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B To The D 07-31-05 02:47 PM

Macreep vs un-fuck-widable
 
Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting


Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-03-05 at 02:47 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

System 07-31-05 02:48 PM

un-fuck-widable has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-31-05 02:48 PM.

System 07-31-05 03:20 PM

Macreep has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-31-05 03:20 PM.

Macreep 07-31-05 03:20 PM

Both

Competitor Challenger See Poll See Battle Votes (Comp - Chall) Status Posts Type
Konvict un-fuck-widable 33492 199188 0 - 5 Closed 20 Text
underpressure un-fuck-widable 33491 199187 0 - 5 Closed 20 Text
underpressure un-fuck-widable 33489 199160 0 - 5 Closed 20 Text
underpressure un-fuck-widable 33472 199076 0 - 5 Closed 20 Text

un-fuck-widable NaRc-UzI 33378 198187 5 - 0 Closed 100 Text
-BrokenInsanity- un-fuck-widable 33316 197714 0 - 5 Closed 20 Text
un-fuck-widable Verbal_Pain 33302 197583 5 - 1 Closed 20 Text
un-fuck-widable {D.N.A.} 33284 197415 5 - 0 Closed 75 Text

he's 8-0,but this hoe only loves battling herbs who lack recognition
battled the same newb 3 times in a row,talk about whack repitition
only when he bones a chick,then he thinks he's got a winning-thread
chose un-FUCK-widable,cause that how his girl think he is-in-bed
leader of reality check,but he's still begging for some respect ,da rueist
only way he gets some bows in front him was if his crew was buddist
in his crew,OMB's in the roster,but neva repped it,nor checked
so i guess ya'll diggs neglects...like ya had some destitude pets



A PERSONAL IN EVERY BAR.....SO I DON'T WANNA HEAR SHIT ABOUT HAVING NONE

Macreep 07-31-05 03:21 PM

anytime ya wanna post un-fuck-widable......go for it......

B To The D 07-31-05 04:47 PM

y dont ya spit first huh??..............................

Macreep 07-31-05 04:56 PM

I spit already retart.....that why i tellin you to spit anytime now...

B To The D 07-31-05 05:21 PM

When He Said He Waz Ill I Hope He Ment The Flu
Trust Me Youll Never Be Able To Handle The Verses I Send To U.....*

You Got Kicked From Ma Crew Now u Beefin?..... Whats The Deal Wit This Kid
You Think You Ill But U Shit .......Jus Another Trinidad Bitch Wit No Niche....**

Your Lyrics Dont Even Make Sense....You Gunna Blow?Fuck Off For Goodness Sake When...
I Tear Apart Rather Then Break Men....Your Only Action Iz In The State Pen..***

This Bitch Usin Shit Rhymin Wit Shit.....The Timen Was Shit....
Im Grinden Ya Shit.....Im Too Good Stop Startin Beef U Should Go Back Ta Ridin My Dick...****

Im Shootin Wit Clips At You Trinidad Bitch ..You Should Duck N Roll I Fuck The Dull...
Hollow Stuck In Your Skull Ppl Laugh Wen u Roll.....Thas Enuff Then You Fold.....*****

Im Ruff When Im Cold...Keepin Knifes Near Your Neck By Me...
You Succesion Iz Unlikely,Ur Only hope..........Iz To Bite Me.....

I'll Finish Him Off.....Im Ill To But Im Not Gunna Send Him A Cough....
I Knew Youd Lose You Didnt Have To Stall......ALthough It Waz An Eazy Battle In All

(YAwns.)..I Want Feelin Ill....My Flow Was Weak As Hell
But My Shit Still Killed Your Barz..As You Can Tell...

