Macreep vs @.
 

Battle Rules:

8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
Loser gets IP banned

Minimum posts to vote: 1000

Check in by: 08-02-05 at 12:45 AM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

Macreep has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-02-05 12:15 AM.

blah, ill key somthing soonish..gott make some calls.

^^ight....good to know nobody ducking.............

blah...might key my verse soon....

not really worth my effort now are you?

^^^NO....I'm sure I'm not.....just post already :rolleyes: ...I keyed my shit too.

one minute left....I can see it....battle closed....as you didn't check.

@. has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-02-05 12:44 AM.

*gasp*.....falls back in chair and lie on floor in tears.......

keying my half assed verse now.










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Its like.........

Voted For: @.

lol... wow pretty one sided

@
you wont get away with denying you got fucked...like calkun in court
this battle's pausing your mind like im holding your thoughts
Didnt really rhyme
Your strolling above you depth, You sure you can swim
even if you took the D away from the breeze,you still wouldnt WIN
lol
cause your punch attempts are dead like a cemetarys crew
the closet Ill get to being wak..is if i stand next to you
Decent
macreep, its about time you relise your not what you think
The truth will be exposed at the end of this link
This line is simply a filler
Decent ..liked the link..lol at the closer

Macreep
Ysdat swears he owns me,but I'ma merk him like a nerd versus monster
He living in his own fant-tits-see(fantasy) like chicks raising they shirts at concerts
No..weak opener
He spiitin shit,that people love,like Ysdat is another medicated sage
his rhymes are about as raw as food cooked by a dedicated maid
No
and i hear he like to wear fitted too,well he still nothing but a map-facility
cause by knowing he wears fitted tells me that's his only cap-abilities(capabilty)
decent
he ducked Cali countless times,like amount of time he jerked dicks,so i'm ringing his bells at will
This dude proud to strut round the forums,as a moderator,cause it tell his skill
No

Overall vote @.
easy win for ys macreep came weak and had no really hard punchlines...@.had a nice personal and some okay punchline.

This was feedback posted for Macreep
 

YOU LOST...but i dont feel like voting.................

foo, vote.. i dont want this open at the top a my screen fo r ever.

This was feedback posted for @.
 

You lost kid. now proceed to shut your mouth :bored:

This was feedback posted for @.
 

Lmfao. O my god my sides hurt. Ow.................

wtf is this?..............d/r........................

omg.

dr??

you balaintantly lost...your really that fucking stupid huh?

Wow at him saying DR when I didn't even vote. How retarded.

Voted For: @.

Well... Its rather even... so heres the break down... Imma do it bar by bar breakdown.. soo plain and simple.. its gonna be Bar1= shit like that..

MACREEP=

Bar1 = meh alright opener.. nothin special.. the fantasy part wasnt amazing but it was alright 6/10
Bar2 = ummm.... nothin special.. nothin amazing.. im sorry.. its kinda weak... 5/10
Bar3 = its goin downhill... stop with the weak try n play on words... it doesnt work well when your repeating and repeating.... 5/10
Bar4 = weak closer.... wow moderator.. pretty weak concept im sorry.. 5/10..

Soo outta 40 you get 21... which is basically just over 50%.... Plain and simple stop with the alternate word meaning shit.. its weak wordplay and you dont use it correctly... its not that good..... Your personals.. LACKING... your HARD punches... LACKING... plain and simple the battle skill in this 8 lines was LACKING.....

@.

Bar1 = not a bad opener... the holding ur thoughts part.. kinda played.. sorry... 7/10
Bar2 = Its alright.. the first line.. not that good... nothin special.. 2nd line better play on the word.... overall better line... 7/10
Bar3 = Hmm WEAK... sorry.. it just doesnt work.. the whole wack thing.. played as fuck.. the first line... sorry.. weak as well.. this was a weak bar.... 4/10
Bar4 = ITs alright... too bad u used ur mod powers to change what he said.. plain and simple that shit gets u a 3/10 on this... because its a faulty personal... and really the whole link rhymescheme with the actual link = weak now..

SOO outta 40 you get 21 hmm tied with points and percentages... THOUGH... you shall be granted the win... on the basis you had better punches. than macreep...

Sooo winner.. in this close battle.. which was CLEARLY lacking in all categories... goes to @. aka Ysdat..

STEP UP... this is for an IP ban.. i expected something amazing... this is sub-par...

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yeh, i never done text so ..........

Im srickly topical.

thanks for the vote.

This was feedback posted for Macreep
 

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This was feedback posted for @.
 

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Voted For: @.

wow this was very one sided @ u merked him mad good u had way better pinches and everythin basicly way better u got this for sure the closer with the link.....lol.....now thats funny.....lol......very creative man liked it alot and the personals were mad good too......ma didnt have enuff of it so he dont get tha vote u need to elevate alot man but my v/ goes to @ for havin a better vote......
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PLZ RTF WIT A HONEST VOTE IN MY BATTLES IN MY SIG.....

can yall hurry up and close this shit







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Voted For: @.

Yo Believe it Or not this was almost a tight battle, Unlike what i thought it was going to be. But @ Came with the Harder Punches, and he had the Better Punches, Aswell Better Flow and Structure.. Macreep Yah Verse wasnt that bad, But It wasnt good Enough to Take the Win.. Yah structure was fucked.. And Yah Flow fell off at points, You had some aight Punches.. And for what personals you had were pretty weak..

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thanks for the vote, just remember im a topical head, so text is blah to me.

Voted For: @.

Aii

Flow- Goes To @ BasicallY its very Easy To Tell Whne you READ the versus Like they should be read @'z Words were Matched like Syllable for syllable In his verse so that swhy his flow was better in this battle

Punchez- Aii This was the one sided area and it looked knda wild bcuz Macreep dropped some Punche but they were Jus ............................Weak if you ask me they werent on point and the concept was mad played in his punchez so I gave the punchez to @

Personals Now this was close but The link That @ used was crazily Usefull and very Amazin to find out to me anyway but hey Mareep had some Personals but they were jus average personals that usual people find out by lookin at battle stats and profiles so nuttin was original so @ takes the Personals area to

Multies- Noone of you really used any multies So this area cannot be determined in this battle

Vocab- Well Some of the biggest and most defonic words that were in this battle came from Macreep so he takes this area with Some minor words but yet it was good use of vocab

Originality- The verse with the most originality was @'s verse only because Macreep had some Played concept in his verse and that made his verse look well ....Unoriginal lol basically it explained itself ............so @ takes this area as well

Overall I Think That @ Takes this battle as You can Tell from my explanation Above

PLEASE RTf in my battle link in my sig PLEASE