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The Meaning of the Music/Drakel*OSB Productions
Drakel OSB as i swell up with wisdom, im devloping visions striving beyond hell with a rebellious ambition cant sell us tradition, im impelling with rhythm taking whats given, and excelling every decision a musicians nutrition, feeds off lifes actions entwined and my compassion for rhymes seeds from the passion of time just imagine the has beens, i take action and harness this fame using my views for the music, i'll never tarnish the game target the vain; a blade full of ink and the power a candle wields my mind is at war, and the page is the battlefield i handle the real, you think i'd have heaps of enemies but im the surreal ideal, cause im at peace with the melody dont tell me to keep trying, go back in the hole you crawled through cant hear what im saying? well i'll just pump up the volume my lyrics will go the distance, my pesistence insists it cause the music fills me with more life than the start of existence mind rises from the clutter, filled with thoughts of music this angelic state isn't luck... music brought me to it brace through it all, resist the fall, and climb above Through the clouds, peace rains down from a flying dove the rhythm transforms my soul, my thoughts grow wings we've stormed our goal... through this atlering fall to spring my hands begin to sing, fluid movements create life soothing... at the same time our truth is choosing to save lives so i take my decisions, applying skill and precision Bringin the vision of true hip hop.. to the willing its given filling ideals with rainbows, living days full of confidence day dreams may seem surreal, but the real thing is obvious and as we continue to grow, my words blossom farther through venues with snow... through drops of water passed to sons and daughters, the meaning never crumbles our poetry is honored.... sending tingles, tensing muscles Try and apply this sunshine but July is cloudy, Though I stay flying as high as the skies allow me, Liking the vibe, showing how much heart does it take, To catch a glimpse of Elysium and a sparkling lake, Marketing this? Nah... I'm just harnessing fate, My writing arm doesn't break when i'm arcing my fist, Dreams chasing me, when my presence starts to exist, Just an untold story of the shark and the fish, Fate lyes in the hands of only those who grasp it, Passion burning like a phoenix, I rose from ashes, Rocking the landscape as soon as the boulder crashes, Lose the flame? I'm everlasting when i'm holdin matches, A mosaic? Nah, my lyrics are in appropriate places, Its nature to me, spanning from the coast to the acres, Potions with vapors, floating up, misting, beleive, An ocean of haters, and were just the little fish in the sea... ________________________________ Feed1 Feed2 |
fuck yeah!
Fate lyes in the hands of only those who grasp it, Passion burning like a phoenix, I rose from ashes ^im high when im flying, X WING FIGHTERS |
i like it a little
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this was a nice drop....you both had the flow on point and i loved the creativity and the kinda deepness of this drop......vocab was real nice...i liked the second verse where both of you each worte a line and then linked it.....overall good drop 7/10
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word............
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wow......this had emotinon like a mother
flow was like roses......man this was good 9/10,,,from me...keep it up |
Nothing Here But Poetry Heads Man In Rap This Would Be Straight Garbage For Real Yo But How Did So Many Poetry Jockeys Get On One Place Doe No Attitude All Soft Jelly Junk I Got To Read No Rapper In Their Right Mind Would Waste Time With This Right Here
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.........you suck homie...deal with it.........and my open mic was'nt poetry
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hmm, well since i've seen your shit before, im not really offended go listen to some 50 cent or something, and dont waste my time. |
liked this, flow was good, emotion was good, imagery was ok, vocab was good, both did a good job, keep it up
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Hey with this garbage you can’t be sliding in lace
Bitch find a hiding place to have you residing is a disgrace Being soft like melon is a boss felon you under arrest Got your plan buffed with handcuffs why blunder mess? Rhymes all poetry rap won’t have you slap your face punk Then grab your crew |
^^^^^^^^^^^i dont get it
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he sux don't worry bout him....
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You Just Got Merked You Stupid Fuck Now Do You Get It?
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fuck u man i wasnt startin beef bitch damn
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Stop starting beef in my open mic.