*he sed he was ill an cud beat evr1 on the site
**he used to be in reality check as k-trini an i kicked him out(hahahahaaha)
*** check his battles some of his lyrics dont make no fuckin sense
****he beefin wid me now but he rid ma dick constantly wen he woz in ma crew as k-trini
*****-he thinks hes gangsta an goes around on the board goin ima kill you ima murk u im harder than u an evry1 jus laughs at him

Macreep 07-31-05 06:02 PM

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Macreep 07-31-05 06:44 PM

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Spoken Word 07-31-05 07:03 PM

Voted For: Macreep

Macreep:

he's 8-0,but this hoe only loves battling herbs who lack recognition
battled the same newb 3 times in a row,talk about whack repitition
^^dope personal good opener 8/10
only when he bones a chick,then he thinks he's got a winning-thread
chose un-FUCK-widable,cause that how his girl think he is-in-bed
^^thats mean but good bar 7/10
leader of reality check,but he's still begging for some respect ,da rueist
only way he gets some bows in front him was if his crew was buddist
^^good meta bad set up 5/10
in his crew,OMB's in the roster,but neva repped it,nor checked
so i guess ya'll diggs neglects...like ya had some destitude pets
^^good set up but didnt hit hard 5/10

Overall: 25/40 (63&)

Un-Fuck-Widdable:

When He Said He Waz Ill I Hope He Ment The Flu
Trust Me Youll Never Be Able To Handle The Verses I Send To U.....*
^^decent opener ok personal 6/10
You Got Kicked From Ma Crew Now u Beefin?..... Whats The Deal Wit This Kid
You Think You Ill But U Shit .......Jus Another Trinidad Bitch Wit No Niche....**
^^decent bar 5/10
Your Lyrics Dont Even Make Sense....You Gunna Blow?Fuck Off For Goodness Sake When...
I Tear Apart Rather Then Break Men....Your Only Action Iz In The State Pen..***
^^ok bar coulda been better 5/10
This Bitch Usin Shit Rhymin Wit Shit.....The Timen Was Shit....
Im Grinden Ya Shit.....Im Too Good Stop Startin Beef U Should Go Back Ta Ridin My Dick...****
^^the personal was blah and dont be so repetitive 4/10
Im Shootin Wit Clips At You Trinidad Bitch ..You Should Duck N Roll I Fuck The Dull...
Hollow Stuck In Your Skull Ppl Laugh Wen u Roll.....Thas Enuff Then You Fold.....*****
^^good multies ok punch 6/10
Im Ruff When Im Cold...Keepin Knifes Near Your Neck By Me...
You Succesion Iz Unlikely,Ur Only hope..........Iz To Bite Me.....
^^not working 3/10
I'll Finish Him Off.....Im Ill To But Im Not Gunna Send Him A Cough....
I Knew Youd Lose You Didnt Have To Stall......ALthough It Waz An Eazy Battle In All
^^decent bar 5/10
(YAwns.)..I Want Feelin Ill....My Flow Was Weak As Hell
But My Shit Still Killed Your Barz..As You Can Tell...
^^filler 2/10

Overall: 36/80 (45%)


Vote: Macreep


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NaRc-UzI 07-31-05 07:24 PM

This was feedback posted for Macreep
 
You calling me a herb bitch after i annilated you in our battle LOL

Macreep 07-31-05 08:07 PM

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Macreep 07-31-05 11:20 PM

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B To The D 08-01-05 08:27 AM

uppin............................................. ....

Macreep 08-01-05 12:32 PM

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*Bad Newz* 08-01-05 03:26 PM

Voted For: un-fuck-widable

damn unfuck gets my vote...his flow was just unflawed in my opinon and those p[ersonals juss sonned Mac...Mac your verse was good to but all u had was personals and they did'nt really hit hard in my opinion ..but damn this battle had me on the edge of seat really good shit both of ya
both emcees keep ya head up...
v/Unfuck

Daubs 08-01-05 03:44 PM

Voted For: Macreep

he's 8-0,but this hoe only loves battling herbs who lack recognition
battled the same newb 3 times in a row,talk about whack repitition

UMMM, DECENT PERSONAL NO PROPER PUNCH THOUGH.

only when he bones a chick,then he thinks he's got a winning-thread
chose un-FUCK-widable,cause that how his girl think he is-in-bed

OK, NICE NAMEPLAY.

leader of reality check,but he's still begging for some respect ,da rueist
only way he gets some bows in front him was if his crew was buddist

ATTEMPTED WORDPLAY BUT NOT FEELIN THE WORDING.

in his crew,OMB's in the roster,but neva repped it,nor checked
so i guess ya'll diggs neglects...like ya had some destitude pets

OK PERSONAL I SUPPOSE, NOT MUCH OFF A DISS THOUGH.

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When He Said He Waz Ill I Hope He Ment The Flu
Trust Me Youll Never Be Able To Handle The Verses I Send To U.....*

NOPE, PLAYED SET-UP WEAK PUNCH BUT A PERSONAL I GUESS.

