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Daubs vs un-fuck-widable
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10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No Bullshit Vote Honestly 3-0 KO 4-1 KO 500 posts to vote. GL :shoot: Minimum posts to vote: 500 Check in by: 08-01-05 at 05:32 PM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. |
un-fuck-widable has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-01-05 05:03 PM.
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Deterioration, ya face disturbed from the rhythm in lines-
cuz only time ya 'flippin' bars' is to get on a 'ride'/ daubs ur by, so we kno ya feelin my flow- plus robbin' 'eminem cds' only time ya 'stealin' the 'show'/ muh-fucker ya 'blow', like homos w/bombs strapped to the chest- i kno it was an open callout...but i was askin' for vets/ ill splatter-ya-set, ya 'diamond' scripts are in 'cubic pair'- after-this-text, u wither away like bill cosby's pubic hair/ play n' connect, never seen a verse dummer than yours- Im playin wid a vet?nah, ya vocal chords'll get cum like a whore/ |
Daubs has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-01-05 05:28 PM.
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You couldnt be head over heels above me if u were named pipe-dream..
And un-fucks verses dont frighten me when i say bennys make I scream.. (ice cream) Damn man your cool, like i been fuckin with the fridge-cable.. Im swimming with the big fish, unfuck still aint even width-able.. The only way un-fucks nasty and mean, is when we mention his breath.. And I aint talking chess terms when I leave his reality checked.. Your talented?, keep bendin the truth,its time he got his facts-straight.. And you got straight fire, even your sig replaces you for an ash-tray!! Ima take out all your foe, shouldnt be difficult, you only have two-friends.. And you "rep uk to the fullest", yet your names intimate with the U.N.. If needed: Bar 1: Pipedream is like half pipes n shit & His address is benneuk@hotmail.com > Bennys is an ice cream place, click. Bar 2: Swimming widths and name play. Bar 3: Rippin on his crew Bar 4: Check his gorrillaz sig Bar 5: UN-Fuck, get it? Dont get anything else, dont vote or pm me!! |
This was feedback posted for un-fuck-widable
Not gonna vote......but good battle.
Un fuck Get rid of the "/".Nice multis. Daubs I don't know man....it's just seems my style is rubbbin on you.LOL.I ain't sayin ya on my dick.DOn't get it twisted ,...but nice verse posted. Anyone can win here. |
Ummm,,,
your style, its the same as my other battles style! safe. Up................ |
uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...........vote an i will rtf
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This was feedback posted for Daubs
Good battle...
But Daubs merked him I wont vote tho, just to piss you guys off :love: |
I am like the white version of Jim Carrey :)
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Did i mention.
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . I hate you? |
Thats a shame, because I really love you Daubs.
And did I mention, seals are gay? |
I must have missed that mate.
But still you shoulda voted :cussing: |
Im a lazy good for nothing, however, deadsexy, man :thumbup:
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wtf^^^^lol uppin....................................
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voten 4 un-fuck-wibable
my vote goes to him from his punch's and flow just come 2gether like
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wow your gay^.....................................
