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Magic5 08-01-05 02:48 PM

HW Title - Hotshh! vs. .Galant.
 
8 Lines Minimum
(Agree on exact amount in your check ins)
Check Ins due Wednesday
Verses due Friday

(All due dates are eastern time)

N.Tavarez 08-01-05 02:58 PM

CHECK IN
no more than 14 lines
i already wasted enuff

TeamOne 08-01-05 08:26 PM

lmao....... word, this is gettin boring tho man, we needa start the playoffs soon

N.Tavarez 08-06-05 12:03 AM

my bad, just walked in I'm dropping now

but i see you viewing this so drop too nuccah....

TeamOne 08-06-05 12:06 AM

werd, yo, im goin 10 since i just got back..... u done??? or are u goin more

N.Tavarez 08-06-05 12:07 AM

nah im a drop my 14..........u can match or not...give em something to read

TeamOne 08-06-05 12:11 AM

nvm..... ill just go 12

TeamOne 08-06-05 12:20 AM

Since i didnt use one of the lines last week technically ima use it now if thats cool

Hot won't ever keep up with the heat, cuz this bitch barely is ruthless
So I'd ask u y u aint retired, yet, but id like u to spare me the excuses
See, you hardly pose a threat, dawg, So just watch me batter this hoe
Cause you'll be hangin by a thread.............. untill this battle is closed
And u'll say u were the greatest, but u get blamed for everythin goin on
So Hot's only the GOAT wen we e-scape to him for all thats goin wrong
Hot thinks he's winnin verse me, but im'a murder you like a veteran sin
So all I'll say is Hot, dog, u needa ketchup to me before i relish the win
Hot gets smacked up lyrically, treat u like wat u are and do this bitterly
Cuz i always thought hotshh was a bitch, but didnt know it was literally
This was gonna be a no show verse, but u actually came by, so instead
I'm deciding to just give you a break................ on the side of ur head
And u show off no show titles like ur makin it big, but wat'll happen see
Is that youll get alittle buzz on the site only to find out that ur Rapper B

N.Tavarez 08-06-05 12:26 AM

Look, I'm hurting this Skank.....You winning is for certain a Prank
Cuz Med schools the only time you should be Surgeon In Rank ( Surging)
Are You Insane? Kid..............This title wont be easy to Obtain
Especially when You Blow Shit like Snorkel divers in Sewage Drains
Ya Lame, they'll never Cheer U, so figure that out like an Equation
Or you can do another play on my name for an Ovation (Innovation)
No Show Hoe, You being the best is like hearing Mime a Scream
Bitch you suck the Gunpowder off shell casings in Crime Scenes
See He / She's...... A member of the " Ducking You " Species
Only thing Driven is your name and even thats a Mitsubishi (Galant)
Where'd you get them gay sites? kid ...... just keep your Dick On
Please refrain from dropping links only The Q would seek to Click On
Speaking Slander on my name is something that you had better not do
I'll Slap you so hard you'll flinch when someone says the Weathers "Hot"

*Sorry Q I'm just trying to advance my quote
I aint making you the butt of my joke*
that gay link line is in the last 9th and Fux battle BTW...

N.Tavarez 08-06-05 12:29 AM

Speaking Slander on my name is something that you had better not
I'll Slap you so hard you'll flinch when someone says the Weathers "Hot


^^ exclude the "do"

N.Tavarez 08-06-05 12:33 AM

Do Continue cannot vote, no beef but just for this battle

~Luciano~ 08-06-05 12:38 AM

Hot check ya pms

TeamOne 08-06-05 12:39 AM

werd, thats cool, as long as typical cant vote :)

N.Tavarez 08-06-05 09:41 AM

uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

DoContinue 08-06-05 12:31 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by hotshh!
Do Continue cannot vote, no beef but just for this battle

lmao........ u thought i was gonna vote for fux? i give honest votes man.
whatever, no hate taken tho. go vote on my battle

TeamOne 08-06-05 01:54 PM

uppin....... and just incase u read my whole verse and dont get some of it...... there is wordplay and/or metas in Every bar..... cuz i just reread my shit and saw it might be real easy to skip over some of it... like the first bar with re-tire and spare me

goodbattle :thumbup:

N.Tavarez 08-06-05 08:37 PM

upping again

i feel you fux, i got more wordplay than usually in this verse
i actually cut out 2 wordplay bars cuz i thought i was over doing
it....battle of august here

Typical 08-07-05 12:42 PM

yea i guess not letting me vote is a good idea, cuz i think hot took this...

by the way
lines wit links dont fly...

