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T.r.oo.p vs BoneCollector
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10-12 -Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 07-29-05 at 03:04 AM Must drop verse in 40 minutes after check in. |
T.r.oo.P has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-29-05 02:11 AM.
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BoneCollector has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-29-05 02:16 AM.
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Ill Warn You Now, You Aren't A Match For Me,...Remember I Told Ya...
Cuz Bone's Quick To Have Troop Down....Fast....Like A Fallen Soilda...! Im Popping Caps In Your Frame....Sone Im Just Proving Your In My Range. And I Stick To Punchin' "Threw Pocket" Like .. "Dealin With Loose Change". Im Walkin' On Your Fame,..Smf... Stompin You Down To Prove Your Lame.... My Shit Leaves "Jim/Gym Pounded" Like "Floors Of Agressive Bball Games". Your Interested In War............But Your Ownly Weapon Is A....Rusty Knife..!?* Yu Coming At Bone W/ That...Smf... Its Like Simply Saying .....Bone Kill Me Now I Have....."No Meaning In Life"..! Im Quick To Put "Lead In Pocket" Like A Nerd Would..No Matter The Occasion.. Cus It Proves To Me That Troop..Is Bad At Math Just Look At "His Equation"...!* You Rv's Problem Seems Either A Hacker Or A Virus..Cus No Way Its Ur Text Cuz Cus The Only Time..Troop'll Get 'Air Time'...Is If I Pump Helum Into Your Chess(t).. ----------------- *In his profile his item inventory is a rusty knife **The Equation in his sig is Me..Vs U ='s Deaf.. |
oK Rematch Arch Look Im Hitting u 2night........Like an Un Known Deflector You Gettin "Roughly Beatin" is Far From odd Seeing How your a Prone "Bone"Collector And you can Never Hold me Like a Piece of a Failed Knot His Old Names Angel So it Would be Fiction if RV Quoted u had a "Hell" of a Drop Ill Box your Nose Until its Runny..Like Overdone Smoothies But Bone Defeatin T..Is Unheard of. Kinda Like Stevy Wonder Complaining of Violence in Movies If u Released an Audio..11 Would b Garbage & 1 Wack Track If He Smacked a Chick That gave Him Ghonoria..Collector Still couldnt "Clap" Back And In the Law of Suck..Collector Probly be on Probation Ya Punches Are as Useless As Wheel Chaired Veterens... during an Standing Ovation |
Voted For: BoneCollector
close one but u get it for better flow...and some ok punchlines...he had u there....but really close one...both of ya elevatin Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
lol @ Not an Explained Vote...ima Let Bone Delete Ya Vote..
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Voted For: BoneCollector
Ill Warn You Now, You Aren't A Match For Me,...Remember I Told Ya... Cuz Bone's Quick To Have Troop Down....Fast....Like A Fallen Soilda...! NICCCEEEE Im Popping Caps In Your Frame....Sone Im Just Proving Your In My Range. And I Stick To Punchin' "Threw Pocket" Like .. "Dealin With Loose Change". GOOD Im Walkin' On Your Fame,..Smf... Stompin You Down To Prove Your Lame.... My Shit Leaves "Jim/Gym Pounded" Like "Floors Of Agressive Bball Games". OK Your Interested In War............But Your Ownly Weapon Is A....Rusty Knife..!?* Yu Coming At Bone W/ That...Smf... Its Like Simply Saying .....Bone Kill Me Now I Have....."No Meaning In Life"..! GOOD Im Quick To Put "Lead In Pocket" Like A Nerd Would..No Matter The Occasion.. Cus It Proves To Me That Troop..Is Bad At Math Just Look At "His Equation"...!* TITE You Rv's Problem Seems Either A Hacker Or A Virus..Cus No Way Its Ur Text Cuz Cus The Only Time..Troop'll Get 'Air Time'...Is If I Pump Helum Into Your Chess(t).. AIGHT FINSHER 8.5/10 A NICE VERSE SOME REAL TITE PUNCHES!!!! VS Im Hitting u 2night........Like an Un Known Deflector You Gettin "Roughly Beatin" is Far From odd Seeing How your a Prone "Bone"Collector AIGHT And you can Never Hold me Like a Piece of a Failed Knot His Old Names Angel So it Would be Fiction if RV Quoted u had a "Hell" of a Drop OK Ill Box your Nose Until its Runny..Like Overdone Smoothies But Bone Defeatin T..Is Unheard of. Kinda Like Stevy Wonder Complaining of Violence in Movies FUCKIN DOPE... If u Released an Audio..11 Would b Garbage & 1 Wack Track If He Smacked a Chick That gave Him Ghonoria..Collector Still couldnt "Clap" Back NICEEE And In the Law of Suck..Collector Probly be on Probation Ya Punches Are as Useless As Wheel Chaired Veterens... during an Standing Ovation AIGHT FINSHER 8/10 U HAD TO MANY JUST AIGHT PUNCHES STILL A NICEEE VERSE AND THE STEVIE WONDER LINE WAS A CLASSIC!!! V/BONECOLLETOR |
