BoneCollector vs Spoken Word
 

Battle Rules:

10-12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Hate Votes
No D/R Votes



Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-28-05 at 04:04 PM

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Spoken Word has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-28-05 03:47 PM.

Aiight...Check It....


I'll smack this geek, His only two talents are whack and weak
Lighting a suitcase on fire is the only time youre packing heat
So if youre smart, You'll beat it, Edit your verse and delete it
Youre probably reading that, Nodding ya head and agreeing
Im gonna dig up your grave, So i can easily collect your bones
And leave ya with no chance to talk, Like disconnected phones
Stop lickin the cock dude, You think youre tight, But I'll rock you
Cause your just a bitch underneath, Like a chick in a costume
So first Im'a target your torso, With at least a hundred hits
Denmark ya face, Cuz you dont know what Europe against
Shit bone, My skills are killer, And im making you fear that
By punching you in the forehead and makin your ears clap


Upping for you...

BoneCollector has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-28-05 03:54 PM.

Voted For: BoneCollector

urs was better cuz it floed better and had some aight lyrics..more lulties..wasted that newbie

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Voted For: Spoken Word

They was both good but I have to make this a win to Spoken.

I'll smack this geek, His only two talents are whack and weak
Lighting a suitcase on fire is the only time youre packing heat
^^^ i like that opener...then....

So if youre smart, You'll beat it, Edit your verse and delete it
That was another good one to follow up the opener

I didn't really like the final two lines but the top to middle was good.

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Voted For: BoneCollector

This was a pretty weak battle but to me Bone came better..he had some funny punchlines..some nice personals...and some okay meta's ..and multies.. As for spoken you also had some nice punchlines but they werent hitten as hard as bones..and you really didnt have many personals that were hitten very hard..you had a decent verse ..but i feel that Bc came alittle better..and took this battle by alittle

Overall vote: BoneCollector
No hate

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Voted For: BoneCollector

You a Livin Legend.. But bitch you aint got one win under your belt?
Ill put my nut sack in ya hand.....and my flow still couldnt be felt...!
^^^whack and set-ip terribly
I go spoken ..'ina state of mind'..that he doesnt know what to do..
Cus when you set up this battle without me known'n..i said who are you?
^^^OK...............
New to rv..and you think you can take on one of the oldest vets..
Cus ill put shots in ya dawg..and i aint talking about ya household pets..
^^^OK.............
So now think hard was this really a good idea for me to battle Bc..
Cus this nucca's gon give you alose..and watch All of Rv agree..
^^^^You a lil basic......
That your just another wack emcee...tryin to get fame by battling me..
So go home and plee..or god please..dont let me lose!..I'll go down to 1 knee..
^^^^NO.,............
And you call yourself a rap veteran..when you aint gon win this?
I can half assed...and Spoken words who?I dont think he exist..!
^^^same concept as the line earlier

You set-up your punches terribly.Where are your clever wordplay and metas?You had 2 lines based on the same concept on nobody knowing him.Whack.Very boring verse too.AT the end you say it's some weak shit.Well if it's weak don't glorify yourself.

I'll smack this geek, His only two talents are whack and weak
Lighting a suitcase on fire is the only time youre packing heat
^^^Played...........
So if youre smart, You'll beat it, Edit your verse and delete it
Youre probably reading that, Nodding ya head and agreeing
^^^Punch???where is it...........
Im gonna dig up your grave, So i can easily collect your bones
And leave ya with no chance to talk, Like disconnected phones
^^played
Stop lickin the cock dude, You think youre tight, But I'll rock you
Cause your just a bitch underneath, Like a chick in a costume
^^1st line elementary....2nd line was good
So first Im'a target your torso, With at least a hundred hits
Denmark ya face, Cuz you dont know what Europe against
^^^Punch!!!!....WHERE?!?!?!?
Shit bone, My skills are killer, And im making you fear that
By punching you in the forehead and makin your ears clap
^^^PUNCH!!!WHERE?!?!?!?

OMG.This battle sucked so damn bad.Your problem was not having any good punches.Ur shit was either played,not a punch,or just flat out bullshit.SO lemme see.
Bone Collector's selfglorifing/basic/boring ass verse
vs
Your played/bars with no punches/weak verse'

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This was feedback posted for Spoken Word
 

You got this yo. Checking polls...................

This was feedback posted for BoneCollector
 

yup u won...............................................

See what i dont understand about RV is how can these people vote like this. The first 2 should get deleted, those werent votes, probably didnt even read the verses, cuz i know mine flowed better and BC knows mine does too.


And then my denmark europe line was creative, but i guess RV is all about nonsense lines and idiots who cant understand a line if its not wrote to their satisfaction.