N.Tavarez 08-07-05 02:35 PM

.........................................

DoContinue 08-07-05 03:06 PM

WTF?!?!?!? TWO PAGES AND NO VOTES?!?!?!?!? KLL is lazy... i've voted on every battle but this one

MiSk 08-07-05 03:29 PM

hotshh!
Ya Lame, they'll never Cheer U, so figure that out like an Equation
Or you can do another play on my name for an Ovation (Innovation)
No Show Hoe, You being the best is like hearing Mime a Scream
Bitch you suck the Gunpowder off shell casings in Crime Scenes
Where'd you get them gay sites? kid ...... just keep your Dick On
Please refrain from dropping links only The Q would seek to Click On
Speaking Slander on my name is something that you had better not do
I'll Slap you so hard you'll flinch when someone says the Weathers "Hot"
^^^ ya best bars which is pretty much yur whole verse... ya came really hard with yur punches, some had humor to them which makes them better... good meta's and good wordplay... this was a close battle but ya got my vote cuz ya verse was a little bit harder

FuxJustAWord
And u'll say u were the greatest, but u get blamed for everythin goin on
So Hot's only the GOAT wen we e-scape to him for all thats goin wrong
Hot gets smacked up lyrically, treat u like wat u are and do this bitterly
Cuz i always thought hotshh was a bitch, but didnt know it was literally
And u show off no show titles like ur makin it big, but wat'll happen see
Is that youll get alittle buzz on the site only to find out that ur Rapper B
^^^^ yur best bars.... dont get me wrong man yur verse was good but just wasnt hard as hotshh... that "literally" bar was funny as hell!... but that hotdog/ketchup/relish bar, i wasnt feelin... no hate man just felt that hotshh came harder

MiSk 08-07-05 03:31 PM

oh sorry.............

Vote: hotshh!

TeamOne 08-07-05 03:58 PM

werd............ thats cool..... i thought my hotdog bar was one of the better ones...... but 0-1 uppin

MiSk 08-07-05 04:35 PM

dont get me wrong...
that "hotdog" bar was good... highly creative and unique....
if the setup line was worded better i probably would of thought it was better

sorry man... no ate

TeamOne 08-08-05 12:29 AM

1-0 decisions are gay......... unless theyre in my favor

N.Tavarez 08-08-05 12:32 AM

now we tied.........probably meet again in rap olympics...........

schema 08-08-05 01:13 AM

what is this bullshit? hotshh destroyed fux...

you know me...its not beef...but why do people in kll always try to coddle the other persons feelings...if someone got jacked up tell them...this wont count because i dont feel like explaining it...im just saying...what the fuck? this battle wasnt "really close"...it was a merking...why not just come out and say it...

you win some you lose some...but if you get merked im gonna tell you...everyone else should too...youre not gonna elevate if everyone is always telling you your verse was hot but the other verse was just a little hotter...

TeamOne 08-08-05 02:19 AM

^^^^ i dont see how i got killed????? wtf? wen i read them both i thought this would be a pretty close battle....... maybe u just like hots style alot better than mine.... cuz its pretty obvious me and hot got complete opposite styles, but lyrically/creativily they were pretty even.... if u dont have any part in the league than stfu... :love: :shoot: :love: werd?

TeamOne 08-08-05 02:27 AM

ohhh...... and i wasted most my good bars the first time i battled u....... i can usually only come up with like 10 (at most) good personal bars against someone.... and i gave up doin just punches a long time ago...... im obsessed with personals... but cool battle hot.... and no hate schema.... but im already alil pissed at losin the battle, and u didnt help :( :( :( :(

Magic5 08-08-05 02:55 AM

Hotshh! wins by KO.
FuxJustAWord loses.

Magic5 08-08-05 02:55 AM

This thread is now closed.

Magic5 08-08-05 02:56 AM

Moved to Closed Battles.


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