Voted For: BoneCollector
Bone collector-great structure,nice flow,good punches,and you had some good personals in their 8.5/10 fav line Your Interested In War............But Your Ownly Weapon Is A....Rusty Knife..!?* Yu Coming At Bone W/ That...Smf... Its Like Simply Saying .....Bone Kill Me Now I Have....."No Meaning In Life"..! Troop-bad structure,nice vocab,nice personals,and a good flow 8/10 fav line Ill Box your Nose Until its Runny..Like Overdone Smoothies But Bone Defeatin T..Is Unheard of. Kinda Like Stevy Wonder Complaining of Violence in Movies but it wasnt enought to get the win vote-bone(NO HATE and both of ya is nice) plz return the favor and honestly vote on this battle http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=201991 |
Voted For: T.r.oo.P
A'ight...this was a good battle... Troop...came hard with the punches...but I hate your structure...it throws the flow off...but your punches and personals were hitting hard, and your wordplayw as nice too...word...good verse... Bone...Decent verse...better structure and flow than Troop...but your punches just weren't as hard hitting...good battle...but Troop takes it. No hate. |
Voted For: T.r.oo.P
i say this was a hot battle but i feel like bc came to basic and troop just ripped the whole verse |
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your verse was what man, work on eveything..
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Voted For: BoneCollector
This was a pretty tight battle but Bc...to me came alot hard.. BoneCollector Ill Warn You Now, You Aren't A Match For Me,...Remember I Told Ya... Cuz Bone's Quick To Have Troop Down....Fast....Like A Fallen Soilda...! Damn ..Nice opener Im Popping Caps In Your Frame....Sone Im Just Proving Your In My Range. And I Stick To Punchin' "Threw Pocket" Like .. "Dealin With Loose Change". Ha..good punch..nice meta Im Walkin' On Your Fame,..Smf... Stompin You Down To Prove Your Lame.... My Shit Leaves "Jim/Gym Pounded" Like "Floors Of Agressive Bball Games". Hah..nice meta Your Interested In War............But Your Ownly Weapon Is A....Rusty Knife..!?* Yu Coming At Bone W/ That...Smf... Its Like Simply Saying .....Bone Kill Me Now I Have....."No Meaning In Life"..! Damn..loving this Im Quick To Put "Lead In Pocket" Like A Nerd Would..No Matter The Occasion.. Cus It Proves To Me That Troop..Is Bad At Math Just Look At "His Equation"...!* Ahh..decent You Rv's Problem Seems Either A Hacker Or A Virus..Cus No Way Its Ur Text Cuz Cus The Only Time..Troop'll Get 'Air Time'...Is If I Pump Helum Into Your Chess(t).. LOL..nice closer Troop Im Hitting u 2night........Like an Un Known Deflector You Gettin "Roughly Beatin" is Far From odd Seeing How your a Prone "Bone"Collector Pretty good opener And you can Never Hold me Like a Piece of a Failed Knot His Old Names Angel So it Would be Fiction if RV Quoted u had a "Hell" of a Drop Ha..decent Ill Box your Nose Until its Runny..Like Overdone Smoothies But Bone Defeatin T..Is Unheard of. Kinda Like Stevy Wonder Complaining of Violence in Movies LOL!..this was tight If u Released an Audio..11 Would b Garbage & 1 Wack Track If He Smacked a Chick That gave Him Ghonoria..Collector Still couldnt "Clap" Back Naw..played And In the Law of Suck..Collector Probly be on Probation Ya Punches Are as Useless As Wheel Chaired Veterens... during an Standing Ovation LOL!nice closer Overall Pretty good battle it was very close but ima have to give this one To Bc... good battle to both and both keep it up |
Voted For: BoneCollector
