Chameleon vs New Meth0d
 

Battle Rules:

10-12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting



Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-31-05 at 11:06 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Chameleon has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-31-05 03:27 PM.

New Meth0d has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-31-05 08:15 PM.

This was feedback posted for New Meth0d
 

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Voted For: Chameleon


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FLOW-Chameleon all the way.He has a beautiful rhyme sheme consisting of mutlis.New method.....ditch that whole one syllable rhyme sheme.

PUNCHES-Chameleon....had some dope methaphors.Next time..try to add some multis and maybe some personals.New....you were just too basic..

"They call him chameleon cause he blends in w/ tha herbs"
I should change my name to 0,the way he's next to none"
^^c'mon....wat is this?This was newbish.

PERSONALS-This is one part that needs the most improvement by both of you.

MULTIS-Chameleon...new method had a basic rhyme sheme.

COMPLEXITY-Chameleon...i already explained in punches how basic New method was.

Vote-chameleon

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This was feedback posted for Chameleon
 

Damn good battle homie... Just checkin polls for fam

Voted For: Chameleon

Flow - Chameleon, was structured better, which made it flow better

Punches - chameleon, some were played by both cats, but i felt that chameleon had more

Multies - Obviously chmeleon, by his type of rhyme scheme, his rhyme scheme almost always guarantees him flow and multies. If your a newb take a close look and you'll see.

Vocab - Both were lacking on this, and need to elevate

Originality - Even, some of lines by both of you were played, but overall alright verses



but overall i think that my vote is to CHAMELEON

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lol @ blatant herb voting, and newbness...........

Wicked One
My words are chock full of scorching letters Method you think YOU'RE better??...
I'm STILL the King round this bitch and you're one of the Court Jesters...
Self glrofication, no punch.
Who the fuck said you were dope?? It's a vicious rumor...
Try and shoot me i dodge bullets like Wyatt Earp with six shooters...
I line. No punch.
I'm forever-great finished in a flurry words typed quick-in-a-hurry this is checkmate...
This is what happens when a legend faces a bum who's less than second rate...
Attempt at a punch finally. Self glorification again.
U wanna discuss posts. ho, urs are jokes writings worthless as if ur mind capacity was zero...
Ur mouths shape like an O cause u sip bottle tops n poke holes thru guys like cheerios...
Lotta meaningless multis that makes it hard to understand this line. It isn't complex, just stupid.
I'ma call u whistle the way u blowoff MC's ur skills are pitiful n simple...
U bit the big pickle, ur best efforts are compared to nursery rhyme riddles...
Bit a big pickle? Wtf is this?
Psssh.. and to think this wasn't even close to the best I could write...
It's bed time kid I just put you to sleep for the rest of ur life...
Self glorification and I did line again

How you are getting votes, I don't know. This is a horrible verse in my opinion. Meaningless multis, no real wordplay, maybe 2 or 3 punch attempts. You have nothing in this verse but self glorification.

New Method
you aint street now go back to the burbs
they call him chameleon cause he blends in w/ tha herbs
Ok punch. Not that original, but ok nameplay.
you can pray to god that you hope to win
shit you fallin off more than baggy jeans on an eithopian
Nah, not feeling this. Filler and blah punch.
i've never heard of you kid, so get off of my cock
so when i say nobodys perefect im really givin you props
Lol, I liked this punch, but first line is a filler
he aint drop knowledge, im jus makin him my son
i should change my name to 0 the way he's next to none
Eh...daddy line. Ok wordplay.
you schemin to win, theres no way man
dats walkin on thin ice an ima help you fall through w/ya plans
Ok wordplay. Nothing amazing though.
id prank call this bitch but cell phone sucks
but ima get you on the horn...of a fuckin elephant tusk
I will line.

Lotta fillers man you gotta work on that. Least you threw one or two punches that hit, work on using every line for a good set up or a good personal/punch.

That's some REAL feedback.

Voted For: Chameleon

New Meth0d

you aint street now go back to the burbs
they call him chameleon cause he blends in w/ tha herbs
^feelin last line, first one is filler

you can pray to god that you hope to win
shit you fallin off more than baggy jeans on an eithopian
^again feelin second one but not really first one

i've never heard of you kid, so get off of my cock
so when i say nobodys perefect im really givin you props
^haha lol @ the last line, made me laugh

he aint drop knowledge, im jus makin him my son
i should change my name to 0 the way he's next to none
^lolz coo wordplay

you schemin to win, theres no way man
dats walkin on thin ice an ima help you fall through w/ya plans
^decent bar right here

id prank call this bitch but cell phone sucks
but ima get you on the horn...of a fuckin elephant tusk
^lmao...rude one haha

Nice but could be more consistent with the punches, good creativity, vocab is coo, flow is aight and all, just a bit more consistent I suppose...

