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AITZ vs Kamze
Battle Rules:
8-12 lines. no d/r no crew votes no hate votes no d/r votes do ur thing.. Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-03-05 at 08:21 AM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. |
AITZ has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-03-05 07:52 AM.
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i'll have you roaming around like some snow-in-winter,
im not playin around when my flows hit you like-splinters, u can't match the skillz i throw at ur-fake-ass, keep ur day job, poppin pills n smokin-that-grass, i kill lil kids like this-wanksta-in-RV, throwin bombs at ur body when im invited to ur-party, stop now why ur not ahead, still livin at home like a baby-gettin-fed, livin in a house full of fakes, hittin u like a speedin car, with-no-brakes u aint met ur match til you step-to-me, i dont feel shit bar a scratch, now i'll just let u lay-n-bleed, unexplainable with intoxicated lyrics when i grip this mic, stoppin kamze bitch ass with no threat bar fright... |
Kamze has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-03-05 07:58 AM.
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WTF? who the hell am i battlin, with a name like AITZ..,
..wit a name like that,join the looney toons, and be one of bug bunnys matez, I only been on RV for a month, but, i'm already to advanced to be battlin you, My punches hit so hard, they'll make you jump around.............. .................................................. ........... like a 'kangaroo', You asked for people wit under 200 posts, But now i rapped, now you got nuttin to say, I left u speechless, wit writers block, you were left like Craig david...... 'walking away', 'www.rapchat.xpt.net', you say that's where you rep, then why is your ass here, I remember seeing you on a show, i think it was called,..... 'how to dress them queers', This battle will be real easy, evryone gonna vote for me, and that's witout a doubt, AITZ why don't you be yourself,at least then you know you changed forum's,....... .................................................. ...................... CUZ YOU A SELL OUT, |
WTF? who the hell am i battlin, with a name like 'AITZ'..,
..wit a name like that,join the looney toons, and be one of 'bug bunnys' matez, I only been on RV for a month, but, i'm already to advanced to be battlin you, My punches hit so hard, they'll make you jump around.............. .................................................. ........... like a 'kangaroo', You asked for people wit under '200' posts, But now i rapped, now you got nuttin to say, I left u speechless, wit writers block, you were left like 'Craig david'...... 'walking away', 'www.rapchat.xpt.net', you say that's where you rep, then why is your ass here, I remember seeing you on a show, i think it was called,..... 'how to dress them queers', This battle will be real easy, evryone gonna vote for me, and that's witout a doubt, AITZ why don't you be yourself,at least then you know you changed forum's,....... .................................................. ...................... 'CUZ YOU A SELL OUT', 4th line - he from austrlia so he'll be bouncin around like a kangaroo 5th line - he only wanted to battle people wit under 200 posts 6th line - craig david had a song called 'walking away' 7th line - In his signiture he says he reps www.rapchat.xpt.net |
good "verse" dude, lol..yo we uppin 4 votes ppl
o and my name..stands 4 australia's imp thats zinc take that into ur chops dude... uppin 4 votes |
dude wtf? why did you drop ur fuckin wack verse in twice 4?
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Yo, c'mon peeps you gotta vote, so we can decide a winner. You vote in our battle we'll vote in yours it's only fair.
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^^^true that, give us some votes n we will re-turn the vote on ur battles..
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Yup, so c'mon if you want votes on your battles, vpte in our battle. C'MON VOTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Ay yo, is anyone gonna vote in this battle anytime soon. C'mon VOTE NOW!!!!
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Ay yo, why ain't anyone voting. C'mon someone vote, this thing been open for 4 hours. So vote now now now now!!!
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C'mon peeps, you gotta vote in here, and i'll vote in your battles, so c'mon vote.
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This was feedback posted for Kamze
Hahaha
My punches hit so hard, they'll make you jump around.............. .................................................. ........... like a 'kangaroo', You asked for people wit under '200' posts, But now i rapped, now you got nuttin to say, I left u speechless, wit writers block, you were left like 'Craig david'...... 'walking away', 'www.rapchat.xpt.net', you say that's where you rep, then why is your ass here, I remember seeing you on a show, i think it was called,..... 'how to dress them queers', ^funny ish man. props. you had decent multis aitz |
Voted For: Kamze
Kamze took this pretty easy with some simple punches with decent concepts. AITZ didn't have any punches that really hit hard, yet his concepts were ok if they'd been flipped properly to hit Kamze. So yeah, vote for Kamze for better verse overall. |
lol' aiight we uppin 4 some more votes now ya'll
ill check out ur battles n place a vote on em' Daubs |
Yo, any more votes cummin in, we need votes to settle it c'mon votes votes!!!!