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biggity bump...
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yo i liked this alot sick multis nice structure sick flow good vocab good everything nice drop overall 9/10 for sure.......put it in audio id love it.....yo rtf on my link in my sig yo.............1
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uppin..............!
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wicked flow....
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Wow...
I know I say this everytime you guys drop, but I mean it everytime. THIS IS THE BEST SHIT I'VE SEEN SO FAR FROM EACH OF YOU! Emotion was coming out the ass...Vocab was amazing, imagery was dope as shit, and did I mention the emotion?? Drakel: target the vain; a blade full of ink and the power a candle wields my mind is at war, and the page is the battlefield Im loving that there man. Only word for it is amazing. Seriously. OSB: Potions with vapors, floating up, misting, beleive, An ocean of haters, and were just the little fish in the sea... Amazing dude. What a way to finish it. OM of August without a doubt. |
seriously, this is the best OM on the front page.
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damn nice piece, drakel you kinda lost me with all the ion's and the vocab way to much really loses the proper word, ya know try n use witty words that are small n play around more wit em, im trying to use metas more often in my lines you should try it, dont try to be so poetic with vocab its good but it loses the flow way to much, stucture was good and flow was good. OMB that was good as well nice words nice rhyme scheme really good half of you, nice emotion good imagery from both, very good shot.
rtf in my new om Lost memories |
^ i dont mind getting constructive feed....but yours would apply if i was writing this for 12 year olds.
witty words that are small and play around with them? wtf?....where did you exaclty get lost....cause all that flowed, seriously, your whole feed made no sense man. bump. |
target the vain; a blade full of ink and the power a candle wields
my mind is at war, and the page is the battlefield That was good, as was the closer. Both of you did your thing, and may your shlongs stay sharp. Not much I can say that the others haven't said. nice flow and imagery, multis and perhaps even a random loaf of bread. This was a good collab, as usual. |
why thank you..
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Why, thank you for the shrimp casserole. My wife did very much enjoy it...SUCCULENT!
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..........wow shit evrythnig was on point here sick multis great flow good structure evrything drakel u neva cease to amaze me!DAMN hot shit this is a great om ima nominate it for hall of fame
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this was prettygood it was a lot of imagery in this joint and both of the flows were on point so overall i give it a 9.5/10 it was real thorough wit plenty of metas in there. Maybe a lil advanced for some peeps around here and thats why they aint understand alot of it. but overall it was a strong drop yall came wit that fiya.1....
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yay.......good stuff
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sleeeeeeeept on
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hey yall this was all right but let me drop this little piece up in here
When a girl give up cake in a hot relation its like a state Of intoxication you drunk off kisses the junk reminisces Your brain try have sex before she grab the kotex // Cats post scorn clout with a bad voice They sound like a worn out sad horse You don’t sit in saddles during legit battles Misfits can only rattle microphones you don’t straddle Funk like I do |
good drop drakel....had a sick flow.....good vocab.....nice stucture...good imagery....everything was hott.....i was feelin this 1...rtf...on any in ma sig
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good OM drakel. the flow was good but sketchy sometimes. so work on that. your topic was sorta original but dealt with well. u had some good imagery and emotion throughout it. you impressed me on this one, being as its one of the first things ive enjoyed that uve written. good drop. the rhyming was good, sometimes forced but it flowed well. so good job on that also. keep dropping and hit up my OM White Flag.
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word, thanks fo-feed
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this was a nice drop, i was feelin how yall switch off and on, in the verse. i might have to borrow that in a project im doin. but neway there was plenty of good bars in here so i couldnt really pick a fav one. but yall both came hard wit good flow. even tho it was purple and pink i give it a 9/10 lol. RETURN the favor holla at the sig
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Drkale, where you be at son?
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yo OSB u gettin another OM done???
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attending to my patients yo, have to keep the business up |
You should make your new name that. Dr. Kale. Paging Dr. Kale.
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