck to both man i think dis is kinda close

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okay nice drop cold steel uppin in here to get votes i wil return the favor

Voted For: MC:Philosopher

uppin this 4 crew, nice verse fam, lmfao@the closer! :thumbup:

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shit, get that switched to feedback lol.....sorry y'all lol

i already posted the link to get it switched......

Voted For: MC:Philosopher

MC- your verse was nice manye...Your structure...hmmm you need to fix that up a little...Cuz at the beginning your lines were strecheted....but your punches were good n all..some were a little weak...but most hit hard and connected well n all...Had some nice personals too to go with it...so overall-7.5/10...

Coldsteel- your verse was decent...your punches were good but really they were weak at times there was 2 or 3 punches that were good i thought but the rest just didnt hit hard or connect well...structure was ya know blah good n all...had personals...but overall 6.0/10...Your punches just were weaker...

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Voted For: ColdSTEEL

Look at the chump of the crew,Claims himself the boss!
This battle is over even Randy Mcnally cant help ur "Loss!".
^^good rhyming....weak punch...3/10
"Drop quicker!"...Why?...We know your fake son!
Take this "L" like vitamins...cuz ur gonna be lookin like he Ate 1.(8-1)
^^^creativite.....6/10
He aint even a worthy fighter,sorta like Bernard Hopkins.
Ur punches been seen ery'where,sorta like bird droppins!
^^OK...but worded a lil bland...5/10
Imma make this real eazy...like Wit built in strategy!
Cuz the only time you get close ta ah crown is if you filled in cavity's!
^^Nice multi.....6/10

Punches wasn't all that hot.But I loved the multis.I see that one sllyable rhyme sheme around here too much.Had creativity on that 8-1 line.Bird droppins was just...too basic.

I gotta spit form the end in reverse for u to finish me
U sippin Hennessey …..and from anywhere but Memphis cause it aint a ten-I-see(Tennessee)
^^you serious..this wordplay is played as fuck..3/10
True name cause u aint hot and you steel rhymes that’s a true fact
Saying he wanna “CHANGE” the game so he lined up “4 QBS” to get a “DOLLAR BACK”
^^set- up was good,but didn't relate to punch....5/10
This kid is wack…. He only win one liners and no shows unless he battling sorry cats
Name of a fake rap hero cold steel save your life the villains sending me
^^didn't rhyme...whack....0/10
He so slow he walked to “McDonalds” to try to find his “arch enemy’
I aint gonna spit gun talk cause I really don’t need to spray
^^didn't rhyme and shit....0/10
Forget a clip to the head his brains already where defeat lay( the feet)
Never in~vite-a-man (vitamin) to battle its not good for your heath
^^ok......5/10
Reflecting back ova your dead body so in your avatar you see yourself
Let hell freeze ova so u can get a breath of fresh air like a pack of mints
^^didn't rhyme again....4/10
So fuck using pen-n-paper ur crews just dead people like the sixth sense
Mislead Meager Mother fuckers no wonder u don’t get respect
^^you not gonna rhyme anymore are you?...0/10
Not to mention half of your damn crew is a bunch of R.A.W. rejects
^^gon finish that bar?

MAN....I thought because of the more lines that you woulda won...but I guess not.For some reason you just stopped rhymin words for no reason.THat messed you up.Had some played werdplay like the vitamin and tennessee one.

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This was feedback posted for MC:Philosopher
 

lmao da wordplay was crazy MC jus crazy does punches was hot also i think you got this one but its hard to say good battle

Voted For: MC:Philosopher

erm .................did u know that m.m.m have been deleted????so u automatically win anything u want me to rtf for that battle u voted me cause u automatically win this

This was feedback posted for ColdSTEEL
 

checkin these polllz 1,2,1,2.........lol...........

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rite i will explain mc good verse structure is good needs bit of work your punches took this battle very close battle cold had only a few good punches tried hard structure was good personals woz good overall vote goes to mc philosopher

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This was feedback posted for MC:Philosopher
 

man this battle is close both had good punches even though philosopher u went way over the line limit but still managed to keep your verse together

uppin this to the top drop a link and if u didnt understand i hope u didnt vote shit

uppin this to the top drop a link and if u didnt understand i hope u didnt vote shit

Voted For: ColdSTEEL

ColdSteel:

Look at the chump of the crew,Claims himself the boss!
This battle is over even Randy Mcnally cant help ur "Loss!".
^^decent opener ok meta 6/10
"Drop quicker!"...Why?...We know your fake son!
Take this "L" like vitamins...cuz ur gonna be lookin like he Ate 1.(8-1)
^^dope bar 9/10
He aint even a worthy fighter,sorta like Bernard Hopkins.
Ur punches been seen ery'where,sorta like bird droppins!
^^ehh ok meta 5/10
Imma make this real eazy...like Wit built in strategy!
Cuz the only time you get close ta ah crown is if you filled in cavity's!
^^good closer nice meta ok punch 7/10

Overall: 27/40 (68%)


MC:Philosopher:

I gotta spit form the end in reverse for u to finish me
U sippin Hennessey …..and from anywhere but Memphis cause it aint a ten-I-see(Tennessee)
^^dope opener little stretched 7/10
True name cause u aint hot and you steel rhymes that’s a true fact
Saying he wanna “CHANGE” the game so he lined up “4 QBS” to get a “DOLLAR BACK”
This kid is wack…. He only win one liners and no shows unless he battling sorry cats
^^first 2 lines was dope, last one was wack 9/15
Name of a fake rap hero cold steel save your life the villains sending me
He so slow he walked to “McDonalds” to try to find his “arch enemy’
^^lol decent bar 6/10
I aint gonna spit gun talk cause I really don’t need to spray
Forget a clip to the head his brains already where defeat lay( the feet)
^^defeat lines are played 3/10
Never in~vite-a-man (vitamin) to battle its not good for your heath
Reflecting back ova your dead body so in your avatar you see yourself
^^good personal 7/10
Let hell freeze ova so u can get a breath of fresh air like a pack of mints
So fuck using pen-n-paper ur crews just dead people like the sixth sense
^^decent personals 7/10
Mislead Meager Mother fuckers no wonder u don’t get respect
Not to mention half of your damn crew is a bunch of R.A.W. rejects
^^oo hard decent closer 6/10

Overall: 45/75 (60%)


Vote: ColdSteel


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Good battle Mc:Phill.... :thumbup:

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Good votes an be honest..I will return tha favor...4real

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uppin yea it is a nice battle close one too.......

uppin for votes in here ready to get it ove a close on in here so if u drop a link i will definantly hit u back

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lol . . . like the closer how u played with every member of the crews name . . . i liked ur drop . . . but confused in some areas . . . so i thought it was best i didn't vote . . . but i was definitely more entertained with ur drop . . . goodluck . . . u should win

yea uppin this one for votes thanx for feed back man

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Voted For: MC:Philosopher

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FLOW-Meh...even i guess.Both you need to switch shit up to make it flow better.More multis woulda been nice.
Coldsteel had better structure.

PUNCHES-Coldsteel,to me,woulda had had it if he had as much lines as MC Philosopher.Mc..you had too many played wordplay.vitamin/in~vite-a-man..tennesee/ten-I-see..and that sixth sense line.But you got it for having more lines.AN unfair battle in my opinion.

Personals-Coldsteel had none.Though MC had played shit.

Multis-Even...only one multi by each in their verses.

Creativity-Coldsteel...like I said and explained already...MC Philiosopher..had a ton of played lines.

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More lines...its 6 lines min......But okay....still uppin!