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Indeph vs Bonecollector
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10-12 lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting U.E vs T.C Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 07-30-05 at 07:41 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
Indeph has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-27-05 09:10 PM.
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BoneCollector has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-28-05 02:32 PM.
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you fake..ya gangs a phase you be changin ya flags... to match your pussy'less dick,everyday when you sag. it changes as much as your name does,you was makin it HAV.. Correction bone collector is the name of his ass. ya name is the past....BC's rap give me a migrane. you a fuckin clone for weeks you was runnin with my name. and you got the nerve to pretend that you got any brains. when your span of attention pays what poverty makes . I'm no blood,but in areas everywhere its B up... you Get beat up by symbol... and cripples can barely C up.. UE... can't see us,TC killin..go and get you a grade.. cause undestructable is somethin' tommy pickles would say. he's a crip...His name used to be HAVoc for like a day... BC is a headache powder and BC is always a time state before christ. and you have a blue dick when you don't get pussy.BE smart niggas |
You want mercy from bone, that shit will never happen....even if you where to beg............
Cuz BC quick to break his limbs and "Ind/End Knees" Like "blowin' out major joints in your leg" Bone is endin' his saga,......nothin' will stop my rage,not even johovah ....or even allah Cuz I wouldnt feel the "full strength of *LA*" If I was "caught in shoot outs In major cities of california".. .........................Im trickin' you, making indeph think he can compete with me, ill end this faker.... Provin' I can out skill and out smart this fag,and really "Con-Verse" like "retro basketball players"*... I end lifes quick, your easy bitch,i've face much harder opponets then this kid...You'll be hidin' behind shutters... No one feels your rhymes,So i'll disect your body and have you really "Indeph/Depth",when your "6 Feet Under"... Im fast with raps...everyone could blast your crap.....so after this ill pop my collah...... Cuz when people dress with "Dull Colors" is the only time we "Feelin BLA(Blah)*" Putta slug thru' ya dome,make' ya swallow ya brain cellz till'ya really 'In Depth'.. Then watch me....... Snatch money out'cha Dentalz like ......'Chin-Checks..!!' ---------- *Old name B.L.A *Con- Meaning Trick Or w/e..Trick VERSE(His Alias Proverse)And CON-VERSE is a retro basketball brand *Blah- Boring- Dull |
Voted For: BoneCollector
ma vote goes to BoneColletor, cuz his punches hit harder,and his flow seemed betta then indeph's,also he had betta wordplay,and used some good multis Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: BoneCollector
You want mercy from bone, that shit will never happen....even if you where to beg............ Cuz BC quick to break his limbs and "Ind/End Knees" Like "blowin' out major joints in your leg" ^^^OK.......... Bone is endin' his saga,......nothin' will stop my rage,not even johovah ....or even allah Cuz I wouldnt feel the "full strength of *LA*" If I was "caught in shoot outs In major cities of california".. ^^didn't rhyme to well...and punch lacked .........................Im trickin' you, making indeph think he can compete with me, ill end this faker.... Provin' I can out skill and out smart this fag,and really "Con-Verse" like "retro basketball players"*... ^^flowed bad.....punch lacked again I end lifes quick, your easy bitch,i've face much harder opponets then this kid...You'll be hidin' behind shutters... No one feels your rhymes,So i'll disect your body and have you really "Indeph/Depth",when your "6 Feet Under"... ^^Good............ Im fast with raps...everyone could blast your crap.....so after this ill pop my collah...... Cuz when people dress with "Dull Colors" is the only time we "Feelin BLA(Blah)*" ^^didn't flow well....OK punch Putta slug thru' ya dome,make' ya swallow ya brain cellz till'ya really 'In Depth'.. Then watch me....... Snatch money out'cha Dentalz like ......'Chin-Checks..!!' ^^OK........... You structure reminds me of OMB's.But one thing...is you didn't have the multis as he would.A lot of your lines didn't rhyme well with the others.Had some nice punches like the personals and such.But be more consitent and make ur shit rhyme better. you fake..ya gangs a phase you be changin ya flags... to match your pussy'less dick,everyday when you sag. ^^flowed nice....but punch lacked it changes as much as your name does,you was makin it HAV.. Correction bone collector is the name of his ass. ^^Lmao....funny....... ya name is the past....BC's rap give me a migrane. you a fuckin clone for weeks you was runnin with my name. ^^^Did he really use ya name?If so...dope line and you got the nerve to pretend that you got any brains. when your span of attention pays like poverty . ^^didn't rhyme dawg...... I'm no blood,but in areas everywhere its B up... you Get beat up by symbol... and cripples can barely Cup.. ^^^Nah........... UE... can't see us,TC killin..go and get you a grade.. cause undestructable is somethin' tommy pickles would say. ^^^weak Better flow in your shit.Although you had one line that didn't rhyme.You really lacked heavy hittin personals and wordplay/metas.I didn't like your verse.Just seemed boring.Close battle here Vote-Bone Collector http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=202024 |