Voted For: Spoken Word

wow... Bone u came really weak...sex and guns are used so much its really irrelevent dude, and saying he dont exist twice is a lil boring too. Spoken u had some funny punches that hit hard good stuff but v/Spoken for harder punches and a better flow in my opinion

Voted For: BoneCollector

i think bonecolletor had betta punches
both flows were good
bone had betta wordplay
and also bones structure was better

so ma vote go to BoneCollector

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Voted For: BoneCollector

You a Livin Legend.. But bitch you aint got one win under your belt?
Ill put my nut sack in ya hand.....and my flow still couldnt be felt...!
aight opener 5/10
I go spoken ..'ina state of mind'..that he doesnt know what to do..
Cus when you set up this battle without me known'n..i said who are you?
...lol....nice 6/10
New to rv..and you think you can take on one of the oldest vets..
Cus ill put shots in ya dawg..and i aint talking about ya household pets..
....lol punch is good 8/10
So now think hard was this really a good idea for me to battle Bc..
Cus this nucca's gon give you alose..and watch All of Rv agree..
....lol...nice 8/10
That your just another wack emcee...tryin to get fame by battling me..
So go home and plee..or god please..dont let me lose!..I'll go down to 1 knee..
...lol...aight 6/10
And you call yourself a rap veteran..when you aint gon win this?
I can half assed...and Spoken words who?I dont think he exist..!
aight closer 6/10
39/60

vs.

I'll smack this geek, His only two talents are whack and weak
Lighting a suitcase on fire is the only time youre packing heat
....lol good opener 6/10
So if youre smart, You'll beat it, Edit your verse and delete it
Youre probably reading that, Nodding ya head and agreeing
aight 4/10
Im gonna dig up your grave, So i can easily collect your bones
And leave ya with no chance to talk, Like disconnected phones
...lol....nice 8/10
Stop lickin the cock dude, You think youre tight, But I'll rock you
Cause your just a bitch underneath, Like a chick in a costume
ohhhh nice 8/10
So first Im'a target your torso, With at least a hundred hits
Denmark ya face, Cuz you dont know what Europe against
nice again 6/10
Shit bone, My skills are killer, And im making you fear that
By punching you in the forehead and makin your ears clap
...lol good closer 6/10
38/60

DAmn it was kinda of a tie but i think B.C. gots this even though it was almost a tie im gon give it to B.C. on this sorry no offense though yall both dropped good even though B.C. didnt even come as hard......but im gon give my v/ to B.C. jus for the harder punches.....
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RTF WIT A HONEST VOTE IN MY BATTLES PLZ....OR VOTE GETS REMOVED.....THNX U VERY MUCH IN ADVANCE

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upping this battle for some votes, i will return the favor

This was feedback posted for Spoken Word
 

Good shits from both.

Both came hard...gonna be close imo.

This was feedback posted for Spoken Word
 

http://forums.b-boys.com/vbforum/sh...ad.php?t=205343
Click this URL. Then hold Ctrl and hit F, search for the word
clap
and you'll find a surprise :).

ssame concept, its a played bar, ive seen similar concepts for alot of bars i see on this board.

Whoo.. i think we have ourself here a bitter...

Voted For: BoneCollector

BC

You a Livin Legend.. But bitch you aint got one win under your belt?
Ill put my nut sack in ya hand.....and my flow still couldnt be felt...!

wooot woot. solid opener. Nice punch really set this up for a decent drop.. Nice imagery (no homo) eww

go spoken ..'ina state of mind'..that he doesnt know what to do..
Cus when you set up this battle without me known'n..i said who are you?
^
ok bar, bit of a filler...

New to rv..and you think you can take on one of the oldest vets..
Cus ill put shots in ya dawg..and i aint talking about ya household pets..
^^

haha nice, bit of wordplay in there. good punch

So now think hard was this really a good idea for me to battle Bc..
Cus this nucca's gon give you alose..and watch All of Rv agree..
^
ok bar, another some what filler. Still nice but should of dropped somthing more hard hitting here.


That your just another wack emcee...tryin to get fame by battling me..
So go home and plee..or god please..dont let me lose!..I'll go down to 1 knee..
^^
haha nice, I liked this felt it was hard hitting and brought the level of your drop back.

And you call yourself a rap veteran..when you aint gon win this?
I can half assed...and Spoken words who?I dont think he exist..!
^
ok closure, could of come alot stronger though


SW

I'll smack this geek, His only two talents are whack and weak
Lighting a suitcase on fire is the only time youre packing heat

^
nice opener.

So if youre smart, You'll beat it, Edit your verse and delete it
Youre probably reading that, Nodding ya head and agreeing
^
blah didnt rhyme, didnt even hit.

Im gonna dig up your grave, So i can easily collect your bones
And leave ya with no chance to talk, Like disconnected phones
^
reasonable punch. didnt feel the play on his name

Stop lickin the cock dude, You think youre tight, But I'll rock you
Cause your just a bitch underneath, Like a chick in a costume
^
blah weak

So first Im'a target your torso, With at least a hundred hits
Denmark ya face, Cuz you dont know what Europe against
^
wtf? umm NO

Shit bone, My skills are killer, And im making you fear that
By punching you in the forehead and makin your ears clap
^
blah no punch and a crucial point inthe battle.

