one mic vs ~B~
 

Battle Rules:

CREW BATTLE M.M.M. Vs. W.A.R.

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 07-30-05 at 10:10 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

one mic has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-27-05 11:38 AM.

you joined several months after me, and you got double my posts
but you still no challenge to me at all, this battle must be a hoax
think you got skillz???, prove it by spittin rampant bars
but you cant, so imma flip this hoe like the guy in her avatar
im too hot for you, why did sixth sense send me to battle you??
imma switch dre's quote, "you know what (~B~), i dont like your attitude"
quit rap, go into the porn industry, and focus on sex*
cuz people are only gonna respect you if they know that you're blessed
bitch, you nutin to me, all your writtens are weak
you the "First Lady Of illness", what literally???
for your first battle it was a bad choice to start wit me
this hoes all outta control and twitchy like she got parkinsons disease

*-luk at her sig

~B~ has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-29-05 12:27 PM.

U aint 'james bond' you're more like 'pussy galore'*
cuz 007 gets ho's but ur just about to get whored!
After I giv u another 'L', ur confidence will be stirred,
unlike 007's martini, u gon be 'shaken & scared!'
u had 16 battles and only managed 2 win '6'**
changed ur name 2 'one mic' but u still suck dick!
ur an exagerated spermcell,i bet ur parents regret havin sex
ur a disapointment, thats y ur birth certificate is..........
.............................................an apology card from durex!***
Called u out a million times b4 but u always ducked****
must be a virgin they way u were scared 2 get (lyrically) fucked!
one mic such a 'herb' that he belongs in a kitchen!
u havta be transgendered cuz ur a cock and a chicken!*****
I'm above u, u cant touch this, ur a lyrical midget
If i personify skill with a girl then u'd be a fridget!******

*all the 007 lines r cuz he used to be called jmsbond7655, and 'pussy galore and her flying circus' was a james bond movie.
**checked battle stats and it sed he has 6 wins, 10 'L's'
***durex is a condom company
****he kept duckin me lol
*****cock means dick but is also a male version of a chicken
******fridget means sexually unresponsive!

*even after that explanation if u dont get anything, dont vote!*

Voted For: one mic

first off this was a reasonable battle from both.but only one cat can take the win and thats one mic, firstly his structure & flow were more on point, but more importantly his punches were a lot more creative & original.
both cudve cum harder and tried sum personals etc, but still, the winner is one mic

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

most of mine were personals........:huh: but yeah, thanx 4 voting....

This was feedback posted for ~B~
 

~B~ u should win this one easy nice job fam

uppin this for my crew

uppin.............................................

nice verse B, you had sum hot punchlines in that. uppin...

yeah u 2 man, no hate lol, i didnt no how many lines to go cuz it sed unlimited! i hate that.....but anyways UPPIN!

lol! yer, no hate anywayz. uppin this.............

This was feedback posted for ~B~
 

checkin pollz..........................................

This was feedback posted for ~B~
 

This is a nice long battle.
~B~ you came with some good personals,punches were more effective.

ur an exagerated spermcell,i bet ur parents regret havin sex
ur a disapointment, thats y ur birth certificate is..........
.............................................an apology card from durex

NICE NICE NICE. you got alot of originality in this battle.


one mic, your punches lacked any real effect..they were there but not hitting as hard as ~B~.
for your first battle it was a bad choice to start wit me
this hoes all outta control and twitchy like she got parkinsons disease
^
your closure didnt really end it with a bang, sort seemed like a bar I would use as a filler.

vote ~B~

(would of voted but I need 100 posts)

haha thanx 4 the feed man......uppin this shizzle rite here! :)

Voted For: ~B~

you joined several months after me, and you got double my posts
but you still no challenge to me at all, this battle must be a hoax
^^wat was point of the 1st line and whack
think you got skillz???, prove it by spittin rampant bars
but you cant, so imma flip this hoe like the guy in her avatar
^^^OK personal....
im too hot for you, why did sixth sense send me to battle you??
imma switch dre's quote, "you know what (~B~), i dont like your attitude"
^^this was stupuid....and EMinem said this retard
quit rap, go into the porn industry, and focus on sex*
cuz people are only gonna respect you if they know that you're blessed
^^whack......that's all...str8 whack
bitch, you nutin to me, all your writtens are weak
you the "First Lady Of illness", what literally???
^^same shit as before...whack as fuck
for your first battle it was a bad choice to start wit me
this hoes all outta control and twitchy like she got parkinsons disease
^^SHut up

Ight ....look...do you know wat a punch is?I only saw one legitamate punch and that was in the one with her avatar.The rest was bullshit.I'm sorry if I'm hurtin ya feelings..but I vote with str8 honesty.Go in tutorials and find out about wordplay and metas.You can't just say "Twitchy like parkinton desiase"....and expect us to go "OOOOOHHH".

