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this is a freestyle...totally off the head....and its my first..so dont be harsh..lol... :laugh:

Like Common, Im "Something To Be"
Im so Gangster, Pussy Chicks Dont Wana "Fuck" With me
If Ur A "Star", Then Im a Galaxy
Ill End Ur Life, And U Know I Mean This
Ur Boi Got More "Shells" than Addidas
Hating One Me and Trying To Be Me Is A Lose-Lose Situation
Ur Not Who U Say U R, Ur Like Eminem In His Videos, Impersonating
U Play Video Games, Thats The Only Way u Know Bout "Action"
U And Ur Girl Communicate, So U only Know Bout One Thing Im "Packing"
Me And Rap Go Together Like Butter And Toast, Birds Of The Same Feather
U and Getting Fried Go Together, Cuz U cant Have One Without The Other

Post feedback on wat u think...no hating plz :nono: ......

ayo man for ur first post homie its aight man just need more meta's and vocab homie!!!!!!!RTF ON MY SHIT IT ON MY SIG!!!!!!!!!!holla at reality check man drop RAW/WAR!!!

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uppin this man for realz homie holla at the man!!!!!!!damn!!!!!!!!!maybe u should carry it on ur sig to the OM thread and let em know

whateva man u missed out on a GOOD deal wit a GOOD crew so your lost

man come on dont hate man and just leave an honest feed and stop trippin on a nigga!!!!!!!!

w/e...if u aint leavin feed...then dont post.....

yea u guys took so damn long on him so ur lost man.................

yo we told the ddue to drop a link so we can see what he bout dont let sorry cats in and why would i hate on him he shit to hate on and opt1k stop d/r u do that wit errbody dont u

man whatever...................go back to ur war forum and start snitchin like a bitch hahaha.....................ROFLMFAO!^^^

who would i snitch on and for what if u gonna talk shit try to make sense aight

man u always run to RAW/WAR sayin like ayo man this guy and shit like man shut up and stop postin man..................................uppin this drop!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!just drop it man cuz beefin really is gettin borina dn stupid ....................................hahahahahaLOL

fuck i didnt have to tell raw when i murked yo ass in our battle even thoughits still open we see who winning and how many votes u got. and i did that shit alone so what u got to say dawg. u only in reality check cause they felt simpathy for your ass your own crew members came in our battle a didnt drop any good feedback on your ass they just like i cant vote on this battle cause he in my crew. hahaha lil bitch get you weight up not your hate up (or better yet get a win on your record then talk shit)


http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=200482
^^^heres the link erbody can check it out u aint gotta vote if u dont want to but see who killed who

hahahahahaha................look at this fool beefin over the net man DAMN u that deperate to be known man this the net u aint gon get no record deal here man so fuck u homie and for the record im a topical head ya stupid bitch...........hahaha..........RAW praisin ya ass just cuz u 7-0 goes to show they aint doin good man whateva i aint got time for this stupid shit i gotta go work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

wtf!...when did this turn into a beef thread.....

hahaha...........yea i see dawg hahaha...............uppin this drop people if u gon beef dont post if u gon hate dont post!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ha u turned topical afta u battled me bitch and unrestricted ima stop the beef in here cuz i already killed this cat so no nedd to do hear him talk cause he ova and opt1k dont hate cause u u aint got one win and i got 7 im outta here

peace

okay....honest feed....you definately need some work.....structure first....make sure every lines near enough the same length....helps the flow....work on your vocab....try coming more complex wit it......i'd like to see a drop from you that isn't a freestyle then i could give you more feed.........

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yea we workin wit him on reality check homie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!yewa thanks for the feed for him

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