Vote bonecollecter

Voted For: Spoken Word

>You a Livin Legend.. But bitch you aint got one win under your belt?
Ill put my nut sack in ya hand.....and my flow still couldnt be felt...!
wtf? not a punch 2/10
>I go spoken ..'ina state of mind'..that he doesnt know what to do..
Cus when you set up this battle without me known'n..i said who are you?
meh, worded blahh, and weak 4/10
>New to rv..and you think you can take on one of the oldest vets..
Cus ill put shots in ya dawg..and i aint talking about ya household pets..
you're an old vet, thats it....self glore 0/10
>So now think hard was this really a good idea for me to battle Bc..
Cus this nucca's gon give you alose..and watch All of Rv agree..
not a punch 0/10
>That your just another wack emcee...tryin to get fame by battling me..
So go home and plee..or god please..dont let me lose!..I'll go down to 1 knee..
not a punch 0/10
>And you call yourself a rap veteran..when you aint gon win this?
I can half assed...and Spoken words who?I dont think he exist..!
yes he does exist, and he never said he was rap veteran 0/10

overall: 6/10 sorry to be so harsh, but your verse really sucked, elevate.

>I'll smack this geek, His only two talents are whack and weak
Lighting a suitcase on fire is the only time youre packing heat
meh, alright 5/10
>So if youre smart, You'll beat it, Edit your verse and delete it
Youre probably reading that, Nodding ya head and agreeing
no, 1/10
>Im gonna dig up your grave, So i can easily collect your bones
And leave ya with no chance to talk, Like disconnected phones
played 2/10
>Stop lickin the cock dude, You think youre tight, But I'll rock you
Cause your just a bitch underneath, Like a chick in a costume
not bad 4/10
>So first Im'a target your torso, With at least a hundred hits
Denmark ya face, Cuz you dont know what Europe against
nice wordplay, best punch right here 9/10
>Shit bone, My skills are killer, And im making you fear that
By punching you in the forehead and makin your ears clap
meh, decent 5/10

overall: 25/60....word, one sided match right here, all the way, spoken actually had punches, bone's was just some random dribble, with self-glore, nothing, at all......so spoken easily gets this.

v/spoken word

This was feedback posted for Spoken Word
 

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Voted For: BoneCollector

Flow-Both
Metas-Bone
Vocab-Spoken
Multies-None
Punches-Bone
Structure-Both
Wordplay-Bone
Personals-Uhmmm
Creativity-None Really
Enjoyment-Bone
Complexity-Bone
Your Vote-Bone
Explanation- Punches win battles and Bone had more of those. He also had some nice metas and rhyming was on point. SPoken could have had some harder punches and he might have gotten my vote. Bome was a bit more complex with his internals.

This was feedback posted for Spoken Word
 

Alright.. This verse got a good a flow.. good punchlines..
I like how you use the "bones" out of his name too.. Good verse.. I didnt get to Bone's yet.. but im not complaining about yours..

Voted For: BoneCollector

decent disses from both corners on this one...

spoken had some good punches nd wordplay but nothing was hitting too hard.. they were good but nothin id throw at a vet..

BC had some good punches aswell and i felt he came a little harder and really touched on spoken on a more personal level .. also had some pretty good wordplay and it had a nice flow to it..

decent battle.. both came hard

but BC came just that much harder

my vote - BoneCollector

This was feedback posted for Spoken Word
 

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BC lets be honest. Your verse wasnt hot. The only reason that i only got 2 votes is because im unknown on this name. I guarantee if we do another battle same verses, ill win if i was on my flow intelligent name.


Thats the only thing i never liked about RV. The D/Ring because of 'vet' status.

BC lets be honest. Your verse wasnt hot. The only reason that i only got 2 votes is because im unknown on this name. I guarantee if we do another battle same verses, ill win if i was on my flow intelligent name.


Thats the only thing i never liked about RV. The D/Ring because of 'vet' status.

Maybe its me.. but i cant sit and put together either one of the verses in this battle.. the flow just isnt there. It looks like you thought of words, wrote a bunch of shit, and made the last word rhyme with no layout to ur rhythm.. I cant vote cuz im too new.. but im just givin some feedback to dwell on.

Voted For: Spoken Word

I think spoken word wins becuz his punches were hit harder, no hate towards u B.C. just stating my opinion both kinda boring......but im sure u can do better but for now.....v/spoken word

This was feedback posted for Spoken Word
 

Blah... just checking the votes... See if i need to remove any :thumbup:

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This was feedback posted for Spoken Word
 

yea nigga............................................. ..

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Voted For: BoneCollector

straight fire, first 4bars were really nice, better wordplay, better verse...