U aint 'james bond' you're more like 'pussy galore'*
cuz 007 gets ho's but ur just about to get whored!
^^^pssh....a lil basic....
After I giv u another 'L', ur confidence will be stirred,
unlike 007's martini, u gon be 'shaken & scared!'
^^OK...it's personals I guess..so they hit a lil
u had 16 battles and only managed 2 win '6'**
changed ur name 2 'one mic' but u still suck dick!
^^set up was nice..but punch sucked...but a nice personal
ur an exagerated spermcell,i bet ur parents regret havin sex
ur a disapointment, thats y ur birth certificate is..........
.............................................an apology card from durex!***
^^Lmao...worded nice...it was ight
Called u out a million times b4 but u always ducked****
must be a virgin they way u were scared 2 get (lyrically) fucked!
^^bah...again...set up nice..but punch lacked
one mic such a 'herb' that he belongs in a kitchen!
u havta be transgendered cuz ur a cock and a chicken!
^^OK....set-up nice...the best line so far
I'm above u, u cant touch this, ur a lyrical midget
If i personify skill with a girl then u'd be a fridget!
^^OK.....

Well....you...like the other guy....were too basic.You lacked wordplay along with him.My reason for givin you the vote...is because you had personals.They were weak personals....yes...but personals nevertheless.They actually hit unlike the other's guy's one which had no efecct

Vote-B

werd on this shit ma.. overall a nice battle for B you been elevating and ya battle'n skills have improved a ton... the punches for B were witty funny and creative... i liked how your lines werent stretched and you kept the word play going through out the whole thing.. nothing to really bitch bout for ya very nice job
one mic... you have a bright future you just need to up your game some your punches lacked alot of punch you had an alright rhyme scheme and alright wordplay but i just dont think you were expecting this much from B ...

Good JOb B....

now do me a favor and hit up one of [font]'s battles for the rtf.. cuz i dont need a rtf ha .. but o yea Vote//B-Gurl for having a better verse overall

ite then thanx for votin anywayz. oh yer i forgot it woz eminem hu sed dat thing lol. uppin anywayz.....

ur spellings fucked up anywayz macreep i cudnt even understand wot u were sayin half the time lol

thanx macreep and turban, but turban how come it says u didnt vote and it wasnt feedback :huh:

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Voted For: one mic

Flow - One mic, was structured better, u had pretty tight verses goin on

Punches - ONE MIC, some were played by both cats, but i felt that one mic had more

Personals - ONE MIC again, had alot more, and were alot better, ~B~'s were pretty lame and didn't form together to well.. suggestion ~B~ you shouldn't have to explain your personals

Originality - Even, some of lines by both of you were played, but overall alright verses


but overall i think that one mic took this one...

lmao, ok, thanx 4 voting i guess......................

lol, yo bizarre thanx for votin man appreciate it. uppin......

2 the toooooooooooooooopppppppppppppppppppppppp!!!!!!!!! !!!

Voted For: ~B~

nothin
vs.
ur a disapointment, thats y ur birth certificate is..........
.............................................an apology card from durex!***
good concept: sayin he shouldn't of been born... decently creative.
since B was the only one with a punch he wins it cuz of punches creativity and.......shit
but yo if u gotta explain that much shit aint that good.
that durex line was good cuz it was good and didn't need anything extra to explain it.
pz

wtf, nothin, thats clearly a hate vote LOL

Voted For: ~B~

Oppinions-Alright in my view.......this really went to B..........he/she had alot more hard hittin bars and more bars infact. She kept it consistant wasnt eh best bars ive seen but there were all average and a lil bit above average.Basicly one mic should of brought more content to the table and should of made it hard hitting.

