Macreep vs Daubs
 

Battle Rules:

8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No d/r
No bullshit


Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-01-05 at 05:04 AM

Must drop verse in 2880 minutes after check in.

whats check and drop times? .

2 days...................I'ma post later today anyways...it's just I don't like being pressed on time.

Ok, thats all good.

I will post today also.

Whats your alias by the way.

Lmao.......I ain't tellin...........if ya beat me....I will.......

Macreep has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-30-05 03:39 PM.

all his battles r 6 lines,talk bout unable to shake the road
cause his brain is a newborn clitorus,shit can't take a load
crying his ass off for a chick like his ass is a cigarette crook
he struttin the teary I's(eyes)like I ripped the alphabet book
leader cause ez left,so you ain't dope cause of ya mother's foam*
ya might be Paris of troy,by the way you stole another's throne
deny's label of geek,but it futile,he talking from a glass circle
cause he be here all day postin a lot,like he tryna surpass Urkel
*HE's only leader of living legends because M-Easy left

A PERSONAL IN EVERY BAR.....SO I DON'T WANNA HEAR SHIT ABOUT THERE BEING NONE

whenever you ready daubs....I posted mines already

Gimme 10 mins. ..

Just watchin a film.

yeah yeah.....it's cool dawg......................

Daubs has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-30-05 04:13 PM.

Like lazy court cases after this battle youll be sue-is-idol..
Theorietically speaking..
Your verse couldnt cause a big bang......with your usertitle!!
Ima creep up on you like a rapist, but you'd probably enjoy it..
And you could never be running shit, even goin down a toilet..
Call me a friendly cook,the way ima be batterin and fryin peers..
& RV's like daft bakers,your rhymes arnt heard even with pie-in-ears..
You give many shout outs, but none of RV really wanna listen..
Look, ive left Mac dismantled.....like a computer technician..

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This was feedback posted for Macreep
 

Yo Macreep Got This Battle He Came 100% Harder In This Batle He Had Nice Flow And Some Great Punches

This was feedback posted for Daubs
 

wow, i think daubs took this easily but im too lazy to make enough words together to vote........ macreep dropped alil weaker on every bar

This was feedback posted for Daubs
 

checkinnnnn the pollzzzzz.........................

This was feedback posted for Daubs
 

daubs fuckin owned this shit, ya hear.........word

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Voted For: Daubs

Like lazy court cases after this battle youll be sue-is-idol..
Theorietically speaking..
Your verse couldnt cause a big bang......with your usertitle!!
- Ooo Ok I like your wordplay, decent bar. Good Punch w/ a personal.

Ima creep up on you like a rapist, but you'd probably enjoy it..
And you could never be running shit, even goin down a toilet..
- Meh...Ok Punch, didnt felt this was A decent bar though. Ok Punch.

Call me a friendly cook,the way ima be batterin and fryin peers..
& RV's like daft bakers,your rhymes arnt heard even with pie-in-ears..
- Ok punch on the 1st Line. I like the 2nd Line though good wordplay and a punch.

You give many shout outs, but none of RV really wanna listen..
Look, ive left Mac dismantled.....like a computer technician..
- I like the personal Punch...

Overall- It was a good verse you had 3 bars of good punches and wordplays and far most Good Personals. Nicly done.

all his battles r 6 lines,talk bout unable to shake the road
cause his brain is a newborn clitorus,shit can't take a load
- Ahh I like this bar good Punch

crying his ass off for a chick like his ass is a cigarette crook
he struttin the teary I's(eyes)like I ripped the alphabet book
- Nice Punch, and Good Concept.


leader cause ez left,so you ain't dope cause of ya mother's foam*
ya might be Paris of troy,by the way you stole another's throne
- Meh, I like the Personal. The Punch was ok, could've been better.

deny's label of geek,but it futile,he talking from a glass circle
cause he be here all day postin a lot,like he tryna surpass Urkel
-I like the personal and the Punch.

Overall- You had a good verse, Punches were Good not decent but good. I like the 1st bar,and the 2nd bar.

Conclusion- Ok...My vote goes to Daubs, he had a good Punches with them Wordplays there. Mac you had a nice verse, cool personals also but I think with daubs Wordplays w/ Punches edge it a little. So my vote goes to Daubs.

Please Return a favor in my battle with Black~Magic or Lady fiya's thank you

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Voted For: Macreep

yo imma go wit Macreep in this one...
Hispersonals hit hell hard.....
(note* I checked them all*........
my favorite line b Macreep was:
cause he be here all day postin a lot,like he tryna surpass Urkel
*HE's only leader of living legends because M-Easy left


^^ that was tight...

Daubs was tite to and he had some good punches..but i did'nt fell em...
and they was'nt no personals inmy opinion.....
but both emcees keep at it

my vote goes to
Macreep

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Voted For: Daubs

Wordplay-- Daubs. The sue-is idol line was nice but he got it with the pie-in-ears.

Punchlines-- Daubs. He took this when he said "And you could never be running shit, even goin down a toilet."

Personals-- Macreep. He simply came with more personals. But, I am not big on personals. Macreep's personals didn't really grab my attention.

Vote-- Daubs

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^^hah....vote is hate and getting removed............

WTF, stop removing em, i whored you........ again.......