You Got Kicked From Ma Crew Now u Beefin?..... Whats The Deal Wit This Kid
You Think You Ill But U Shit .......Jus Another Trinidad Bitch Wit No Niche....**

ERM, NO HARD PUNCH BUT REASONABLE PERSONAL.

Your Lyrics Dont Even Make Sense....You Gunna Blow?Fuck Off For Goodness Sake When...
I Tear Apart Rather Then Break Men....Your Only Action Iz In The State Pen..***

NOT FEELIN IT

This Bitch Usin Shit Rhymin Wit Shit.....The Timen Was Shit....
Im Grinden Ya Shit.....Im Too Good Stop Startin Beef U Should Go Back Ta Ridin My Dick...****

GOOD PERSONAL AND NICE FLOW WITH THE MULTIES.

Im Shootin Wit Clips At You Trinidad Bitch ..You Should Duck N Roll I Fuck The Dull...
Hollow Stuck In Your Skull Ppl Laugh Wen u Roll.....Thas Enuff Then You Fold.....*****

MEH, PUNCH WAS WEAK.

Im Ruff When Im Cold...Keepin Knifes Near Your Neck By Me...
You Succesion Iz Unlikely,Ur Only hope..........Iz To Bite Me.....

AGAIN THE BAR DIDNT MAKE MUCH SENSE AND NO HARD PUNCH.

I'll Finish Him Off.....Im Ill To But Im Not Gunna Send Him A Cough....
I Knew Youd Lose You Didnt Have To Stall......ALthough It Waz An Eazy Battle In All

SELF G/ AND A WEAK PUNCH AGAIN.

(YAwns.)..I Want Feelin Ill....My Flow Was Weak As Hell
But My Shit Still Killed Your Barz..As You Can Tell...

HELL NO.

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WTF MAN, THIS IS THE WEAKEST I SEEN FROM YOU, YOUR BARS WERE WEAK AS HELL.

IN FUTURE SWITCH UP YOUR STRUCTURE AND GET SOME CONCEPTS THAT ARENT PLAYED ILL LINES. ALSO USE PERSONALS.

UN FUCK HAD THE BETTER FLOW FOR THE MOST PART BUT MAC GETS THIS FOR USING PERSONALS, HAVING BETTER CONCEPTS AND OVERALL HARDER HITTIN PUNCHES WIT BETTER WORDPLAY.

NO HATE.

B To The D 08-01-05 03:44 PM

upping..........................1-1.......................vote an i will rtf

*Bad Newz* 08-01-05 04:05 PM

alright i was told to explain my vote more/...............

my fav bar form Unfuck......

Im Ruff When Im Cold...Keepin Knifes Near Your Neck By Me...
You Succesion Iz Unlikely,Ur Only hope..........Iz To Bite Me.....

^^^this was nice........

my fav bar form Mac

he's 8-0,but this hoe only loves battling herbs who lack recognition
battled the same newb 3 times in a row,talk about whack repitition


^^ this was nice too

I juss felt unfucks verse more as my vote stands...good luck to the both of u

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Macreep 08-01-05 04:26 PM

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Macreep 08-01-05 08:10 PM

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Macreep 08-02-05 01:19 PM

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Kamze 08-02-05 04:20 PM

Voted For: un-fuck-widable

v/ un-fuckwid-able

I thought he had better punches and personals so he got my vote.

Macreep had got lyrics and punches but un-fuckwid-able won it for me though.

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Macreep 08-02-05 04:41 PM

uppin............................................. .

Macreep 08-02-05 11:01 PM

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Macreep 08-03-05 03:08 PM

bump//................................................

Macreep 08-03-05 09:33 PM

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Macreep 08-04-05 01:29 PM

uppin............................................. .

Kid Chaos 08-04-05 03:32 PM

Voted For: Macreep

Ok Macreep most definitly got the personals and
the shit flowed together better then hit opponents
decent effort from both parties but Macreep came harder

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%%%% 08-04-05 03:36 PM

This was feedback posted for Macreep
 
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Black Queen 08-04-05 04:20 PM

This was feedback posted for Macreep
 
checkin the pollz.....................................

Macreep 08-04-05 04:54 PM

^^Nah vote...i wanna end his unbeaten streak already....LoL....

