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Wayne vs Rile1
Battle Rules:
6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-02-05 at 01:53 PM Must drop verse in 180 minutes after check in. |
Wayne has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-02-05 10:57 AM.
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dude why unlimited?? u sed 12 si im going 12
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Rile1 has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-02-05 11:13 AM.
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omfg why did I even battle u, ur fake, and ur stupid, u wanna sue?
cuz when pigs can fly..just is the time u will make "ima king" true what are u gonna do? ur homeless now and always smokin bongs so saying Detroit stand up, just proves crowds dont like ur songs I have to touch u with tongs, ur dirty as hell, bitch getta damn job dude u only open up a can of worms....to eat them ya nasty slob no time to rob banks man u need to work on the voice u rap with so I get high like the guy in ur avvy........so I cant listen to ur shit fuck this bitch, he cant maintain the right attitude,so he gets pain when u come out of the blue....I catch a fat whale named Wayne hear the rain? gosh im done now and now u lost, u should know Waynes world is confusing and stupid..just like the fucked show u sed 12 dude so thats how much I went |
remember man u said 12 so dont be writing 100 lines and shit
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I'm tha "serial killa" of dis *RAP SHIT*, leavin niggaz in "*CASKETS*", wut u kno about triggaz and *GAT SLIPS* when u ain't *CAP SHIT*::Ya shit's *PLASTIC*, ma shit's tha "grade-A-quality"
I'm spittin bars so hot Nas and "J(Jay-Z)-wanna- follow-me":: You don't need a "life"boat ta float *ontop-of-tha-water* (dead bodies float):: I'm like Powerpuff Girl blankets, cuz I'm *ontop-of-ya-daughter*:: I'm a P.I.M.P. and *I love it*:: Spell it backwards (P.M.I.P.) and dat's u, 'P'ussy 'M'asturbatin *'I'n 'P'ublic*:: I'm straight *BUCKIN' CATS*, and u about ta be tha next *CHUMP I CAP*:: Even "ur boys" were like "Rile1......who tha *FUCK IS DAT*?":: Good *LUCK IN RAP*, cuz believe me it's *needed*:: Ain't no way you're beatin me nigga, cuz I'm *undefeated*::I got u *SLITTIN' YA WRISTS* cuz I got INFAMOUS SPITZ* dat's *GITTIN YA PISSED* like Ike while *HITTIN HIS BITCH* (Tina Turner's husband, Ike abused her)::You're *WISHIN' YOU'RE SICK*, but ain't no way u *WINNIN' DIS SHIT Its over Stay Beating DUMMIES-WITH-EASE, Let The Tek GUMMIE-HIS-KNEES do you really think you RUNNING-THA-STREETS?, (Blew Up Ya House With Ya Kids In It) So I Was (BOMBING-YA-SEEDS), You COMING-TA-ME wanted a battle so i STUNED-YA WITH-FREEZE!!(Freeze is a move thats done on mortal combat yall should know by who)!! *Drops mic* |
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lmfao rotfl...why did I even battle u lol
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stop crying bitccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccc cch
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hahaha im not crying im happy..so much of an easy win lol..gosh u lsot...anyway..upping
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upppppppinnnnnggggg for some god damn votes... I always vote u guys should too
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dammit why dont u people vote?? Front Lines is hella sorry lol...upping
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Voted For: Wayne
Meked him man wayne had better punches they landed harder, rile 1 ur shit was kinda played no hate though........it was just a T.K.O by far Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
^^ hella unexplained vote man.....upping this cuz no one ever frikkin votes
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Voted For: Rile1
okay okay.........decent battle... Rile1: you're lins were funny to me....and your multis were'nt forced either and they went togather really well your punches were mediocre...but your personals fell into place and made up for that...structre was good to Wayne: speaking of structre yours completely sucked......man your shit was everywhere...but you had multi's but you were doing more self glorafication than anything fam...you were'nt punching Rile1 at all... my vote goes to Rile1 both emcees keep ya head up RTF tha favor in my sig or this vote will be removed....i mean it.... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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omfg why odnt people vote man?? so stupid..vote dammit!!!
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fuck dude.....can u people please vote!!! omfg Fl is dead over here too?? lol
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dude why dont people frikking vote on here? I swear to god I vote so much and never get voted back..wtf?