Voted For: Indeph
ok...Indeph jsut had harder punches man, Bone u came really weak ur flow/structure was all strectched out and ur punches jsut werent that hard dude..Indeph u had some good shit that made me laugh while Bone jsut had...well shit lol..but pretty good battle keep writing-PEACE Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
This was feedback posted for Indeph
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Voted For: BoneCollector
it changes as much as your name does,you was makin it HAV.. Correction bone collector is the name of his ass. vs You want mercy from bone, that shit will never happen....even if you where to beg............ Cuz BC quick to break his limbs and "Ind/End Knees" Like "blowin' out major joints in your leg" Putta slug thru' ya dome,make' ya swallow ya brain cellz till'ya really 'In Depth'.. Then watch me....... Snatch money out'cha Dentalz like ......'Chin-Checks..!!' This battle was hella weak... i was exspecting alot more out this battle punches were shit...wordplay was eh i gave it 2 bone..4 atleast havein a lil more wordplay but ya structure was fucked..and hella stretched ya gone have 2 up ya game Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
This was feedback posted for Indeph
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Voted For: BoneCollector
Aii Explanation Indeph You had a generally Overall Good verse but you did lack some things like origional meta's and Good wordplay i mean dont get me wrong ya verse was good I mean your dropped a Aii verse ........But You didnt come over in this battle you basically didnt come hard enough....I mean its like you tried to depend all on your personals instead of droppin better consistant punchez .............. so I Think that you should try to work on that in the future ..... Sorry but you dont get my vote in this battle Bone Aii man Yo Verse Was Basically A Better verse you came with some nice punchez very original concept and yo wordplay was very terrific i think that your wordplay is what helps you realy take this battle lol very crazy sounding isnt it?.....Yeah man and your personals were decent everybody finds personals you shouldve dropped a Meta on the personals and it wouldve beeen doper but yet you still take this battle withease man I gott make this short Bcuz Its thunder and Lightining so I g2 make this short .......Peace my vote Goes to Bone Please RTF in my Battle ASAP!!! |
Thankz for the votes ya'll upping for one more vote
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DAMN THIS SHO IS A BEAT DOWN FOR INDEPH :p..........
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This was feedback posted for Indeph
nice ass battle dephy............:
Correction bone collector is the name of his ass. L MFAO AT THAT!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
it obviously aint work tho...this is why i stopped texting...
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Voted For: Indeph
You hav a dope verse dropped there.... you fake..ya gangs a phase you be changin ya flags... to match your pussy'less dick,everyday when you sag. 7/10 good opening it changes as much as your name does,you was makin it HAV.. Correction bone collector is the name of his ass. 6/10...i wasnt quite feelin the punch ya name is the past....BC's rap give me a migrane. you a fuckin clone for weeks you was runnin with my name. 8/10..nice punch and you got the nerve to pretend that you got any brains. when your span of attention pays what poverty makes . 7/10...good punch I'm no blood,but in areas everywhere its B up... you Get beat up by symbol... and cripples can barely C up.. 9/10...Alright punch UE... can't see us,TC killin..go and get you a grade.. cause undestructable is somethin' tommy pickles would say LOL....9/10....nice closure U had preety nice vocab work goin on with aslo some nice punches...opening and closure was preety aiight... Vote:indeph Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: BoneCollector
A'ight...sort of a week battle... Bone...decent punches, nice personals...came pretty hard here...good flow, structure needs some work...Nice wordplay...good verse... Indeph...this was pretty weak...decent punches but nothin spectacular...Structure was a'ight...flow was good...wordplay was decent....but overall you didn't come as hard as Bone Collector in this one... No hate. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
This was feedback posted for Indeph
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Voted For: BoneCollector