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Chameleon

My words are chock full of scorching letters Method you think YOU'RE better??...
I'm STILL the King round this bitch and you're one of the Court Jesters...
^uhm bit self-glorifiying but still turned into punch though so good

Who the fuck said you were dope?? It's a vicious rumor...
Try and shoot me i dodge bullets like Wyatt Earp with six shooters...
^coo wordplay, nice punch in first one

I'm forever-great finished in a flurry words typed quick-in-a-hurry this is checkmate...
This is what happens when a legend faces a bum who's less than second rate...
^haha second one made me laugh bro, nice wordings and ish, good bar

U wanna discuss posts. ho, urs are jokes writings worthless as if ur mind capacity was zero...
Ur mouths shape like an O cause u sip bottle tops n poke holes thru guys like cheerios...
^DAMNNNNN, killed him with this one, holy sh*it man...

I'ma call u whistle the way u blowoff MC's ur skills are pitiful n simple...
U bit the big pickle, ur best efforts are compared to nursery rhyme riddles
^hehe nice punch here too, u really pickin the pace up

Psssh.. and to think this wasn't even close to the best I could write...
It's bed time kid I just put you to sleep for the rest of ur life...
^no punch but good closer though

You really picked the pace up towards the second half of ya verse, nice punches especially that one bar, damn ya killed him with that one for real! Flow was dope, nice wordplay and ish, solid battle verse!

Omg...look at this shit...seriously...i dont care if i win or lose...Seriously...If i win then i win and give you your first lost..Dont bitch seriously...

lmao @ your buddy list having som many kids from RV on it

3 votes in 2 hours. Stop IMing.........seriously........

DONT ACCUSE MY CREW MEMBER OF AIMING CUS HE HASNT THIS IS FAIR VOTING ..Now let the voting continue

yea lets keep the herb votes coming...who you think you foolin bonecollecter you should know that ya boy lost. how bout this we get Soc the original KORV to vote and lets see who he votes for.....huh, how bout that the most skilled textcee on RV how bout his vote decides the battle....how bout it?

Dude, come on. How is it that this battle has 3 votes in less then 2 hours, and I have no votes on mine? Yours got closed in one day, when everyone on RV knows that battles don't close in one day.

No one even knows who Cham is!

This was feedback posted for New Meth0d
 

word.............. stretchness by Chameleon like whoa

No one knows Who i am....lol....Yo whatever...Iam not tryin to beef or nuthin cuz ive been here for a long time since May 04...and iam just a cool dude n all...But for real...If ya dont think i deserve to win then tell strobe...Because lets Say if Method Was up 3-0...I wouldnt bitch one bit...Because his was prolly better then mine...But Just let the readers vote how they see it...

They don't know you cuz you changed your name. If you were still Wicked One then they might, but people from July and June don't know you. If I felt your verse was better, I would drop it, but it isn't. I am serious too.

Stop the bitching plain simple..were NET battling

Ya but I'm bored and I have 2 hours to kill before I go anywhere. Cutting hair gets boring. I finished her ass and tits, I don't care bout her face. :(

why not accept my proposal? are afraid that vets will recognize skill...man real recognize real...and son you aint real

you dont deserve to win because my verse was better than your...thats the truth. i will do everything in my power to make sure that a crappy played stretched verse doesnt beat a witty, wordplay, nameplay, peronal and punch full verse.

i dont care if i have to dq every single one of your votes..i will make sure that the better verse wins.

lets get some vets to vote instead of these herbs

holy shit!?!?! que?????? how is chameleon winnin?? lol, w/e........ this shit is so gay

for real Chameleon......... wen i saw that this battle was 3-0 i was positive it was for NM so i didnt pay attention untill i saw NM talkin about newb votes and i looked up like "wah???"

^LOL...go for it Mr. 8-0...Holy shit...I dont care let Vets vote...and if i lose i wont bitch seriously its INTERNET RAP SITE....Seriously....

Voted For: New Meth0d

one sidedddd....

Flow - definately method...it wasnt very complex but every line i read was goin thru easy...chameleon was tryin to make his verse sound 2 difficult...jus wasnt connectin wit me 2 sound like a verse...feel me

Punches - definately method...those first 2 bars was better then most of cham's verse...cham's didnt really hit em hard...theres was alotta self glory in that verse but no strong attacks on method....most of it was kinda corny...like that cheerios... blahhh

Metaphors - method again...that ethiopian shyt was pretty funny...best bar in the battle...and it hit hard 2...cham really didnt have anything to compare to that

Multis - none...both verses kept switchin it up

Personals - blahhh...none that i saw that were actually effective

originality - lol slightly to method cuz that ethiopian shty was madddddd funny...other then that ur verse fell off....where did the cell phone come from ?? and an elephant tusk ??? lol....anyway...cham u were soundin like u were jus makin stuff rhyme jus to rhyme the words...nuttin was really effective

Vote - New Method



yall can return the favor on the battle in my sig....i wud apreciate that... 1

dammmmm... lololol i dont understand how chameleon is winnin this one lolol
but this is none of my business... no hate on none of yall but new method shud win this in my oppinion !

cham if u vote in my battle please dont hate....im jus sayin what i feel


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Voted For: New Meth0d

iight heres the break down of this here battle...