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Voted For: Kamze
aitz-meh verse nuttin special no real hard hitting punches or personals and in a couple of spots it didnt make sense and ur flow fell off as well keep elevatin mayne kamze-ok verse better then ur opponents i feel in every catagory u had better punches none were great but ok personals need work flow was aight and this verse was interesting to read and kinda funny at that with the how to dress them queers line was funny ok battle but vote is for kamze for better verse overall |
Voted For: AITZ
This battle was close in my opinion. I would have to give flow to aitz because of his structure,it made it easier yo pick up on Kamze had some nice punches(especially the kangaroo one) but i felt aitz were better. AITZ got Kamze on personals I believe |
aiight nice to hear, but we uppin 4 more votes, lets put this battle away,
uppin 4 votes yall |
safe,
hit my sig up if you feel like it fam^. . |
Voted For: Kamze
ok even though Kamze had a messed up structure he took this battle with better punches, AITZ u need to really step ya punch game up cuz it will help a lot, and ur flow too, Kamze u need a tiny bit of flow work too but this is a lil one sided cuz Kam hit hard V/Kamze for harder punches and a lil bit of better flow |
Yo, thanks for the votes. uppin for more votes.c'mon votes!!!!!!!!!
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yo, we uppin for more votes. c'mon we need some votes. c'mon i'll RTF!!!!
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Rife1, ill work on my punch's dude, yo yall we uppin 4 votes ppl
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Voted For: Kamze
Yo kamze got this one real easy he had all decent and funny punches, they hit hard....aitz yo man that had punches but rlly didnt hit hard enuf man.....really wasnt too great....elevate man....rhymes were toooo BASIC..... Kamze - 7/10 Aitz - 5/10 Kamze: Best: WTF? who the hell am i battlin, with a name like 'AITZ'.., ..wit a name like that,join the looney toons, and be one of 'bug bunnys' matez, I only been on RV for a month, but, i'm already to advanced to be battlin you, My punches hit so hard, they'll make you jump around.............. .................................................. ........... like a 'kangaroo', Worst: 'www.rapchat.xpt.net', you say that's where you rep, then why is your ass here, I remember seeing you on a show, i think it was called,..... 'how to dress them queers', Aitz: Best: i'll have you roaming around like some snow-in-winter, im not playin around when my flows hit you like-splinters, Worst: u can't match the skillz i throw at ur-fake-ass, keep ur day job, poppin pills n smokin-that-grass, LEAVE FEED ON MY BATTLE WITH LAWLESS: http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=199248 IF NOT THIS VOTE WILL BE REMOVED |
Ay yo, we uppin for more votes. C'mon votes!!!!!!i'll RTF!!!
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Voted For: AITZ
aitz i give you the win becuz it was raw punches wit good hits on it....liked the structure better, kamze reason why i didnt vot for you becuz you simply had to explain all of ur rhymes and they just werent raw....no hate just stating my opinion RTF please v/aitz |
Voted For: Kamze
WTF? who the hell am i battlin, with a name like 'AITZ'.., ..wit a name like that,join the looney toons, and be one of 'bug bunnys' matez, ^^weak....AITZ...not much of a looney tunes name I only been on RV for a month, but, i'm already to advanced to be battlin you, My punches hit so hard, they'll make you jump around.............. .................................................. ........... like a 'kangaroo', ^^meh...ight...but didn't like the set-up for punch You asked for people wit under '200' posts, But now i rapped, now you got nuttin to say, I left u speechless, wit writers block, you were left like 'Craig david'...... 'walking away', ^^played and again...wasn't feelin set-up line 'www.rapchat.xpt.net', you say that's where you rep, then why is your ass here, I remember seeing you on a show, i think it was called,..... 'how to dress them queers', ^^meh....weak This battle will be real easy, evryone gonna vote for me, and that's witout a doubt, AITZ why don't you be yourself,at least then you know you changed forum's,....... .................................................. ...................... 'CUZ YOU A SELL OUT', ^^changing web-sites makes him a sell-out? Ok...structure was bad.Flow was ight.But punches sucked.VEry uncreative and there were some played lines.1st bar....wat does looney tunes have to do with his name AITZ?2nd bar was an attempted personal...but if failed.It's all about wordplay and metaphors here. i'll have you roaming around like some snow-in-winter, im not playin around when my flows hit you like-splinters, ^^basic multi...no punch u can't match the skillz i throw at ur-fake-ass, keep ur day job, poppin pills n smokin-that-grass, ^^No punch... i kill lil kids like this-wanksta-in-RV, throwin bombs at ur body when im invited to ur-party, stop now why ur not ahead, still livin at home like a baby-gettin-fed, ^^A punch for once...but weak as fuck livin in a house full of fakes, hittin u like a speedin car, with-no-brakes u aint met ur match til you step-to-me, i dont feel shit bar a scratch, now i'll just let u lay-n-bleed, ^^No punch.... unexplainable with intoxicated lyrics when i grip this mic, stoppin kamze bitch ass with no threat bar fright... ^^NO punch Ok...seems to me you focusing too much on flow.You had no multis...but a lot of internals.But i was waiting and waiting for you to throw a punch.You were just talking a blah-blah thing.Only punch i saw was the baby-fed one and that was weak.Work on using wordplay and metas. Vote-Kamze RTF http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=203166 |
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