Whitelight vs Souljah
 

Battle Rules:

CREW BATTLE M.M.M. Vs. W.A.R.

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 07-30-05 at 10:09 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.


Closed by request

WhiteLight has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-27-05 11:05 AM.

Souljah has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-27-05 07:49 PM.

You're poor, you battle for WAR instead of RAW cos you can't cut it
You ain't nuttin, shit, i'd take your lyric book and gut it
Must be smokin or suttin(something) if you think your shit compares
Goin nowhere like a cripple at the bottom of a flight of stairs
You ain't on my level, man this can't be called a tight fight
With a name like WhiteLight, shit, you must be talkin bout your night light
Your rhymes are wack, slackin lyrically you ain't jack
Fall apart quicker than an Al Quaeda's rucksack *.....

(*bag falls apart when bomb goes off, ya get it?)

6-unlimited?? fuck...20 lines is enought

His ´s`isters ´o`n him, mom ´u`nder him, and dad ´l`ick his balls,
He trying ´j`ab his dick to own ´a`nus, that’s the real group force.
His normal soldier, his evil makes made no sense,
He loves get in war, cause he take shots from prisoners.*
U use to drop theets at old times, but now from urself,
U r retired Hulg Hogan, start to make something else.
Even if I don’t make punches, u can’t see me well,
You ate cake once man, but you are old J.B.L.
Give gun for soulja, he shot wholes to his body,
Make he look stupid, like Sponge bob his buddy.
Soulja? Fuck his listened too much Mosh song,
…………………………and wanna battle right,
Choice his skin wrong and wanna join to white man side.**
Fucking soulja, whole army want to lick his balls,
or other way, make that for his job and suck WC`s walls.***
Cauze u love army, u have to call me general,
But don’t dickride son, keep cleaning those urinals.
I lead u to war^ but u fails against it, ou so sensitive,
Cauze ur parents didn’t know everything,
……………….I told u died in homo bar.


First bar: S-O-U-L-J-A…and H is `h´omo
* what soldiers did for prisoners in war of Iraq
Third bar: Hulg Hogan was in Cenas crew, and they won,
But mostly cause Cena (Cena in my sig) was there.
4:th bar: first line: Cenas special move ``U don’t see me``
Second line: J.B.L another wrestler from WWE, his old like Hogan.
**Em leads his group in Mosh song…got it?
***he has to clean toilets in army
^ This is crew battle W.A.R vs. m.m.m

….If u didn’t got it, don’t vote….

uppin this battle people..................................

This was feedback posted for WhiteLight
 

polls............................................. .....

Voted For: WhiteLight

Flow-Souljah...the smaller verse made it easier to get a better flow and all.And Whitelight..some of ur rhyming words sounded forced.Like the one rhying body/buddy,balls/force,amd made no sence/prisoners.MAke ur shit rhyme better.

Punches-Well...you would think White Light due to longer verse.But hsi shit was boring.I don;t recall even coming close to chuckling or saying "OOh' during it.I think you outta make ya verses shorter to keep the reader interested.Souljah came pretty weak too...but better than the other guy.

Vote-SOuljah

Switched

OOh...report that to get ot switched...my bad souljah.......

yo uppin this..............................................

uppin this battle mayn..................................

uppin............................................. ..................

Voted For: WhiteLight

Flow - Soulja,
was structured better, which made it flow better

Punches - Light,
some were played by both cats, but i felt that Light had more and the ones he did have hit alot harder

Multies -Obviously Light,
by his type of rhyme scheme, his rhyme scheme almost always guarantees him flow and multies. If your a newb take a close look and you'll see.

Originality - Even, some of lines by both of you were played, but overall alright verses


Nice battle yo...


Vote : White Light

This was feedback posted for WhiteLight
 

check the pollz....................ight battle....

uppin............................................. .

uppin this battle man

i will RTF if you leave a link with your vote

uppin............................................. .

This was feedback posted for WhiteLight
 

nice job uppin for fam............................

uppin..............................more votes.............

This was feedback posted for Souljah
 

jus checkin polllllllzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

uppin this.............................................. ..

uppin this battle as i always say jus leave a link and i'll RTF

uppin............................................. ...

Voted For: Souljah

this was a prett week battle in my opinion

neither had any decent lines...

soljah yours was shiort but consistant pretty good job from you

whitelight man yours was all over the place, sorry man punches werent hittinmg at all your astarted of ight but then it went down hill from there

imma give it to soljah. had better more cinsistant punches

v/ soljah pz

This was feedback posted for WhiteLight
 

pollzzz famlay......................................

uppin....................but are e.c and souljah in same??........cauze thats crew vote then....
but uppin this shit...........

that vote was cast before i was in LL

this battle was when i was in MMM

hence MMM vs WAR

uppin this shit...............this old...........lets close this

Voted For: WhiteLight

good drop i liked ur style and how u mixed words 2getha u get tha vote good drop no hate~peace~

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

^^^unexplained vote........

I WILL do everything in my power to have that removed

This was feedback posted for WhiteLight
 

damn dis old shit..............................
checkn polls

lol....ok man...watewa...but i could try to remove ecs vote cauze u both in ll....
lol.....but watewa...........uppin this shit

NE are you blind or just plain stupid.....

did i not explain in an earlier reply that EC and myself were not in the same crew when he voted......fuckin imbecile

i must get this closed.......uppin........................

uppin can we get this battle over and done with .

This was feedback posted for WhiteLight
 

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Voted For: Souljah

"Goin nowhere like a cripple at the bottom of a flight of stairs
You ain't on my level, man this can't be called a tight fight
With a name like WhiteLight, shit, you must be talkin bout your night light"

That's teh best part of this battle... Whitelight tried to get to complex with his spit and lost his flow... and the structure was just fucked up... spent too much time trying to make his punches look super lyrical and not enough time just making sure the punches he threw were hitting hard...

Opener: Souljah
Closer: Souljah (though it was a lil forced)
Punches: Souljah
Personals: Souljah (the nightlight line was better than all of White's attempts)
Creativity: White
Complexity: White
Structure: Souljah
Enjoyment: Souljah

Vote: WhiteLight

This was feedback posted for Souljah
 

pollz, this was ummmm weak........ouch............