IP:


you aint street now go back to the burbs
they call him chameleon cause he blends in w/ tha herbs

had me laughin.. pretty good punch

you can pray to god that you hope to win
shit you fallin off more than baggy jeans on an eithopian

haha not to personal but did the trick

i've never heard of you kid, so get off of my cock
so when i say nobodys perefect im really givin you props

weaker then the rest but decent

he aint drop knowledge, im jus makin him my son
i should change my name to 0 the way he's next to none

im not gonna lie.. this one went over my head a lil

you schemin to win, theres no way man
dats walkin on thin ice an ima help you fall through w/ya
plans

good wordplay here

id prank call this bitch but cell phone sucks
but ima get you on the horn...of a fuckin elephant tusk

weak ending.. do you have an elephant??? NO

overall i give this verse an 8/10

chameleons verse was too forced.. the lines were too strectched out nd hard to find the punches... id give it a 6/10

my vote - New Method

^^^^^^^ ur sig messes with my eyes................

Voted For: New Meth0d

New Meth0d

you aint street now go back to the burbs
they call him chameleon cause he blends in w/ tha herbs
7. Lol. This was good.
you can pray to god that you hope to win
shit you fallin off more than baggy jeans on an eithopian
5. Seen the concept before. Still cool though.
i've never heard of you kid, so get off of my cock
so when i say nobodys perefect im really givin you props
6. Haha. Pretty good shit.
he aint drop knowledge, im jus makin him my son
i should change my name to 0 the way he's next to none
3. Nah..
you schemin to win, theres no way man
dats walkin on thin ice an ima help you fall through w/ya plans
4. Second line is stretched. Concept was decent.
id prank call this bitch but cell phone sucks
but ima get you on the horn...of a fuckin elephant tusk
5. Ehh.. Decent punch. Doesn't hit that hard though.

Overall - 30

Chameleon

My words are chock full of scorching letters Method you think YOU'RE better??...
I'm STILL the King round this bitch and you're one of the Court Jesters...
2. Concept is played.
Who the fuck said you were dope?? It's a vicious rumor...
Try and shoot me i dodge bullets like Wyatt Earp with six shooters...
0. Self glorifying is wack.
I'm forever-great finished in a flurry words typed quick-in-a-hurry this is checkmate...
This is what happens when a legend faces a bum who's less than second rate...
2. Worded horribly though.
U wanna discuss posts. ho, urs are jokes writings worthless as if ur mind capacity was zero...
Ur mouths shape like an O cause u sip bottle tops n poke holes thru guys like cheerios...
1. Wow @ how stretched this is. Cheerio/hole concepts are played too.
I'ma call u whistle the way u blowoff MC's ur skills are pitiful n simple...
U bit the big pickle, ur best efforts are compared to nursery rhyme riddles...
1. Played shit again.
Psssh.. and to think this wasn't even close to the best I could write...
It's bed time kid I just put you to sleep for the rest of ur life...
4. The first line of yours that was actually worded good.

Overall - 10

Vote - New Meth0d

This was feedback posted for New Meth0d
 

ayo new meth nice verse man..u killed him............

Voted For: Chameleon

Man Chameleons flowed together more, had harder punches, structured better and more enjoyable.
New Method had some decent punches in there but overall I would say Chameleon won this..

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werd upping.........................................

Yeah Uppin...Dont wanna get your first loss...........

i know you aimed for votes i have the convo proving it but im not gonna get you banned....it was cool how you aimed DQ, i have her admiting that you aimed her....but im a nice guy and gonna let it slide

Voted For: Chameleon

i pick u Chameleon cuzc your punches were better ur lines were kinda played method no hate though.......so v/chameleon....rtf by feedback on my o/m Masked Disguise

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Voted For: New Meth0d

ok Method jsut punches hella hard and creative but he did slip off towards the end a lil bit, Chameleon ur punches were sorta good but they need to be reworded and dont use punches like with cheerios cuz u need to be mean in a battle man. Method u need to fix ya structure, it works good but it dont look good, ya hear me? but yeah V/New Method for way better and funnier punches...please vote on the battles in my sig

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