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Voted For: Daubs

DAUBS

Like lazy court cases after this battle youll be sue-is-idol..
Theorietically speaking..
Your verse couldnt cause a big bang......with your usertitle!!
HIT HARD^
Ima creep up on you like a rapist, but you'd probably enjoy it..
And you could never be running shit, even goin down a toilet..
VERY NICE PLAY OFF HIS NAME^
Call me a friendly cook,the way ima be batterin and fryin peers..
& RV's like daft bakers,your rhymes arnt heard even with pie-in-ears..
SELF-GLORIFIED/NO PUNCH^
You give many shout outs, but none of RV really wanna listen..
Look, ive left Mac dismantled.....like a computer technician..
STILL SELF-GLORFIED/WEAKER PUNCH^

Daubs, I gotts hand it to ya man, you had a few really dope punches and name play in the first 2 bars, after that you started to fall off. And you said that if we dont get the wordplay to PM you or dont vote...well in your last 2 bars I can clearly see the wordplay and I thought it was not bad, except for the fact that it was half self-glorifying and half not hitting your opponent...Ima have to go ahead and give you a 5/10 for half of your verse being dope man, no beef, were homies.

MACREEP

all his battles r 6 lines,talk bout unable to shake the road
cause his brain is a newborn clitorus,shit can't take a load
OK WORDPLAY^
crying his ass off for a chick like his ass is a cigarette crook
he struttin the teary I's(eyes)like I ripped the alphabet book
OK...KINDA PLAYED^
leader cause ez left,so you ain't dope cause of ya mother's foam*
ya might be Paris of troy,by the way you stole another's throne
WEAK^
deny's label of geek,but it futile,he talking from a glass circle
cause he be here all day postin a lot,like he tryna surpass Urkel
WEAK^

Mac, well I guess yours was not bad...but to be honest I wasnt really feelin it. I mean, you claim to have personals in every bar, I look and yes there are...but, all you really did was state a minor fact about him in half of the first bar and then the rest was crap and didnt really go with the personal you picked. Here, lets take a look at your personals:
-All his battles are 6 lines
SO WHAT
-Crying his ass off like a chick
YOU DIDNT PLAY OFF THAT
-Cause your leader ez left
NO PUNCH OFF THAT
-Denys label of geek
WTF
-Cause he be here all day postin a lot
YOU POST MORE THAN HE DOES, WEAK PERSONAL NONE THE LESS

You see...ya cant just go stating minor personals at the start of your lines and then not play off them like that, shits wack. Ill give you this much tho, you did have some good wordplay in there...and for that I will generously give you a 3.5/10

V/DAUBS....................................

...................^^good vote..........bump..................

Yeah thanks for the vote, and for thew feed.

uppin..................

Daubs took this battle easily.....................

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Voted For: Daubs

Ok lets breaK it down:

all his battles r 6 lines,talk bout unable to shake the road
cause his brain is a newborn clitorus,shit can't take a load
^^^
This was a hot line the wordplay and the creativity was really good....5/5

crying his ass off for a chick like his ass is a cigarette crook
he struttin the teary I's(eyes)like I ripped the alphabet book
^^^^
Not too great I saw what you were gettin at but it wasnt great 2/5

leader cause ez left,so you ain't dope cause of ya mother's foam*
ya might be Paris of troy,by the way you stole another's throne
^^^
Funny line (1st) but 2nd wasnt too great.....4/5

deny's label of geek,but it futile,he talking from a glass circle
^^^good try but wheres the punch....1/5 sorry

cause he be here all day postin a lot,like he tryna surpass Urkel
*HE's only leader of living legends because M-Easy left
^^^
Ok decent I see the punch not too hard

IP:


Like lazy court cases after this battle youll be sue-is-idol..
Theorietically speaking..
Your verse couldnt cause a big bang......with your usertitle!!
^
HAHAHAHA THIS WAS SO CREATIVE....brilliant use....5/5

Ima creep up on you like a rapist, but you'd probably enjoy it..
And you could never be running shit, even goin down a toilet..
^^
Sorry but the first line I didnt like its too played seemd like a filler but the second was decent but also seen that shit...2/5

Call me a friendly cook,the way ima be batterin and fryin peers..
& RV's like daft bakers,your rhymes arnt heard even with pie-in-ears..
^^
This was good....kinda self gory but good wordplay and use...3/5

You give many shout outs, but none of RV really wanna listen..
Look, ive left Mac dismantled.....like a computer technician..
^^^
I like this line liked the creativity and wordplay...4/5

Macreep: Ok stuff, Ive seen much better....keep up
Daubs: Nice shit there dawg....you got it hard...nice battle between us btw

Daubs gets this...RTF on my battle with Lawless or this vote will be removed

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=199248

safe mate,

ima hit it up in a bit.






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Voted For: Daubs

Flow-Daubs,both had a nice flow..but Daubs just edged him out a bit.

Punches-Now..this was a tough choice.I think Macreep's play off personals in every bar was nice.But daubs was just more creative and such.Had more metas and wordplay

Personals-Clearly Macreep....had one in every bar.I like that a lot.

Multis-Like personals...Macreep had a multi in every bar
shake the road/take the load..cigarette crook...alphabeth book....mother's foam....another's throne....glass circle....surpass Urkel....

I think Macreep can be something special with a little more pack in his punch.

Originality-Clearly Daubs...it loooked like Macreep spent more time gathering personals than making the punch.

Vote-Daubs...close battle

Ite thanks for the feedback, will keep it in mind.

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Voted For: Daubs

Good battle..i liked this alot....

Battle Breakdown=

Mutlis= Daubs
Punches- very closed..but votin on "Daubs"
Personals- MaCrep
Metas= Daubs
Vocab- Daubs
Complexity- Daubs
structure- MaCrep

this battle was every close in my perspective...but I feel like Daubs came just a little harder...cuz he went all out on his verse
and the Whole lazy court cases afta diz u'll b sue-is-idol worked for his advantage....

Vote= Daubs

peace...oh yeah rtf in diz battle here

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=197822

^^tell me one multi he had????...........................................

fryin peers...pioneers

meh..

I took this anyway man.