Problem Child vs CataclyzM-I-C
 

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iight those da rulez u spit 1st :shoot:

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[QUOTE=Problem Child]Battle Rules:

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iight those da rulez u spit 1st :shoot:

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Check in by: 08-04-05 at 06:26 PM

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iight those da rulez u spit 1st :shoot:

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Check in by: 08-04-05 at 06:26 PM [/QUOTE]

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iight those da rulez u spit 1st :shoot:

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CataclyzM-i-C has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-01-05 06:29 PM.

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iight those da rulez u spit 1st :shoot:

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p.s if u don't spit 1st within 2 dayz its a automatic win fo me iight peace :shoot:

remeber

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iight those da rulez u spit 1st

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iiighttttt...

when it comes to gun fire, ill let ammo fly threw ya/
cus i rip problem children, even that white kid junior
ill hit u in the hip with the guage n let ya whole thigh dangle/
do it like the motion picture..son..i'll use ya bow tie to strangle
you got about as many wins as the cincinatti bangels/
lil nigga dont wanna tangle he knos ill leave his body mangled
if u da problem then u can call me A.I./
this kid needs a str8 eye cuz he raps like a fuckin gay guy
u aint the real problem so stop hatin on cass/
the hustler wins this battle so get ur tung out his ass
im from mass, where da hood burns our trash/
u'll ignite asap cuz ur barz is str8 gas
u cud never b me, my barz are 2 fuckin wild/
im sonnin dis child so he mite bite daddys style


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Problem Child has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-02-05 10:59 AM.

im gonna~MURDA~u ya~COWARD~cuz im wanna those
crazy niggaz that rep~BROWARD~//listen CataclyzM-I-C
u bout 2 get rip see sumthing~SLICK~ill bus yo~shit~//
Dawg u tryin 2 battle me ur really~FUNNY~u look like a fuckin fruity~bunnyz~//cuz im gonna be tha champ so.. u gone~WORSHIP~ME~//cuz i aint a pussy bitch like u
wit da~HIV~//like a boss i got yo mamma~on~LOCK~
try fuck wit me i spray ya wit da~GLOCK~//so im jus
gonna end it~RIGHT~HERE~NOW~so ill see u later in tha~STREETS~U FUCKIN~CLOWN~//

Voted For: Problem Child

Alright to be striaght up this was one close battle but only one man can win and in my opinion its striaght up Problem Child Now M-I-C had some dope multi's but didn't add up to P{

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^^^ wow !
lol... uppin

Voted For: CataclyzM-i-C

flow-ok....problem child had a very newbish structure.Get rid of this ~ shit~.And don't write your verses in a paragraph form.

Punches-Both need some wordlplay and metas...but i'll give it to CataclyzM...cause problem child punches were newbish.

Personals-Neither and I suggest you guys both work on this aspect of battlin as it is important.

Multis-Neither....and once again...I suggest you both work on this.That basic rhyme scheme went outta style looong ago.

Originality- Cataclym ..though his lines weren't nutin special.The other lacked everything.

Vote-CatackyzM-I-C

Voted For: CataclyzM-i-C

WEAK BATTLE

Punches- m-i-c becuze they were more effective actually made since and ur opponent didnt eally have one good punch he had to much self glory

Flow- m-i-c becuze ur flow was aight but it did fall off every once in a while but ur opponents wassnt god at all urs wasnt consistant at all

personals- niether both didnt come wit any good personals work on dat

complexity-niether u both were pretty basic wit this one

multis- niether both need some work on that

closer- m-i-c urs was aight copared to ur opponents it killed it better flow to it and actually a punch

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iight uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!fo votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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ayo man u got mad lyrics and vocab just fix ur structure mayne thats all!!!!!!

Voted For: CataclyzM-i-C

omfg Problem ur structure is horrible man, u must fix that dude or else u will not have good punches or flow, its a big issue man. Catalyz ur punches werent great but they were enough for the win so V/Catalyz for better punches, flow, and structure

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iight thz's fo tha advice :thumbup:!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

lol wow...u wudda been MURDERED by now...lol 2 bad these ppl dont kno how to explain shyt !

This was feedback posted for CataclyzM-i-C
 

wow thats awful amn u suck terribly...man.......wow

^^ lol...i no why u said that...its all good
uppinnnnnnn

^^^^^^^^^ uppin ^^^^^^^^

Voted For: CataclyzM-i-C

Cata took this, personals hit him, punches were good.......seemed like Prob was jus puttin words together that rhymed, punches didnt hit and jus need to overall use better punches and step up ya game....good shit though, both was good buh i gota go wit Cata

^^^upppppiiinnnnn^^^

Voted For: CataclyzM-i-C

Structure-Cataclyz M-i-c defff... felt the flow better on this one, problem child ur lines were to stretched out man.