Macreep 08-04-05 11:03 PM

uppin............................................. ..

blackfrostbite 08-05-05 12:57 PM

Voted For: Macreep

look dog you took it
breakdown:
flo=unf
creativity=macreep
personals=macreep
structure=macrreps is to small,but it was good
metas=unf
3/5 for mac
so vote:macreep

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nirt 08-05-05 01:00 PM

This was feedback posted for Macreep
 
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Macreep 08-05-05 02:40 PM

uppin this merkage...................................

noname 08-05-05 11:17 PM

This was feedback posted for Macreep
 
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Young_law 08-06-05 06:29 PM

Voted For: un-fuck-widable

-UNF-

-UNF- got more points for stretchin his bars longer than usual
he was a little repetitive with the whole "ill" thing, but they are what saved his ass in this battle, he used a lot of punches as evry1 can tell overall this verse was good

Macreep

The only decent line in his verse was tha one about him being unfuckwidable in bed, his verse was really simple, sommeone who was new to the rap game could have done that, the rhyme scheme was aight, and the whole verse overall was str8, but not good enuff to win this battle

this vote goes to -UNF-

E.C 08-17-05 08:33 AM

Voted For: Macreep

umm this was a real close battle...

macreep: you had some decent personals punches hit, they were worded pretty decent, structure was alot better than unf's.

unf: ive seen you do alot better man, flow was all over the place as was the structure. the punches didn't really hit as hard as macreeps, they needed to be worded better which was a flaw in your verse. personals were ight.

ok time to break down the verses:

macreep:

he's 8-0,but this hoe only loves battling herbs who lack recognition
battled the same newb 3 times in a row,talk about whack repitition
^^ decent opener, hit ok
only when he bones a chick,then he thinks he's got a winning-thread
chose un-FUCK-widable,cause that how his girl think he is-in-bed
^^ lol nice namweplay decent bar
leader of reality check,but he's still begging for some respect ,da rueist
only way he gets some bows in front him was if his crew was buddist
^^umm kinda played but it was ight, one of the weaker bars though
in his crew,OMB's in the roster,but neva repped it,nor checked
so i guess ya'll diggs neglects...like ya had some destitude pets
^^ not feeling this one...

you started off decent then it got worse. overall not a bad verse but ive seen you do better.

unf:

When He Said He Waz Ill I Hope He Ment The Flu
Trust Me Youll Never Be Able To Handle The Verses I Send To U.....*
^^ ok opener didn't really hit
You Got Kicked From Ma Crew Now u Beefin?..... Whats The Deal Wit This Kid
You Think You Ill But U Shit .......Jus Another Trinidad Bitch Wit No Niche....**
^^ don't get it :huh:
Your Lyrics Dont Even Make Sense....You Gunna Blow?Fuck Off For Goodness Sake When...
I Tear Apart Rather Then Break Men....Your Only Action Iz In The State Pen..***
^^ didnt hit him hard really
This Bitch Usin Shit Rhymin Wit Shit.....The Timen Was Shit....
Im Grinden Ya Shit.....Im Too Good Stop Startin Beef U Should Go Back Ta Ridin My Dick...****
^^best bar in your verse
Im Shootin Wit Clips At You Trinidad Bitch ..You Should Duck N Roll I Fuck The Dull...
Hollow Stuck In Your Skull Ppl Laugh Wen u Roll.....Thas Enuff Then You Fold.....*****
^^ok i spose needed to be worded better though
Im Ruff When Im Cold...Keepin Knifes Near Your Neck By Me...
You Succesion Iz Unlikely,Ur Only hope..........Iz To Bite Me.....
^^ ok. didn't hit very hard though
I'll Finish Him Off.....Im Ill To But Im Not Gunna Send Him A Cough....
I Knew Youd Lose You Didnt Have To Stall......ALthough It Waz An Eazy Battle In All
^^ ok again, you need better cpncepts
(YAwns.)..I Want Feelin Ill....My Flow Was Weak As Hell
But My Shit Still Killed Your Barz..As You Can Tell...^^ i dno if this was a bar but it was weak lol

ok. ive seen you drop alot better than this, your wording wasn't good, same with your flow and structure thats y i aint voting for you.

v/ macreep

punches and personals were worded better, structure was set up better aswell.

pz


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