Macreep vs MaRVJay1009
 

Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
NO bullshit

Good Luck Marv :thumbup:

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 07-28-05 at 08:36 PM

Must drop verse in 120 minutes after check in.


Closed - Expired / old battle win

MaRVJay1009 has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-28-05 02:45 PM.

rite now he sittin at his dell with a pen pad,dogg u been a fag.
macreep's alias?.......ya'll know da kid K-TRiNi from da trinidad.
.....got banned 4 cheatin he 1 of dem loser's dat peeps know.
got aol girl so he 'blow kisses 2 da net' like 'j kidd shootin a free throw'.
you type da talk a load of shit get a swollen lip then go tell.
dont drop a cd cuzz ya shit a be like a "broken ship" it "wont sale".
i break all rules...im battlin macreep so trust me i aint gon lose.
u neva travel'd only "DC u were in" was "skateboard shoe's".
i aint suggestion u start shit...cuzz dat wesson a spark quick.
ma creep u like da "houston nfl team" cuzz ya "textin is garbage".

*last line...textin/texan....think about it

dont get shit dont waste ya time

Macreep has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-28-05 03:11 PM.

vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote vote

yo mrav................up this shit too you lazy muther fuvker,.................

watch ya mouth my dude.....da battle just went up calm ya ass down

wait when did stanza ko me??? vebral shoota beat me 1-0 fukk is talkin lol

watch my mouth?.....fuck you son...with ya pre-written verse,

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now i see why nobody like's u fam..n why would i pre write 4 a kid who had more losses than wins

^^^^I'm playing around Marv....it's a battle....ease up.

And the reason I think ya pre-wrote...only one personal and it was uncreative as fuck.Plus you PM'd me for this battle.Once I set it up...you immediately accepted and posted ya verse in like 20 minutes.It is possible to key a verse or sumtin in 20 minutes.But your shit was not keyed.You pre-wrote and you knew it.

This was feedback posted for Macreep
 

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This was feedback posted for Macreep
 

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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

MarJay always leapin round for green like he's a unwealty frog
&40 wins eh?, but Marv can't name one vet ,like healty dogs

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....got banned 4 cheatin he 1 of dem loser's dat peeps know.
got aol girl so he 'blow kisses 2 da net' like 'j kidd shootin a free throw'.
you type da talk a load of shit get a swollen lip then go tell.
dont drop a cd cuzz ya shit a be like a "broken ship" it "wont sale".
i break all rules...im battlin macreep so trust me i aint gon lose.

Not one of ya Best Marv..But Decent..enough 2 get the win

Consistent Punches and Wordplay as Alwayz
Ok structure..Kinda Basick @ times

Creep...Ya structure was horrible here Kid..
No real Punches..Jus Statements..no Wordplay
and U only had 1 Personal and that was ya Closer
which could have been worded better

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uppin............................................. ....damn.....you must suck MAvr....way this shit getin slept on.

uppin my duck in the people who don't vote mother.

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This was feedback posted for MaRVJay1009
 

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god damn this battle gettin slept on.....I blame you MArv!!

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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

Flow - marv, was structured better, it was presented well

Punches -marve, some were played by both cats, but i felt that marve had more

Multies - Obviously Marv, by his type of rhyme scheme, his rhyme scheme almost always guarantees him flow and multies. If your a newb take a close look and you'll see.

Originality - Even, some of lines by both of you were played, but overall alright verses


nice battle


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^^god damn....another unexplained and check it.....

he copied and pasted that shit from the voting sticky in front lines.

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damm shit been up 4 a week still got no votes

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

MaRVJay1009:

rite now he sittin at his dell with a pen pad,dogg u been a fag.
macreep's alias?.......ya'll know da kid K-TRiNi from da trinidad.
^^ok personal played though 5/10
.....got banned 4 cheatin he 1 of dem loser's dat peeps know.
got aol girl so he 'blow kisses 2 da net' like 'j kidd shootin a free throw'.
^^good meta 6/10
you type da talk a load of shit get a swollen lip then go tell.
dont drop a cd cuzz ya shit a be like a "broken ship" it "wont sale".
^^good meta good punch 7/10
i break all rules...im battlin macreep so trust me i aint gon lose.
u neva travel'd only "DC u were in" was "skateboard shoe's".
^^oo that was fire 9/10
i aint suggestion u start shit...cuzz dat wesson a spark quick.
ma creep u like da "houston nfl team" cuzz ya "textin is garbage".
^^dope meta and dop closer 9/10

Overall: 36/50 (72%)


Macreep:

Marv's no vet,he's a angry diva,hating on all the crews and Socrates
&he know he don't live in "Queens",it just a Queen is wat he wanna be
^^dope personal good punch 7/10
This prima donna probably gonna hate on me just for for spittin some bliss
I mean,c'mon,be logic,wat real MC writes his "pRoFIle wItH tHis"
^^lol good bar 7/10
He loses and takes it more sore than Jenna Jameson's clit
Cause Sheif raped him,so this fag decides to make an OM about it
^^decent personal wasnt feeling it much 4/10
MarJay always leapin round for green like he's a unwealty frog
&40 wins eh?, but Marv can't name one vet ,like healty dogs
^^decent meta 5/10
This fag also made OM on LL ,just cause no one want him in the crew
And he tryna hate on RAW,but wait,stanza and Teph KO'd him too
^^decent closer nice personal 7/10

Overall: 30/50 (60%)


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uppin my dick in the people who don't vote........

lol^^^ fam it was a honest and explained vote

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