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Voted For: Rile1
I'm tha "serial killa" of dis *RAP SHIT*, leavin niggaz in "*CASKETS*", wut u kno about triggaz and *GAT SLIPS* when u ain't *CAP SHIT*::Ya shit's *PLASTIC*, ma shit's tha "grade-A-quality" I'm spittin bars so hot Nas and "J(Jay-Z)-wanna- follow-me":: You don't need a "life"boat ta float *ontop-of-tha-water* (dead bodies float):: I'm like Powerpuff Girl blankets, cuz I'm *ontop-of-ya-daughter*:: I'm a P.I.M.P. and *I love it*:: Spell it backwards (P.M.I.P.) and dat's u, 'P'ussy 'M'asturbatin *'I'n 'P'ublic*:: I'm straight *BUCKIN' CATS*, and u about ta be tha next *CHUMP I CAP*:: Even "ur boys" were like "Rile1......who tha *FUCK IS DAT*?":: Good *LUCK IN RAP*, cuz believe me it's *needed*:: Ain't no way you're beatin me nigga, cuz I'm *undefeated*::I got u *SLITTIN' YA WRISTS* cuz I got INFAMOUS SPITZ* dat's *GITTIN YA PISSED* like Ike while *HITTIN HIS BITCH* (Tina Turner's husband, Ike abused her)::You're *WISHIN' YOU'RE SICK*, but ain't no way u *WINNIN' DIS SHIT Ok...next time...fix your structure.I can't break down your verse because of it.Write it like how Rile1 wrote it.Stop with all the ("),(*), and Capiltal words outta no-where.And 2nd..you seem to just be saying shit just because it rhymed.Work on your punches.You had too much self-glorifing.And your still rapping about Tina Turner's husband and MAsterbation?..C'mon...get creativitie. omfg why did I even battle u, ur fake, and ur stupid, u wanna sue? cuz when pigs can fly..just is the time u will make "ima king" true ^^when pigs fly?...played since the 80's. what are u gonna do? ur homeless now and always smokin bongs so saying Detroit stand up, just proves crowds dont like ur songs ^^OK.....4/10 I have to touch u with tongs, ur dirty as hell, bitch getta damn job dude u only open up a can of worms....to eat them ya nasty slob ^^No punch..so what if he nasty?....2/10 no time to rob banks man u need to work on the voice u rap with so I get high like the guy in ur avvy........so I cant listen to ur shit ^^meh...coulda been better....2/10 fuck this bitch, he cant maintain the right attitude,so he gets pain when u come out of the blue....I catch a fat whale named Wayne ^^Ok......3/10 hear the rain? gosh im done now and now u lost, u should know Waynes world is confusing and stupid..just like the fucked show ^^OK......3/10 A buch of mediocre punches here.You had structure and flow.WAAAAY ahead of Wayne's.But some of your lines sucked.Like that pigs fly one.Reason you gettin my vote is because of punches and personals with no self glorifing.But next time...step it up a bit. Vote-Rile 1 RTF http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=203256 ^^c'mon..this was a long battle...return the favor... |
^^ yeah Ill hit that up...but I guess no one understands witty punches lol
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OMFG why cant u people vote on this but u can on other battles? lol
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wow..... if u ppl would vote I would return an honest one but whenever I vote on urs u guys never vote on mine...
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This was feedback posted for Rile1
y0 tHaT sHiT wUz FiRe SuN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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You guys never fucking vote....bastards lol...please vote
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I swear to god why dont people vote?? ima vote on like 50 and see if anyone votes
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Voted For: Wayne
v/wayne.....he owned the mic...... YOU SEE HIM DROP IT! OMFG!!!!!! Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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wtf?? hella D/r votes yo.....upping this
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this nigga a bitch damn people never vote and you call them d/r votes and you were up dumbass
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This was feedback posted for Rile1
Rile got this, an plus i cant stand reading a verse by this Wayne character, its so messed up it aint even funny.
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Voted For: Wayne
Rile1 u had a basic flow no real good personal some played lines or should i say weak hits noting stood ouot in yaverse really no quoteables but a average verse... wayne ya multis was good, flow was aight, punches was aight plus u had a couple of viscious attacts u was more creative and had a better approuch all around i thought u did better decent battle fellas |
Voted For: Wayne
Rile1 owned Nice shit Wayne...... |
Voted For: Wayne
wayne...ya structure was bad, but ya multies and metas was killin it mayne, that dummies with ease line was nice...that punch wa s hard rile1-ya structure was betta but ya lines were played and boring....the ima king tru line was bad same witht he bong line....it was played and not createive...elevate v/wayne |
Voted For: Wayne
Yo i think that this is the easiest shit i ever voted on...wayne straight merked the man...flow and vocab and everything was better...rile 1 u are good but ur lines werrr kinda long...yo waynr return tha favor and vote on ma battles against shadow,unrestricted,and grimreapa...holla back at shyea boy |
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