BoneCollector: You want mercy from bone, that shit will never happen....even if you where to beg............ Cuz BC quick to break his limbs and "Ind/End Knees" Like "blowin' out major joints in your leg" ^^decent opener, good punches. 7/10 Bone is endin' his saga,......nothin' will stop my rage,not even johovah ....or even allah Cuz I wouldnt feel the "full strength of *LA*" If I was "caught in shoot outs In major cities of california".. ^^set up was wack, punch was ok 5/10 .........................Im trickin' you, making indeph think he can compete with me, ill end this faker.... Provin' I can out skill and out smart this fag,and really "Con-Verse" like "retro basketball players"*... ^^decent personal. Ok set up 6/10 I end lifes quick, your easy bitch,i've face much harder opponets then this kid...You'll be hidin' behind shutters... No one feels your rhymes,So i'll disect your body and have you really "Indeph/Depth",when your "6 Feet Under"... ^^good nameplay, good punches. 8/10 Im fast with raps...everyone could blast your crap.....so after this ill pop my collah...... Cuz when people dress with "Dull Colors" is the only time we "Feelin BLA(Blah)*" ^^another good personal. OK Bar. 7/10 Putta slug thru' ya dome,make' ya swallow ya brain cellz till'ya really 'In Depth'.. Then watch me....... Snatch money out'cha Dentalz like ......'Chin-Checks..!!' ^^decent closer, could have been better 5/10 Overall: 38/60 (63%) Indeph: you fake..ya gangs a phase you be changin ya flags... to match your pussy'less dick,everyday when you sag. ^^dope opener good personal 8/10 it changes as much as your name does,you was makin it HAV.. Correction bone collector is the name of his ass. ^^funny bar 7/10 ya name is the past....BC's rap give me a migrane. you a fuckin clone for weeks you was runnin with my name. ^^ehh ok 5/10 and you got the nerve to pretend that you got any brains. when your span of attention pays what poverty makes . ^^not feeling it much 5/10 I'm no blood,but in areas everywhere its B up... you Get beat up by symbol... and cripples can barely C up.. ^^decent bar 5/10 UE... can't see us,TC killin..go and get you a grade.. cause undestructable is somethin' tommy pickles would say. ^^lol dope closer, good bar 8/10 Overall: 38/60 (63%) Well its a tie by that way of voting, so ill continue. Personals: BC Punches: Tie Structure: In Flow: In Meta's: BC Multies: Tie Enjoyed More: BC I gotta say BC edged this one out and probably because his personals were a bit more effective than indephs. But really close battle, could go either way. Please return the favor with an honest vote on a battle in my sig or this vote will get removed. I have to go with BC |
Voted For: BoneCollector
you fake..ya gangs a phase you be changin ya flags... to match your pussy'less dick,everyday when you sag. AIGHT.... it changes as much as your name does,you was makin it HAV.. Correction bone collector is the name of his ass. NOT FEELIN THAT..... ya name is the past....BC's rap give me a migrane. you a fuckin clone for weeks you was runnin with my name. NICEEEE... and you got the nerve to pretend that you got any brains. when your span of attention pays what poverty makes . NAH.... I'm no blood,but in areas everywhere its B up... you Get beat up by symbol... and cripples can barely C up.. GOOD... UE... can't see us,TC killin..go and get you a grade.. cause undestructable is somethin' tommy pickles would say. LOL NICEEE FINSHER 7.5/10 A LOT OF NICE PUNCHES BUT STILL A LOT OF JUST AIGHT PUNCHES!!!! VS You want mercy from bone, that shit will never happen....even if you where to beg............ Cuz BC quick to break his limbs and "Ind/End Knees" Like "blowin' out major joints in your leg" GOOD Bone is endin' his saga,......nothin' will stop my rage,not even johovah ....or even allah Cuz I wouldnt feel the "full strength of *LA*" If I was "caught in shoot outs In major cities of california".. NICCCEEEE .........................Im trickin' you, making indeph think he can compete with me, ill end this faker.... Provin' I can out skill and out smart this fag,and really "Con-Verse" like "retro basketball players"*... AIGHT... I end lifes quick, your easy bitch,i've face much harder opponets then this kid...You'll be hidin' behind shutters... No one feels your rhymes,So i'll disect your body and have you really "Indeph/Depth",when your "6 Feet Under"... DOPE... Im fast with raps...everyone could blast your crap.....so after this ill pop my collah...... Cuz when people dress with "Dull Colors" is the only time we "Feelin BLA(Blah)*" TITE DAWG.... Putta slug thru' ya dome,make' ya swallow ya brain cellz till'ya really 'In Depth'.. Then watch me....... Snatch money out'cha Dentalz like ......'Chin-Checks..!!' FUCK TITE FINSHER!!!! 8.5/10 LOADZ OF REALLY DOPE AND TITE PUNHCES!!!!NICE VERSE V/BONECOLLECTOR FOR HAVIN ALOT MORE BETTER PUNCHES AND PERSONALS IN HIS VERSE!!!! |
Voted For: BoneCollector
return the favor honestly here http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=201879 aight nice drop guys bc got this one because his punches where hard and he had numerous personals in there indeph u had personals and punches but they need to be harder and connect better nice drop return the favor here http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=201879 |
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