Flow-Both flows were nice and was easy to read
Structure-both there structures sucked
Metas-B took it with ease
Punches-Be took it with ease
Conetent-B had alot more content

Damn did not feel like doing this but what the hell anyways winner is B in my Opinion



Vote on my battle- Between me and (X)eed.......i only need one more vote dammit so come on bring it home for daddy

hey well, thanx 4 votin u 2......and dollar, i cant vote on that battle cuz im crew wit xeed.

Voted For: ~B~

its kinda funny cos i'm voting in a battle between two of my former families....

this was a decent battle. i thought that B came harder than one mic in this one though.

one mic lemme hit you wid some feedback on your rhyme:

the first bar was real weak man and you should have at least made it rhyme cos we all know that posts and hoax don't rhyme mayn!!!
"prove it by spitting rampant bars" = weak as hell opener for real. and you shoulda tried harder with that personal about her avy.
after this point in your verse you fell off completely talkin some random shit like the line about leavin rap and goin into porn,

no hate.....just elevate

Right now B

you had much better personals, you really did your research before you dropped your verse against him.
so that allowed you to come harder at him with the james bond personals and things like that.
the line about him being like a virgin scare to get fucked was hilarious for real i was feelin that,
the setup line about one mic belongin in a kitchen was weak but i know you know that cos you came back especially hard with the punchline about him being a cock and a chicken (another funny line might i add)
you had the most original and humourous verse so my vote has to go to B

yo B hit up my battle against Abash cos i need to get that shit over and done with already

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thanx 4 the vote man, i'm gon check that battle out rite now!

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Voted For: ~B~

U aint 'james bond' you're more like 'pussy galore'*
cuz 007 gets ho's but ur just about to get whored!
- Meh Weak Punch. But its a Punch, but its weak

After I giv u another 'L', ur confidence will be stirred,
unlike 007's martini, u gon be 'shaken & scared!'
- Could've word it better, but weak Punch.

u had 16 battles and only managed 2 win '6'**
changed ur name 2 'one mic' but u still suck dick!
-I like this bar good personal and a punch.

ur an exagerated spermcell,i bet ur parents regret havin sex
ur a disapointment, thats y ur birth certificate is..........
.............................................an apology card from durex!***
- Decent Punch.

Called u out a million times b4 but u always ducked****
must be a virgin they way u were scared 2 get (lyrically) fucked!
-Meh Good Punch.

one mic such a 'herb' that he belongs in a kitchen!
u havta be transgendered cuz ur a cock and a chicken!*****
- Meh...Weak Punch.

I'm above u, u cant touch this, ur a lyrical midget
If i personify skill with a girl then u'd be a fridget!******
-1st Line Played out making the 2nd line (Punchline) More weak...Ok closure

Overall- This was an balance on and off verse here. You started off with Weak Punches then ending up Having decent Punches...Then you started to go down again. It was an ok verse, I just elevate on wording your Lines more better. You explaing your Lines after you posted your verse is a herb move. Next Time make your Lines More Complex..Chea.


you joined several months after me, and you got double my posts
but you still no challenge to me at all, this battle must be a hoax
- Weak Punch

think you got skillz???, prove it by spittin rampant bars
but you cant, so imma flip this hoe like the guy in her avatar
- Weak Punch with a personal.

im too hot for you, why did sixth sense send me to battle you??
imma switch dre's quote, "you know what (~B~), i dont like your attitude"
- Ha Good Concept but weak Punch.

quit rap, go into the porn industry, and focus on sex*
cuz people are only gonna respect you if they know that you're blessed
-Meh 1st Line was Ok..But 2nd Line was weak...bleh.


bitch, you nutin to me, all your writtens are weak
you the "First Lady Of illness", what literally???
- Meh Word it a bit better. Weak Punch.


for your first battle it was a bad choice to start wit me
this hoes all outta control and twitchy like she got parkinsons disease
- Alright You got a Punch...Finally Ok closure.

Overall- This verse here was a Weak One. You had weak Punches then at the closure you had something good. Meh Elevate on better Punches, and wording it Much better.


Conclusion- My vote goes to B. B had some Punches (Effective) But it was Weak though. But B had 2 bars better than One Mic whole verse..One Mic your Punches were weak Period. You need to elevate on wording and making your Punches more effective. It was so basic...So my vote goes to "B"