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Voted For: un-fuck-widable
Flows:-UNF- Deterioration, ya face disturbed from the rhythm in lines- cuz only time ya 'flippin' bars' is to get on a 'ride'/ u started off well using nice words to start off this battle...u hav used a lot of vocabulary skills at the start..nice opening Punches: Daubs Damn man your cool, like i been fuckin with the fridge-cable.. Im swimming with the big fish, unfuck still aint even width-able.. Pretty nice wordplay but i dont think the benneuk@hotmail.com has anything to do but some of wordplay done by daubs wasn't brought hard enough.... The best punches by -UNF-: ill splatter-ya-set, ya 'diamond' scripts are in 'cubic pair'- after-this-text, u wither away like bill cosby's pubic hair/ The worst punch by -UNF-: muh-fucker ya 'blow', like homos w/bombs strapped to the chest- i kno it was an open callout...but i was askin' for vets/ The best Punch by Daubs: You couldnt be head over heels above me if u were named pipe-dream.. And un-fucks verses dont frighten me when i say bennys make I scream.. (ice cream) Worst Punch by Daubs: Your talented?, keep bendin the truth,its time he got his facts-straight.. And you got straight fire, even your sig replaces you for an ash-tray!! Best Punch Overall in this battle: daubs ur by, so we kno ya feelin my flow- plus robbin' 'eminem cds' only time ya 'stealin' the 'show'/ But overall i think that unf had much more harder punches with great power into the wordplay.... daubs had some very nice punches and vocab skills weere great but i just wasnt quite feelin the wordplay but nice battle yo....very close one... Vote: -UNF- |
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battle me if u think u the bigger better man...come on.....-unf- will set it up...crew votes allowed and all the usual house rules......6 lines u down? |
Voted For: Daubs
You couldnt be head over heels above me if u were named pipe-dream.. And un-fucks verses dont frighten me when i say bennys make I scream.. (ice cream) 5...played concept really and the pipe dream shit wasn't all that clever. Damn man your cool, like i been fuckin with the fridge-cable.. Im swimming with the big fish, unfuck still aint even width-able.. 6...clever wordplay in this bar, nice punch. The only way un-fucks nasty and mean, is when we mention his breath.. And I aint talking chess terms when I leave his reality checked.. 6...nice punch, but chess lines are getting played now. Your talented?, keep bendin the truth,its time he got his facts-straight.. And you got straight fire, even your sig replaces you for an ash-tray!! 7...LoL!! decent personal punch, had me laughin. Ima take out all your foe, shouldnt be difficult, you only have two-friends.. And you "rep uk to the fullest", yet your names intimate with the U.N.. 7...OUCH!! this was a fuckin nice personal punch. OVERALL: 31/50 Deterioration, ya face disturbed from the rhythm in lines- cuz only time ya 'flippin' bars' is to get on a 'ride'/ 5...this was weak, the concept was gay and the delivery wasn't good. daubs ur by, so we kno ya feelin my flow- plus robbin' 'eminem cds' only time ya 'stealin' the 'show'/ 6...played concept but an ok spin on it and still funny muh-fucker ya 'blow', like homos w/bombs strapped to the chest- i kno it was an open callout...but i was askin' for vets/ 7...basic delivery really, but it cracked me up with the 2nd line ill splatter-ya-set, ya 'diamond' scripts are in 'cubic pair'- after-this-text, u wither away like bill cosby's pubic hair/ 7...HOLY SHIT!!! LMAO!!! dope punch. play n' connect, never seen a verse dummer than yours- Im playin wid a vet?nah, ya vocal chords'll get cum like a whore/ 5...weak closer, disappointing cuz the concept was ok, but punch for it was wack. OVERALL: 30/50 close battle, both had a couple of shit lines and a couple of real funny ass lines, but in the end daubs wins it cuz his crap lines weren't as shit as un-fuck-widable's V/ - Daubs RTF!!! plz on my marvjay battle.......links in my siggy. |
Yeah, il rtf tommorow man.........................
up, and lol at bizzare. |
Voted For: Daubs
You couldnt be head over heels above me if u were named pipe-dream.. And un-fucks verses dont frighten me when i say bennys make I scream.. (ice cream) meh, okay Damn man your cool, like i been fuckin with the fridge-cable.. Im swimming with the big fish, unfuck still aint even width-able.. weak The only way un-fucks nasty and mean, is when we mention his breath.. And I aint talking chess terms when I leave his reality checked.. almost Your talented?, keep bendin the truth,its time he got his facts-straight.. And you got straight fire, even your sig replaces you for an ash-tray!! meh, played Ima take out all your foe, shouldnt be difficult, you only have two-friends.. And you "rep uk to the fullest", yet your names intimate with the U.N.. an aight closer Deterioration, ya face disturbed