Multis-Problem child, cataclyz didnt really have any so easy take for problem child

Punches-Cataclyzm took this one, becuz problem no hate man but ur lines was weak didnt feel them at all....cataclyz was fresh and tighT

Personals-Cataclyz he had more clearer ones that came out to me, problem child up on those

Vocab-None had any vocab at all, biggest word i seee is cincinatti lol and that is a citty....get real guys both you up on vocab fo real

Originality-Cataclyz problem child ur rhymes were weak wasnt original at all...no hate though.......
V/CataclyzM-I-C

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Voted For: CataclyzM-i-C

when it comes to gun fire, ill let ammo fly threw ya/
cus i rip problem children, even that white kid junior
^^no punch in here....0/10
ill hit u in the hip with the guage n let ya whole thigh dangle/
do it like the motion picture..son..i'll use ya bow tie to strangle
^^no punch..you need to start dissin...0/10
you got about as many wins as the cincinatti bangels/
lil nigga dont wanna tangle he knos ill leave his body mangled
^^stop talking about yourself...diss....0/10
if u da problem then u can call me A.I./
this kid needs a str8 eye cuz he raps like a fuckin gay guy
^^too basic...just stating he gay?.....1/10
u aint the real problem so stop hatin on cass/
the hustler wins this battle so get ur tung out his ass
^^how is he hatin on cass wiht that name?....2/10
im from mass, where da hood burns our trash/
u'll ignite asap cuz ur barz is str8 gas
^^no......too basic....2/10
u cud never b me, my barz are 2 fuckin wild/
im sonnin dis child so he mite bite daddys style
^^basic....2/10

Far too basic here.At the starting of the verse...you were bassically talking about yourself.1st bar-you rip children.....2nd bar-you'll bow tie something....3rd bar-leave his body starngled...and when you finnaly did start dissing...you were too basic.You gotta have complexity

im gonna~MURDA~u ya~COWARD~cuz im wanna those
crazy niggaz that rep~BROWARD~//
^^OK...we don't care about what yo rep...0/10
listen CataclyzM-I-C
u bout 2 get rip see sumthing~SLICK~ill bus yo~shit~//
^^no punch....0/10
Dawg u tryin 2 battle me ur really~FUNNY~u look like a fuckin fruity~bunnyz~//
^^basic as fuck.....1/10
cuz im gonna be tha champ so.. u gone~WORSHIP~ME~//
cuz i aint a pussy bitch like u
wit da~HIV~//
^^basic....1/10
like a boss i got yo mamma~on~LOCK~
try fuck wit me i spray ya wit da~GLOCK~//
^^NO punch...1/10
so im jus
gonna end it~RIGHT~HERE~NOW~so ill see u later in tha~STREETS~U FUCKIN~CLOWN~//
^^NO punch...0/10

Ok...first off...structure..fix it.zYou got it all bunched up together in a paragraph.And stop with the "//" and "~".They just make your verse look more newbish.You were self glorifing and being basic worse than the other guy.1st bar-U reppin broward....2nd.-you'll bust on his shit....4th-you the champ and should be worshipped...and a lot more.And the lines that actually dissed were far too basic.

Vote-Cata M-I-C
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^^c'mon.,....don't be a bitch just cause I voted against you..i left feeback for you both...

uppin for the murder of this poor problem child

^^return the favor please...I don't wanna remove that vote now...

^^^^^ uppin 2 end this ^^^^^

damm yo can som1 please end this shyt !

Voted For: CataclyzM-i-C

this was kinda a weak battle in my opinion

Cataclyz - start off with the not so good things. punches and personals. you kinda had a few alright ones but nothing hit really hard. maybe you were holding back. the only real personal i seen in there was the A.I line and that was still pretty weak. you didnt have any real punches. i was disappointed in that after you said that my battle really lacked it. so i was expecting your verse to be full of them. now for the better. your flow was definintely on point. you had a few multis which helped with that. your structure was cool cause it was easy to read and i could figure out tha flow. overall i would give you a 6/10


Problem Child - your name definitely matches your verse. a problem to read. your structure was horrible. man take all those little sign things out. it doesnt make your verse any better. you had no punches or personals in this at all. very weak verse. improve on coming up with some personals or punches. overall 4/10