t.r.oo.p Im Hitting u 2night........Like an Un Known Deflector You Gettin "Roughly Beatin" is Far From odd Seeing How your a Prone "Bone"Collector ^^^I LIKED YA RYHME SCHEM BUT I REALLY DIDN'T GET DA PUNCH And you can Never Hold me Like a Piece of a Failed Knot His Old Names Angel So it Would be Fiction if RV Quoted u had a "Hell" of a Drop ^^^OKAY..GOOD PERSONAL Ill Box your Nose Until its Runny..Like Overdone Smoothies But Bone Defeatin T..Is Unheard of. Kinda Like Stevy Wonder Complaining of Violence in Movies ^^DECENT If u Released an Audio..11 Would b Garbage & 1 Wack Track If He Smacked a Chick That gave Him Ghonoria..Collector Still couldnt "Clap" Back ^^^LOL..WHUT??? And In the Law of Suck..Collector Probly be on Probation Ya Punches Are as Useless As Wheel Chaired Veterens... during an Standing Ovation ^^DECENT CLOSER.... U REALLY DIDN'T HAVE NO OOHHH BAR'S BUT YA SHIT WAS OKAY BUT A FEW O F YA LINES I DIDN'T GET b.c: Ill Warn You Now, You Aren't A Match For Me,...Remember I Told Ya... Cuz Bone's Quick To Have Troop Down....Fast....Like A Fallen Soilda...! ^^^^LOL..GOOD OPENER..& VERY ORIGINAL Im Popping Caps In Your Frame....Sone Im Just Proving Your In My Range. And I Stick To Punchin' "Threw Pocket" Like .. "Dealin With Loose Change". ^^^NAH...U WORDED DIS FUCKED UP Im Walkin' On Your Fame,..Smf... Stompin You Down To Prove Your Lame.... My Shit Leaves "Jim/Gym Pounded" Like "Floors Of Agressive Bball Games". ^^^DECENT PERSONAL...COULD OF MADE IT BETTA THO Your Interested In War............But Your Ownly Weapon Is A....Rusty Knife..!?* Yu Coming At Bone W/ That...Smf... Its Like Simply Saying .....Bone Kill Me Now I Have....."No Meaning In Life"..! ^^^NOTHIN SPECIAL Im Quick To Put "Lead In Pocket" Like A Nerd Would..No Matter The Occasion.. Cus It Proves To Me That Troop..Is Bad At Math Just Look At "His Equation"...!* ^^^LOL... You Rv's Problem Seems Either A Hacker Or A Virus..Cus No Way Its Ur Text Cuz Cus The Only Time..Troop'll Get 'Air Time'...Is If I Pump Helum Into Your Chess(t).. ^^^^NAH..... DIS WAS KIND OF A CLOSE BATTLE...CUZZ BOTH WEREN'T REALLY DAT SPECTACULAR BUT BOEN CAME WITH LIKE 2 HOTT LIENS AND TROOP ALL UR'S WERE REGULAR NOTHIN MADD SAY OOOH LIKE I SAID RETURN DA FAVOR YA'LL |
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Voted For: BoneCollector
Im Hitting u 2night........Like an Un Known Deflector You Gettin "Roughly Beatin" is Far From odd Seeing How your a Prone "Bone"Collector ^^^punch was weak as fuck And you can Never Hold me Like a Piece of a Failed Knot His Old Names Angel So it Would be Fiction if RV Quoted u had a "Hell" of a Drop ^^OK......... Ill Box your Nose Until its Runny..Like Overdone Smoothies But Bone Defeatin T..Is Unheard of. Kinda Like Stevy Wonder Complaining of Violence in Movies ^^Nice........... If u Released an Audio..11 Would b Garbage & 1 Wack Track If He Smacked a Chick That gave Him Ghonoria..Collector Still couldnt "Clap" Back ^^OK........... And In the Law of Suck..Collector Probly be on Probation Ya Punches Are as Useless As Wheel Chaired Veterens... during an Standing Ovation ^^bah....a lil played Nice verse.One whack punch which was the opener...and one played..which was the closer.But the rest was good.I think a lil more harder personals would have been better though.Had a couple a personals..but they were weak. Ill Warn You Now, You Aren't A Match For Me,...Remember I Told Ya... Cuz Bone's Quick To Have Troop Down....Fast....Like A Fallen Soilda...! ^^^OK........ Im Popping Caps In Your Frame....Sone Im Just Proving Your In My Range. And I Stick To Punchin' "Threw Pocket" Like .. "Dealin With Loose Change". ^^OK........ Im Walkin' On Your Fame,..Smf... Stompin You Down To Prove Your Lame.... My Shit Leaves "Jim/Gym Pounded" Like "Floors Of Agressive Bball Games". ^^OK...... Your Interested In War............But Your Ownly Weapon Is A....Rusty Knife..!?* Yu Coming At Bone W/ That...Smf... Its Like Simply Saying .....Bone Kill Me Now I Have....."No Meaning In Life"..! ^^a lil long....but ight Im Quick To Put "Lead In Pocket" Like A Nerd Would..No Matter The Occasion.. Cus It Proves To Me That Troop..Is Bad At Math Just Look At "His Equation"...!* ^^Lmao...dope personal You Rv's Problem Seems Either A Hacker Or A Virus..Cus No Way Its Ur Text Cuz Cus The Only Time..Troop'll Get 'Air Time'...Is If I Pump Helum Into Your Chess(t).. ^^OK...... This was a NIce verse.Not one bad bar for me.The best line was the personal about his sig.But a problem I see between you and troop...is the basic rhyme sheme.But I think you edged him for being more consistant Vote-Bone Collector VOTE IN LINK BELOW http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=202287 |
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