from the rhythm in lines- cuz only time ya 'flippin' bars' is to get on a 'ride'/ meh, u flipped this shit daubs ur by, so we kno ya feelin my flow- plus robbin' 'eminem cds' only time ya 'stealin' the 'show'/ okay muh-fucker ya 'blow', like homos w/bombs strapped to the chest- i kno it was an open callout...but i was askin' for vets/ nope ill splatter-ya-set, ya 'diamond' scripts are in 'cubic pair'- after-this-text, u wither away like bill cosby's pubic hair/ ... play n' connect, never seen a verse dummer than yours- Im playin wid a vet?nah, ya vocal chords'll get cum like a whore/ okay not really liking both verses.. but Daubs took this one here punches were a harder, both structures were aight here, & the flow was blah.. UNF, work on ur punches a little more, one of them was okay, but the rest were garbage, so elevate more.. |
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This was feedback posted for Daubs
hahahaha my boi daubs took this EZ.......man checkin polls g'luck homie
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This was feedback posted for un-fuck-widable
muh-fucker ya 'blow', like homos w/bombs strapped to the chest-
i kno it was an open callout...but i was askin' for vets/ LMAO ^ Nice.... uppin this for faaaaaaaam.... |
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Voted For: Daubs
Deterioration, ya face disturbed from the rhythm in lines- cuz only time ya 'flippin' bars' is to get on a 'ride'/ ^^^Played.....2/10 daubs ur by, so we kno ya feelin my flow- plus robbin' 'eminem cds' only time ya 'stealin' the 'show'/ ^^NO...this is whack..a newbish punch...1/10 muh-fucker ya 'blow', like homos w/bombs strapped to the chest- i kno it was an open callout...but i was askin' for vets/ ^^Hmm...coulda been better...3/10 ill splatter-ya-set, ya 'diamond' scripts are in 'cubic pair'- after-this-text, u wither away like bill cosby's pubic hair/ ^^OK...dawg..how you know about Cosby's pubic hair?..ewww....2/10 play n' connect, never seen a verse dummer than yours- Im playin wid a vet?nah, ya vocal chords'll get cum like a whore/ ^^No....2/10 Bad.C'mon man.Ya flow was ite...had some multis...but structure sucked.Get rid of the "/".Makes it look newbish.And your punches...man....they were bad man.Upp your creativity up.None of those lines had creativity.All of them were geniric "you couldn;t do this or be this if you....".It's Ok to have that approach for a couple bars..but not a whole verse.And where the fuck are your personals? You couldnt be head over heels above me if u were named pipe-dream.. And un-fucks verses dont frighten me when i say bennys make I scream.. (ice cream) ^^Nice personal/punch here..creative too...7/10 Damn man your cool, like i been fuckin with the fridge-cable.. Im swimming with the big fish, unfuck still aint even width-able.. ^^Nice nameplay....6/10 The only way un-fucks nasty and mean, is when we mention his breath.. And I aint talking chess terms when I leave his reality checked.. ^^Hmm...set-up was horrible,chess line?.nah...4/10 Your talented?, keep bendin the truth,its time he got his facts-straight.. And you got straight fire, even your sig replaces you for an ash-tray!! ^^OK....6/10 Ima take out all your foe, shouldnt be difficult, you only have two-friends.. And you "rep uk to the fullest", yet your names intimate with the U.N.. ^^Good....6/10 Ok.....good verse.Flow was ite.Structure was ite though you could get rid of some fillers and hypens.Punches is where you shined.As opposed to unfuck...you had personals in your verse.The best bar was ur opener where you ripped on his address..a creative punch.My opinion..a one-sided battle Vote-Daubs RTF BELOW http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=203772 |
Voted For: Daubs
good shit here.....personals were very good in this battle...my vote goes to daubs for better flow and personals...he also had harder punches.....unfukwidable dont put /'s at the end of ur lines...fucks up the structure...other than that it was cool.... |
Voted For: Daubs
no hate, im cool with both ya'll too, so word up homies thought daubs took this one, unf, ya didn't really have concentrated punches, and by that, i mean focused on daubs.......uh, some were just too random to be effective, like you were just freestyling for kicks infront of a crowd, not really good disses, not bad though, eminem line wasn't bad, just didn't think you kept it consistent....but keep up, ya been elevating pretty good man, word up daubs, not the best from you home boy, but enough....seemed kinda weak, and lacking enthusiam and creativity...tryna get too complex with your wording and concepts, is what it looks like....dont' force shit man, it will only strain the verse.....but not bad, liked the first line and the sig one, good shit......keep up to both v/daubs, rtf on this http://community.rapverse.com/showb...d=1#post2383335 |
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