one mic vs Mike McGuire
 

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Check in by: 07-30-05 at 07:46 AM

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one mic has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-29-05 07:53 AM.

yo, man, when you write your verse dont bother tryin to curse me
cuz you write "meaningless", so towards you, it's gon' be "All Controversy"
often wit you, it results in "chaos", cuz your "verse dont flow"
when it gets to him performin, he gon' be worst at the show
"Hello Mello" what the fuck is that! you got no skill
cant you see already, your dreams wont be fufilled
man, you got the worst structure i've seen in a while
so i suggest you take a rest from this site and take a low profile

yo, man, when you write your verse dont bother tryin to curse me
cuz you write "meaningless", so towards you, it's gon' be "All Controversy"
often wit you, it results in "chaos", cuz your "verse dont flow"
when it gets to him performin, he gon' be worst at the show
"Hello Mello" what the fuck is that! you got no skill
cant you see already, your dreams wont be fufilled
man, you got the worst structure i've seen in a while
so i suggest you take a rest from this site and take a low profile

1st bar,2nd line- he did an OM called all controversy, and the lyrics didnt make sense

2nd bar, 1st line-flow verse and chaos are 2 of the people he's battlin at the moment

3rd bar, 1st line-"hello mello" woz another 1 of his OMs

4th bar, 1st line-he got a bad structure in some of his lyrics

Mike McGuire has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-29-05 01:30 PM.

I dont feel like wastin my time so ill make this verse brief
You got freestyles lined in ur computer like braces on teeth
When you first asked to battle me, i was gonna decline and say NO
But your just another WEAK kid who I'll be waitin for you to die slow
Imma cut off you blood FLOW and turn it into a blood CLOT
Hes tangled up of punchlines like a 5 year old shoestring knot
You weak man, you should watch Coach Carter
Will that movie make you act somewhat harder?
I have to admit that those 2 lines was just plain WEAK
Take it, it goes with your STYLE, its all yours to keep

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Voted For: one mic

One Mic:

yo, man, when you write your verse dont bother tryin to curse me
cuz you write "meaningless", so towards you, it's gon' be "All Controversy"
^^good personal 7/10
often wit you, it results in "chaos", cuz your "verse dont flow"
when it gets to him performin, he gon' be worst at the show
^^good personal wack punch 4/10
"Hello Mello" what the fuck is that! you got no skill
cant you see already, your dreams wont be fufilled
^^no 2/10
man, you got the worst structure i've seen in a while
so i suggest you take a rest from this site and take a low profile
^^no 2/10

Overall: 15/40 (38%)


Mike McGuire:

I dont feel like wastin my time so ill make this verse brief
You got freestyles lined in ur computer like braces on teeth
^^ehh 3/10
When you first asked to battle me, i was gonna decline and say NO
But your just another WEAK kid who I'll be waitin for you to die slow
^^no 2/10
Imma cut off you blood FLOW and turn it into a blood CLOT
Hes tangled up of punchlines like a 5 year old shoestring knot
^^alright 4/10
You weak man, you should watch Coach Carter
Will that movie make you act somewhat harder?
^^no 1/10
I have to admit that those 2 lines was just plain WEAK
Take it, it goes with your STYLE, its all yours to keep
^^ehh 3/10

Overall: 13/50 (26%)


Vote: One Mic


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Voted For: Mike McGuire

Flow-Basic rhyme shceme by both emcees.Structure was same by the both of you.So guess I'ma give it an even here.

Punches-One Mic got the right idea goin after the dude's open mic.But the problem the 2 of you have is just stating shit..be indirect..use wordplay and metaphors.I gotta go with Mike Mcguire for having some punches that hit.

Personals-One mic...no brainer.But his personals were weak.Mike outta work on this aspect a lot.

Multis-Neither...as both of you sucked badly here.Ditch the basic rhyme shceme.

Vocab-Same as multis.Improve here

Originality-Mike...One mic had personals but didn't use them in a creative way.Neither of you were creastive though
WEAK BATTLE

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Voted For: one mic

yo, man, when you write your verse dont bother tryin to curse me
cuz you write "meaningless", so towards you, it's gon' be "All Controversy"
^^coulda made sumtin better of the OM..4/10
often wit you, it results in "chaos", cuz your "verse dont flow"
when it gets to him performin, he gon' be worst at the show
^^multi shoulda match sllyably,n punch was meh..4/10
"Hello Mello" what the fuck is that! you got no skill
cant you see already, your dreams wont be fufilled
^^u didn't play of the OM..n punch was weak...3/10
man, you got the worst structure i've seen in a while
so i suggest you take a rest from this site and take a low profile
^^^basic....2/10

I dont feel like wastin my time so ill make this verse brief
You got freestyles lined in ur computer like braces on teeth
^^stupuid...2/10
When you first asked to battle me, i was gonna decline and say NO
But your just another WEAK kid who I'll be waitin for you to die slow
^^not much of a punch..1/10
Imma cut off you blood FLOW and turn it into a blood CLOT
Hes tangled up of punchlines like a 5 year old shoestring knot
^^set-up horrible n punch was shit..2/10
You weak man, you should watch Coach Carter
Will that movie make you act somewhat harder?
^^WTF?....2/10
I have to admit that those 2 lines was just plain WEAK
Take it, it goes with your STYLE, its all yours to keep
^^no punch...2/10

Ok..this battle goes to open mic due to actually having a punch in every bar.Mike was just sayin shit outta nowhere and a lot of his lines weren't punches.

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Voted For: one mic

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One Mic got this

far better punchlines, Mikes verse was way too complex, nothin caught my eye in your verse Mike, Wordplay wasnt ehere an neither was the nice disses.

One mic, ya had some aight stuff, more complex feel too ya verse, puns hit harder, wordplay was far more creative, on the whole ya verse was alot nicer, not much more i can say really

One mic got this for havin an overall better verse

RTF One mic.

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Voted For: one mic

cuz hes alright. and he has what it takes to be one of the best like ME!!!!!!!!!!!!

lol, appreciate it. uppin this, jus' 1 more vote.........

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you got him even though you kinda fell off towrds the end

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This was feedback posted for one mic
 

i think one mic won this battle hes bars were rather good hes flow was good and i thought he came the hardest outta the 2 it was a decent battle but one mic won this

oooops i cant even vote yet thats dumb to me why not?

yo man, thanx for the feed, but you had to have 20 posts to vote in this which didnt have at the time, but thanx anywayz. uppin this.....

Voted For: one mic

one mice took dis ez he had hard punches his verse was worth readin mark verse was kinda terrible ya punches were gay specially that braces one n the one about coach carter n one mic flow was good

v/ one mic
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