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%%%% 08-02-05 11:26 PM

Reflekt vs Pressence
 
Battle Rules:

8- Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No d/r
No Hate
No bullshit

4-1KO
3-0KO

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-02-05 at 11:56 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

System 08-02-05 11:28 PM

Pressence has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-02-05 11:28 PM.

System 08-02-05 11:31 PM

Reflekt has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-02-05 11:31 PM.

Reflekt 08-02-05 11:39 PM

how can any of us have d/r's when we're both new?

like fat joe i guess u could say that you bringin it back
even the first 3 letters of ur name show that you a thing of the past(pre means before)

u lucky im takin it easy..or i might take the life u livin
ya lyrics still wouldnt make sense if we took pre off the beginning*

im takin it easy on this rookie but i aint duckin attacks
the way i chop ya mouth its cool to say im cuttin you slack

its a big gamble to wanna battle me like youre takin bets
cause your flow is only "mod"erate like youre the one makin threads

*take pre off of his name

%%%% 08-02-05 11:47 PM

talkin bout the W?,well kiddo,i suggest ya stop goin between decks
in battles his losses are automatic,so it explains the 'reflekts'
biggest sheep of RV,ringing up both my ears with the sound "BAAH"
and i'd ussually tell newbs well-come,but HE'D probably say "AAAh"
beatin you is an easy win on the rec.,s' why, you desired like a cash-order
and ya verses are about as deep as where the toddlers splash water
dumbass,thinkin he profound,wit hot nuetron n protons,thinkin nobody know
only reason we don't 'look up to him',cause he might 'try something below'

%%%% 08-03-05 12:05 AM

I hope you know ya bit that mod-erate line from Daz....but s'all good...no reporting here from me.

Problem Child 08-03-05 12:07 AM

Voted For: Pressence

i vote fo pressence had betta flow structure and punchlinez

Reflekt 08-03-05 12:21 AM

that vote will be dq'd for not enough feedback.....

%%%% 08-03-05 12:23 AM

^^^y..........you bit that line...i could PM strobe and then ya lost......

Defined 08-03-05 12:36 AM

Voted For: Reflekt

flow- reflekt ur flow was much better then ur opponents his fell off wquite a few times while urs stayed consistent

punches- tie i feel niether had great punches but both were bout equal on this one nuttin to special from either

personals- reflekt i liked the 2 bars u used about his name they were effective and nice no real good personals by u pre

complexty- niether both need work

multis- again niether

closer- reflekts urs was more effective in my eyes yet both closer were aight i feel reflekts came harder with his ender

%%%% 08-03-05 12:37 AM

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Reflekt 08-03-05 05:31 AM

uppin this..........................................

Yvonne 08-03-05 07:44 AM

Voted For: Pressence

both came up with pretty decent verses..

as for punches pressence u had a lot more than reflekt...ur verse didnt really really flow to me but i guess it was better than ur opponents...and ur structure also gave u a plus on therre..

reflekt...u had only personals which had decent punches...but ur verse was kinna too repetitive...u kept on talik about takin it "easy" and lets be honest u were this close to self glorifyin...reconstructu ur structure brother dont be leavin spaces btw them and u aint always gatta xplain ur verse...i know u trynna heelp the dummies out but u not obbliged to...ya verse was iight but ya need a lil more work....

keep it up both of u...

1 luv

%%%% 08-03-05 01:44 PM

^^^THx......leave a link ya'll..........bump.............

Wicked One 08-03-05 02:23 PM

Voted For: Pressence

Pressence- your verse was pretty good manye...punches were pretty good too..maybe 1 or 2 were weak...but the rest were good...they hit hard...some funny...and they connected very well...structure was good n all easy to read n shit...you also had a nice flow i thought too...so overall-7.0/10...

Reflekt- your verse was aight...punches could have been better they were aight ...but they werent good enough to win this battle ya know...they just didnt hit hard enough...Structure was Blah ...really fix that n all...Flow was aight...but overall- 5.0/10...just elevate manye...

DQ 08-03-05 04:17 PM

Voted For: Pressence

Reflekt

like fat joe i guess u could say that you bringin it back
even the first 3 letters of ur name show that you a thing of the past(pre means before)
^playing off his name could've been done a lil better but still good though

u lucky im takin it easy..or i might take the life u livin
ya lyrics still wouldnt make sense if we took pre off the beginning*
^nice personal right here, well the second line anyway

im takin it easy on this rookie but i aint duckin attacks
the way i chop ya mouth its cool to say im cuttin you slack
^no punch, just self-glorifying

its a big gamble to wanna battle me like youre takin bets
cause your flow is only "mod"erate like youre the one makin threads
^hehe coo closer right here

Overall solid verse, good punches, some personal attacks, only the third bar kinda fell off. Flow was coo, vocab might be upped a little.


Pressence

talkin bout the W?,well kiddo,i suggest ya stop goin between decks
in battles his losses are automatic,so it explains the 'reflekts'
^nicely played off his name in the opener

biggest sheep of RV,ringing up both my ears with the sound "BAAH"
and i'd ussually tell newbs well-come,but HE'D probably say "AAAh"
^lmao, funny shit

beatin you is an easy win on the rec.,s' why, you desired like a cash-order
and ya verses are about as deep as where the toddlers splash water
^great wordplay in this one formed into punches

dumbass,thinkin he profound,wit hot nuetron n protons,thinkin nobody know
only reason we don't 'look up to him',cause he might 'try something below'
^hehe lmao at the last line, got me laughing man

Very nice verse here, got me laughin few times, good creativity, punches kept hitting hard, vocab was on point as well as the flow, no bad comments here!

Daubs 08-03-05 04:56 PM

Voted For: Pressence

talkin bout the W?,well kiddo,i suggest ya stop goin between decks
in battles his losses are automatic,so it explains the 'reflekts'

NICE NAMEPLAY, GOOD PUNCH.

biggest sheep of RV,ringing up both my ears with the sound "BAAH"
and i'd ussually tell newbs well-come,but HE'D probably say "AAAh"

PLAYED CONCEPT, BUT YOU FLIPPED IT NICELY, FUNNY PUNCH.

beatin you is an easy win on the rec.,s' why, you desired like a cash-order
and ya verses are about as deep as where the toddlers splash water

GOOD WORDPLAY, COMIC PUNCH AGAIN.

dumbass,thinkin he profound,wit hot nuetron n protons,thinkin nobody know
only reason we don't 'look up to him',cause he might 'try something below'

SORTA PLAYED, BUT STILL DECENT.

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like fat joe i guess u could say that you bringin it back
even the first 3 letters of ur name show that you a thing of the past(pre means before)

PRETTY DECENT NAMEPLAY ALTHO KINDA BASIC

u lucky im takin it easy..or i might take the life u livin
ya lyrics still wouldnt make sense if we took pre off the beginning*

MEH, OK NAMEPLAY.

im takin it easy on this rookie but i aint duckin attacks
the way i chop ya mouth its cool to say im cuttin you slack

ATTEMPTED WORDPLAY, BUT AM NOT FEELIN IT.

its a big gamble to wanna battle me like youre takin bets
cause your flow is only "mod"erate like youre the one makin threads

ANYONE CAN MAKETHREADS SO THIS WAS BULL.

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EZ WIN FOR PRESSENCE, HE HAD BETTER EVERYTHING.

HIS PUNCHES HIT HARD AND ACTUALLY MADE ME LAUGH A LITTLE, THERFORE HE TAKES THIS EASY.

NO HATE.

RTF IN MY SIG PLEASE.


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